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Reviews for A Heat to Overcome

By : Sparrowhawk

From RoseWolf on July 10, 2012
this chapter was so cute! i loved learning more about Yuzu's background! but i also cant WAIT to read about inuyasha's heat! but im glad you letting the story slowly progress, it flows much smoother that way.
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From Vyper on July 10, 2012
I am glad that Suzu is alive and that the scars are gone. He deserves happiness as does Inuyasha. I hope that they find it soon.
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From AidaLily on July 01, 2012
You are more than welcome to use anything I suggest to you in the reviews. So yes those exact lines or something similar and the name and anything else you are more than welcome to use.

Suggestions? Kill Kagome? Lol.

No I was just thinking it would be hilarious if by some strange chance of fate both her and Michio were bound to one another and couldn�t do anything against each other. Like with beads but both her and Michio both have them and the only one who could remove them would be Suzu who would never remove them.

It was cute seeing jealous Sesshomaru but even cuter seeing how jealous Inuyasha got in regards to Suzu�s flirting�. And speaking of Suzu�.
*sniffles* Why did you make him commit suicide? I mean I am sure you are going to bring him back, but seriously� that didn�t stop me from screaming �No! Suzu� why� nooooo.�

Love the chapter and can�t wait for the next one� since I want Suzu back lol.

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From Midnightsscream on June 30, 2012
Not cool Suzu not cool. I adore that silly little peacock though. I must admit I still get SUPER happy with the grooming dog-like affections they do like the ear biting and the whining. Just so unique and awesome!!!!!!!!!!! SQUEE! I hope you do indeed update this upcoming saturday so excited to read the next chapter! :D
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From cocobyrd87 on June 04, 2012
I wasn't able to review until now since I join the site. I love the story! Will they be able to figure out what was done to Kagome? I'd like to see Inuyasha come to Sesshoumaru's aid, but at the same time just for Sesshoumaru to figure it out and just kill her already. Can't wait to the next chapter1
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From Lina03 on May 29, 2012
great story with good details and an actual plot, I love it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! =)
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From Pumpkinpi on May 27, 2012
Love it so far, look forward to more!!!
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From AidaLily on May 21, 2012
If I was Sesshomaru, she wouldn't have lived that long. However, I liked seeing Sesshomaru jealous and protecting. The part with the demon in Inuyasha's mind feeling trapped was both sad and beautiful to read. Sad because it wasn't free and beautiful the way it interact with Sesshomaru still seeking his approval even though he was hurt and felt betrayed. It was also beautifully sad how the demon within Inuyasha had been calling out for Sesshomaru for years. I loved it.

Who should you put Suzu with? Perhaps another OC (ME) named Akira (Male ME) with black hair (ME) slightly older (ME) a bit wiser (ME) kind of tall (I'm not.. but we will say it's me) maybe a warrior or something (still me) a youkai type you decide (..hint.. it will still be me...). Yep yep. I think that is perfect for Suzu. I would say that I am bit sad that Suzu wasn't in this chapter, however, I may or may not have kidnapped him. XD jk jk.

Besides the serious vote of ME for Suzu, I am not sure who you could put him with. He is a complex character with different emotions that make it easy to fall in love with him. Perhaps someone who can see past his obvious defense mechanisms of sexual teasing and the like. Someone who can see the real Suzu and is interested in him for him not just a great looking mate. Compassionate and caring and not afraid to try and break through the barriers like...for example...

-Suzu went over to the other youkai in his usual teasing manner. His body language enticing and his eyes displaying a hint of mischief in them as he sat on the new general's lap. "You look like you are dying for some fun.", whispers and leans in a bit licking his lips.
The other youkai looked at him. "No... I am not in need of fun though I do wonder why someone so beautiful hides who they really are. I know its necessary for battle, but is it really necessary around friends?", he said and looked more at Suzu. "Definitely exceptionally beautiful and yet the sadness hidden in your eyes makes me want to know how I can erase it."-

Sorry for butchering Suzu's personality somewhat, but I do think something like that would be great for Suzu. Someone who will try to pull him out of his shell but not force him out of it. Calm and sincere with the goal of mating Suzu and treating him with all the love and respect someone would have for their mate. That's just me though. >.> I am weird.

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From Vyper on May 21, 2012
I thought you were never going to update! Thanks for that last chapter although I would still like Kagome six feet under. I don't trust her at all. I want Inuyasha safe and happy in Sess's arms. He needs his big brother's love so much and I want to see him get it. I also want to see the two of them get it on, but I know that takes time especially with all that Inuyasha has been through.
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From Midnightsscream on May 19, 2012
I just adore this story. I really like how Inuyasha and Sesshomaru interact. I feel like it's pretty realistic. I really wish Kagome would cooperate. It will really hurt Inuyasha if she can't cope. Can't wait to see what happens next! :) Oh, I loved the grooming scene by the way. very unique and touching
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From Madamdragon on May 19, 2012
I love it when Sesshy is so possessive. HOpe more is to come soon please.
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From nchsmi on April 24, 2012
OMG...This was great! I hadn't read Chapters 16 & 17 until now, and they are frickin' AWESOME!!! I just love Shiro and Sho! Sho is really bad ass! The way he dealt with Kagome; DAMN!!! He was the bomb! Fuyuki is way too cute! I think Bishamon would be a perfect mate for little Yuki, he'd be an awesome alpha, lover, and protector. You can see just how much he cares for the little guy. I feel bad for Kouga, though. He needs to just cut his losses. Kagome is damaged goods! I hopes Sesshomaru rips those beads from InuYasha's neck, throws her down the damn well, and have his palace wizards seal the well forever!!! I can't wait until chapter 18 is out. It should be most excellent to read the next stage of intimacy between the 2 brothers. Since Sessho finally got InuYasha to bathe with him, I wonder what the next step will be?

Until next time...

B reading U!
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From darkaura204 on February 13, 2012
This story is getting interesting. update soon.
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From AidaLily on February 09, 2012
*was too busy drooling, staring and imagining herself as an alpha male demon mated to Suzu to read the rest of the chapter* >.> just joking.

First I would like to say we think the same when it comes to characters. I am a firm believer that there are more layers and sides than shown in a thirty minute anime. :)

I like how Inuyasha is slowly but surely coming to trust Sesshomaru more and feels comfortable slightly with the fact that they will be mates and slowly but surely accepting Sesshomaru's touch showing that he is healing. Honestly though if I was Sesshomaru in this chapter I would have smacked Kagome or something, but its nice to see him still restraining himself for Inuyasha's sake.. I think Inu should kill her. I was a bit intrigued at the mention of Shippo soon entering his first heat and was curious if you had planned to put him with anyone. I am a weird Kouga/Shippo fangirl and when I finish my story I will put it up eventually.. I'm lazy. XD However, I am a bit curious to see what you will do with that.

Shiro and Sho have a very... interesting bedroom life. I wouldn't mind reading the scene of that. lol.

And I am still marrying Suzu. Yeah.. thats right.. you wont stop me. *giggles* I can't wait to read more about him when it comes up. He makes me smile whether he is in the chapter for two lines or a whole segment. *hugs Suzu smiling*
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From starchilds on February 08, 2012
I just love Suzu! Poor Inuyasha, Suzu turns his face beet red every time. But It Is SOOO sweet to see Inuyasha embarrassed by compliments. Sesshomaru is much more than just a security blanket to Inuyasha. It is going to time for him to sort out his feelings. Shiro and Sho are a very interesting pair. They remind me somewhat of Miroku. Kagome needs to shut up, but in all honesty her reactions are being amplified by the snake's control. One way or another Kouga is going to get Tamae to see Kagome. Inuyasha was the most at ease around Miroku and Sango. You had to end the chapter in the middle of the bath scene, how cruel. Looking forward to the next chapter!! Thanks, Starchilds

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