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By : Sparrowhawk

From ANON - maen chavarria on May 02, 2014
id like an update on this story if possible because I have enjoyed I so much id like to keep reading and see were the story may end lol but thank you for writing it and giving me something to read when I became very bored with other story's I was reading weren't as on edged as this one it kept me on my topes if you will but I will keep my eyes out for this update in my email
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From ANON - Shelly_Webster on April 24, 2014
Whoa! An update! Here I was losing my hope in one of my favourite stories ever continuing, and yet you delivered! Thank You so much. By the way, I absolutely adore Suzu, he's such an impossible flirt. I'd very much like to read how You deal with the rest of this story, because there are some very intriguing plot twists here.
Cheers!

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From arianauchiha23451 on April 11, 2014
awesome story..... it is hard to find a story that can keep my attention but this one really kept it.... i was on the edge of my seat with what has happening to poor InuYasha..... please hurry and update as soon as you can and i would like to be added to the email list for this story..... my email address is cherryblossomlover24@hotmail.com.... once again a very awesome story
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From Kit-kit on March 12, 2014
Can't wait to read more
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From nchsmi on March 05, 2014
That was an awesome explaination of what triggers InuYasha's demon! The necklace being the catalast in making InuYasha'a demon more dangerous, that was an excellent idea. Kagome...I so can't wait for them to get rid of her silly ass! What makes her think that those damn lepard demons will keep there part of the bargain. She's dumber than dirt! And, Kouga is just a fool! She's making such a fool of him, it's a shame.
Excellent chapter! It was well worth the wait! Thanks!

B reading U!

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From Arbutus1226 on February 28, 2014
LOVE IT!!!! I want Sesshy to kill someone, not Kags poor stupid girly is a pawn.
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From AidaLily on February 26, 2014
First, I would like to say that I am glad you are feeling much better. Second... Don't question my sanity! lol. Granted if you are questioning it, that just proves how much I love your story. And fine.. *huffs and hands back Suzu* I'm stealing him back at the end of the chapter.

Now for the chapter:

I read Suzu... and his assets making up for lost time... and then... wait... Shippo?!?!?! I see. It seems like I will have to employ different tactics now. *rubs hands together evilly and then coughs* I like that Shippo is maturing as many stories don't have him maturing so much. I know it will take time for him to truly come into himself, but at least Rin has been quite helpful in that regard for the meal at the beginning though I am pretty sure Suzu's flirting did not help. I'd call on Suzu if I needed him quite happily I may add but I am pretty sure based on all my previous reviews that you know that. LOL.. stop questioning my sanity. I will admit it is a bit surprising if you put them together but not a bad thing. I am used to people putting Shippo with Rin and so I am interested in what you do with that. You will also have a long review when the first Suzu lemon comes up as well. >.> He is such an addictive character I'm almost sad to say I like him better than the canon characters you are using.

Kagome really needs to be dealt with. I would hate for her to cause Inuyasha anymore problems. Maybe Shippo should kill her. I know. I know. I can't just kill off people I don't like. *pouts* Still, I feel as though it would be something more final and satisfying in a way. Inuyasha could kill her, but I think either him or Kouga would have so much guilt for allowing her to get as bad and not noticing when she changed. Based on Inuyasha in the story thus far, I think it would break him even as he becomes stronger mentally. He's been through so much and that might push him past the point he should be at because of how long they've known each other. It is like a child, in a sense, killing his mother because he didn't go to get his mother the help he needed or a person upset for not helping their friend before committing suicide. It might be better for him to heal if someone else does end up killing her and he just needs to grieve for her loss instead of having her blood on his hands. When it comes to Kouga, I think he will feel heartbroken and not lead his own pack as well if he kills her. He would be correcting a mistake he made in trusting her but as he seems quite in love with her, I think it would break him more and I'm not sure who you could have put back Kouga's pieces because Rin would be odd and definitely different based on what I read at least which isn't many Kouga/Rin stories.

I think another way should be for Inuyasha to break free of it. Perhaps Kagome's untimely death could free him or something because she probably isn't going to take those beads off without a lot of persuasion and I think it would continue to break down Inuyasha's progress towards getting better. It would be a definite setback with him at this point. He was doing so well with Sesshomaru but it is understandable that he would shrink away. Many victims of such abuse have set backs when it comes to intimacy.

Dammit... Kagome freed the tongueless little *goes on a rant filled with explicatives*. I really hope they find and kill them. Kagome is making me hate her more and more. Seriously... just... OH! Maybe she could attack Suzu and Shippo kills her before she can hurt the sexy little peacock demon. He can just rip her to shreds and explain to Inuyasha why though I am sure Inuyasha might understand if she had actually hurt Suzu and they could explain it as Shippo protecting a submissive he wanted or something like that. Just you know.. 'off with her head'. Now Lady Kumiko, Inuyasha should kill but after killing her husband.

Michio should continue laying low for now as Kagome is a more immediate threat.

I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! And until then... *sneaks away with Suzu tied up in a bag* :)

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From ANON - Elken on February 25, 2014
I am glad to see you keep on writing the story. So far I like it very much and I'd love to read more.
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From ANON - SesshomaruFreak on February 23, 2014
Absolutely LOVED your story! It was beautiful and exciting. They really do belong together, and from everything Sesshomaru said at the end, it sounds like he does love Inuyasha. He just doesn't realize it. It was an amazing story and I love Sesshy/Yashy pairings. I would like to see how things progressed beyond the end, but at least it didn't just cut off out of nowhere. (a lot of fanfics do) Very well done and keep writing!
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From ANON - Arlena on February 13, 2014
LOVE IT!!!!
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From ANON - elspethsheyna on December 29, 2013
I just read through AHtO for the first time and I absolutely loved it. You've so realistically developed the characters and their relationships through the 22 chapters you have posted.
Especially Inuyasha and Sesshoumarus, and their reactions to what has happened. I can't wait until you update again and hope that it won't be too long of a wait.
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From ANON - cattib on December 13, 2013
I am very familiar with depression and anxiety. I have battled it for years. Counseling is very helpful as well as finding the right medications to help you through but I have also found that writing is very cathartic and therapeutic. Give yourself some time but I believe that continuing your writing will be a great stress reliever and a balm to your emotions. May you find peace and happiness. You have a great support system in your followers of your stories. I am sure if you need to rant and rave they will be more than happy to listen. You have my email address you can talk to me any time. Love and peace...catti
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From nchsmi on December 08, 2013
Goodness! I for one am sorry that you've been going through such a hard time. I hope that your recovery goes well, and that you'll be able to see your way clearly again. Take care of yourself, and don't worry about finishing your story just yet. You only have 1 you, so that is your main priority! When you do post again, we will all be here!

B reading U!
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From ANON - merely truth on July 19, 2013
Hello ! What's going on with your story ?? And you, are you well ?
Hope you'll finish it !!
Thank you for your story,

A french mother
Merely Truth
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From nchsmi on July 02, 2013
OMG...It's been forever! Please comeback and post a new chapter for this story! I've been re reading this story over and over again. I'm dying here!

B reading U!
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