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By : Sparrowhawk

From welldisguisedfreak on May 19, 2013
wow, just wow. i stumbled upon this story and i am so very happy that i did!
i just love your characters and their personal stories, i think you portray the original characters superbly, with the right amount of 'them' and the right amount of oc ness
as for your own characters i love them as much as i do Inuyasha and Seshy. Suzu is just so....so...one of a kind and cheeky, i love him to bits. Fuyuki is so darn cute...i want one. Bishomen is honorable and caring to the max and is a good match to Fuyuki. though i will admit at first i was hoping for some Suzu and his kitty but i am super glad it turned out the way it did. i do wonder who is going to be worthy enough to handle the cheeky bird though and can't wait to find out!. same with Shippo i can't wait to see how he develops and who he chooses.
as for the brothers i love how they are developing and how inuyasha is recovering and slowly accepting everything his brother has to offer. especially his proposal *skwee* >w
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From Arbutus1226 on March 20, 2013
omg i love this cant wait for a preg inuyasha, and that demoness got what she deserved they should be thankful for inuyasha
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From RukiRomance on October 10, 2012
UWAH!!! SUGOI!!!
Wow! I absolutely LOVE THIS! It's so unique in so many ways that I am anxious to see exactly where this is going~!

Your story has infiltrated my soul! I will endeavor to read this til the end. Keep up the amazing work. I eagerly await your next update! (^-^)/

Much Love and Support,
RukiRomance ♥
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From AidaLily on October 07, 2012
A quicker chapter post? *is in love* :)

Now to dissect the chapter into a long review that may or may not make you question my sanity.

It was both sad and sweet the way Fuyuki stayed like that even though he was in so much pain. It was nice of Bishamon to get him off and then cute when Bishamon said that his punishment was over. Fuyuki was so adorable when he mentioned the other was "unexpectedly perverted" though I have to agree Bishamon didn't seem like the type to be so... well perverted. lol. I love the confessions to each other and the hot scene following it

and then...

Suzu! *glomps* Such a cute little eavesdropping pervert... well sort of since the rooms are soundproof. I still love Suzu. *looks around and steals Suzu away*

*cough cough*

Now Inuyasha's little outburst was amusing and I like the bit of secrecy in with Suzu mouthing words and Inuyasha smiling. It is nice that they are slowly becoming friends as well. It was nice to see more of Inuyasha's caring nature when he asked Suzu questions about going to the event alone. It shows a lot of growing up and maturing that Inuyasha is doing and I think it shows that he is trying more to work past his issues and recognizing a bit more of himself.

I think Saniiro should be killed. That is just me. Or that he should be in trouble and Inuyasha just happen to ignore it. I like that Inuyasha showed even more of his previous self and while I have no wish for him to return to acting like ... what did Sessh call Suzu.. an 'ill-mannered degenerate', I do love the showings of his former attitude.

I think the punishment Sesshomaru said was way too nice. He said that and in my head I was yelling "off with their heads" over and over. I hope the other demon nobility will come around eventually. Rei... very beautifully stated words and thanks to your little scene with Fuyuki... I've imagined you in an equally sexy (or hotter) scene with Suzu. Suzu throwing the glass when Rei's father was insulting Inuyasha was hilarious.

I love Inuyasha telling Kumiko off so much that I re-read the part several times. It was nice to Inuyasha standing up for himself even if he did just rip out her tongue. I'd feel bad for her, but he warned her that he would do it. Even though I am sure Inuyasha still has memories of what had happened to him, the fact that he was able to stand up for himself, assert himself, and then speak with such eloquence afterwards showed a lot of maturity and well I do love Inuyasha getting better and coming to terms with everything.

The hunting trip was amazing. I admit to having the same reaction as Inuyasha to Sesshomaru saying he doesn't love him, but then describing how he feels like that. I mean to me it sounded like he said he loved him but didn't quite say love. However, before that Inuyasha was right to bite him, seriously Sesshomaru could have given him time to think considering everything that Inuyasha has been through and Sessh should've known Inuyasha doesn't think as fast as he does at times.

It was soooooo cute when they finally kissed after Inuyasha accepted. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Fuyuki and Bishamon finally seem to have worked out their problems. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have finally shared a kiss. And I am kidnapping Suzu. All is fine for now.

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From ANON - midnightsscream on October 04, 2012
awhhhh. this was such a great chapter. Inuyasha ripped out her tongue! Go him and I think that may definitely earn him some respect with the other demons. I really liked the hunting scene and as I've said before I love those animal behaviors you give them that slips so easily into their personalities and makes the story better for it. Awh. Sesshomaru propose too. He can be a real romantic when he wants to be. can't wait for the next update! ^^
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From ANON - Merely Truth on October 03, 2012
Exactly what I expected ! So nice ! But it's so long before they will have physic contacts. . .
Thank you for your story.

Your french reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth
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From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2012
Awww, they are so cute together. I quite like the vicious Inuyasha. He deserves to serve out a little payback. I wonder if Sesshoumaru could train Inuyasha and help him gain his strength back faster if he draws Inuyasha's youki out during that time. I feel as though Inuyasha won't fully get over his trauma unless he faces those who hurt him and defeats them, but that feels a ways off. As always, can't wait for the next update.
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From kyoko8yeo on October 02, 2012
Wohooo!!!! Finally! Finally Inuyasha agree to become his mate and kiss Sessh... heheheh
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From ANON - Clearly on October 02, 2012
I'm definetly sure that inuyasha speaks with a new york irish immagrint accent from the 1800's.
Udder than that waiting for updates has a wanning effect on the hurry up side.
Good Story!!
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From AidaLily on September 25, 2012
Well... another lovely chapter that I absolutely loved to read. Where to start... the beginning? Why yes, yes that is a good idea.

At the beginning, my feelings were in fact those of Bishamon needs to get over himself. I mean I understood his reasoning, but Suzu was right and the other was not a child. It was a bit upsetting at this point because it is obvious that neither of them understood the other and it was easy to feel for both of them. I kind of like how ashamed Bishamon felt when Suzu went from mildly flirtatious to serious. Ah Suzu.. even small parts make me want to.. *coughs a few times*.

Back to the story... I love how Bishamon had comforted Suzu. I felt it was a very powerful and beautifully done moment with them to show their friendship. Once again I wanted to hug Suzu and tell him everything would be ok. He is a very easy to relate to and feel for, to me at least. I like the fatherly role Sesshomaru seems to adopt around Fuyuki as well even though he merely offered his advice on the matter. It was heartwarming.

Now as for Lord Botanmaru and his wife. I was sooooo hoping that Sesshomaru would just slice their heads off. How dare they make Inuyasha feel all worthless and the like. The cute scene where Inuyasha was being all mother like to the younger ones was adorable and I was happy Sesshomaru was impressed and complimented Inuyasha. I love the dual evil parenting skills.

However, come the lunch I believe it was I really hated Lord Botanmaru and his wife more. If I was Sesshomaru, I would have probably broken character and told her "Regardless of my brother being a half demon, he is still royalty of two not one, but two lands, he is my intended which is not changing, and I damn sure would not be leaving him for someone who looks like they throw up and then call it clothes! At least my brother has better fashion sense than some simpering good for nothing tactless so called--" Inuyasha would have stepped in then probably with so much pride he forgot himself momentarily to give Sesshomaru a mind blowing kiss. And when they attacked Inuyasha, Sesshomaru should have killed them and then somehow made it up to Inuyasha saying it was his instinct to protect him.

Fuyuki... well... I will admit to um... partially imagining him all over Rei like that. It was rather hot even though Suzu is such a little instigator but I still love him. I had to admit I felt really bad and wanted to cry for Fuyuki at the end of it. I mean, he had just wanted attention and because he couldn't wait or understand or let the other apologize to him properly. And as horrible as it may sound it almost seemed like he raped Fuyuki, now obviously his demon just took over and he wasn't really in control of it, but it did feel that way. I mean I know Fuyuki was wrong and yet it was just like... "noooo don't hurt him". It was a rather hot sexy scene though and then I wanted to cry at the end.

My poor poor emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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From ANON - Merely Truth on September 09, 2012
Well done ! I can't imagine how Bishamon will feel about himself after he realizes what he has done.....
Thank you for your story !

A french mother,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth
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From Vyper on September 08, 2012
I love this story. Please update soon!
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From RoseWolf on September 07, 2012
oh yay! im so glad fuyuki is mated now XD and poor inuyasha!!! those assholes were so mean!
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From AidaLily on July 13, 2012
I loved the chapter. It was nice and cute the way Inuyasha asked if Sesshomaru was proposing towards the end. I am worried about Suzu having to train Inuyasha in the things that Sesshomaru wants him trained in. I wanted to smack Sesshomaru across the face for asking something like that of sweet little Suzu, I mean really, he should have known better. *kicks Sesshomaru in a very private place and nods* Much better. Now...

I was reading the chapter and then... "Scoffing, Inuyasha dragged the smaller bird youkai back to his bed and pushed him down onto it...". I will like to inform you that my mind went straight to very very naughty places and barely recovered as I kept reading before...

"Suzu touched the hanyou�s mouth to stop him from rambling some more and, moving his fingers down to grasp his chin, lightly pressed their lips together in a chaste kiss."

Then my mind died and claimed you like to torture me since while I know what actually happened in the story -- there was some Inuyasha/Suzu smexiness going on in my head. This is completely your fault and I hope you will take responsibility for your actions. I mean for a few minutes I was like "Sesshomaru who?" and finally I came to my senses... somewhat. LOL.

I love Suzu so much and this chapter made me want to hug him. Those memories were just terrible and the fact that he had to suffer through all of that was just... heartbreaking. *hugs Suzu* He just makes you want to tell him that it will all be ok and to hold him tightly before you eventually decide to jump him and make him scream to high heaven. Nothing like having it all in one package. *giggles* Can't wait for the next chapter.

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From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2012
Love that last chappie. I really enjoyed them all. I wish there was a way to let readers know when you update.
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