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By : BlueLinx

From LadyRin on January 10, 2019
Write more soon please.

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From BlueDragon on May 19, 2012
I like where this is going, but I'm so confused! It feels like the first confusing moments of a complex movie before everything is revealed, but then it looks like you haven't updated in almost a year. So, I'm stuck in this spiral of "what the hell is going on!?" Hope you update soon, now that summer is here, so we can all understand lol. Intriguing start!
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From lara5170 on August 13, 2011
Will you continue this story soon? If you don't finish writing it here,will you be writing it on another site? I really like this story ,I like,desperately want to read it & I have a few questions,Is there anyway to get answers or information on this story ???
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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From kanibaby on June 25, 2011
hehe i really like your story and i hope you revie soon lol its very intresting and sounds like its going to be a good one

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From MidNighFlower on June 18, 2011
Didn't expect that.....so Sesshomaru has another mate somewhere???
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From MidNighFlower on June 18, 2011
Sheeze poor Kagome....lol
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From MidNighFlower on June 18, 2011
I think this is the first FF that I've read that has inuyasha going to hell with Kikyou.......its a nice twist

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From MidNighFlower on June 18, 2011
hmm very interesting...
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From lara5170 on June 12, 2011
Now I have a theory.I love this story.I really am looking forward to reading more.I'm just put off by Kagome being made to look like a weak human female,I see her as powerful & beautiful.It bothers me that Sessh marked Kags as Mate(Inuyoko made it a joke,telling him 4X,get to know his new Mate) & if he thinks as he marked her as his Mate,she HAS to help him find HIS female because some youkai put a ring on her.She should tell him hey you don't want me to be your Mate,go find your own breeder & I'll find a real youkai to Mate me & remove your mark.I pray she sees they need her,she doesn't need them & she may have low self confidence but she deserves more& to be treated better.Sessh is too stupid to see she's the only female that will be able to birth him super powerful youkai pups.I really hope he's either confronted by someone & told you can't have 2 mates as Inu youkai & this was your fathers crime.I would think the 2 worst things you could do to your mate or wife is to cheat on her or kill her.I'm hoping that as Kagome is aware that by him marking her she is considered his Mate for life,he doesn't want her at all & is using her & as he's trying desperately to find a female to breed with,she needs to get away from him.1st Inu wouldn't come straight out & tell her what he felt for her,but he also chased every male away from her. She came with Sessh to help look out for Rin,who doesn't need her.Instead of finding a fresh start,she's gone from being used by Inu as a shard detector to being used by him for worse-a breeder detector. I hope she immediately starts looking for away to get his mark removed(hopefully she's still a virgin & that will help her) & that although he sees her as a 'lowly human',but, whether the Jewel is in her,she is more than she appears or he starts to see that other powerful youkai & such see her as a being of immense power &(or purity) something special

Sessh will see from their bond what she's suffered & feel that he is putting her through terrible pain. I hope that he starts to see there's a reason that the Sun Dog Tribe wanted him to Mate her was Now, what I can't figure out is if the prophecy that Inuyoko feels that will allow Sessh to bring back their tribe,is actually 2 parts. When I read over the info we were given & include it with the knowledge of what & it involves him taking Kagome as his Mate.I wish I knew if part of the prophecy & the problem,is that Sessh was younger at the time & in his resentment of Inuyasha,is stuck on the fact that it was a 'Human' female his Sire used to cheat but to the Sun Dog Tribe it didn't matter that she was human or youkai it was that his sire had a 'Mate,for Life'(that was Inuyoko's words). I thought she was trying to tell Sessh that his Sire' crime was that he cheated on a life Mate & it was dishonorable. Sessh has made Kagome his Mate & is committing his Sire's crime.

Then,he marks Kagome,treats her like crap & expects her to allow him to treat her like crap & help him while he treats her like crap?? How could Sessh,after being angered at his father for Mating one female & then dishonoring her by turning around & breeding with a different

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From lara5170 on June 12, 2011
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I find this story fascinating & confusing.I really like it,I just feel lost..I'm sorry if I'm missing something. In ch1 most of what the old crone told Sessh -A human mate you take,a Dog of the Sun you'll breed.(I copied most of what the old crone said to Sessh,in ch.1,about the prophecy & how the Runes don't lie & put them at the end of this review) If Sessh is so smart,how is it that he seems so stupid? When I read this before I thought it explained that his father' crime against the Sun Dog Tribe was by taking a female of their tribe as his 'Mate,for Life'(The old crone at the end of this chapter 4 said that to Kags when she showed up) That 1st,by cheating on her,he dishonored his Mate.Then when he brought his mistress into their home pregnant with his child, at that point he no only dishonored his Mate but,he dishonored/disgraced her tribe & that was his Ultimate unforgivable crime against the Sun Dog Tribe but,I don't see that here. I also had a feeling that in ch.1 when the crone told him about his 'She ,she told him -she's human,not of this time,you know her when you 1st laid eyes upon her,you know it now in you Ice covered hear.It seemed he was basically telling him that he's been aware of her since the 1st saw her & alot of this has to do with this stupid false hatred he has & the lessons he must learn.I can not wait for more!!!!!!

In ch.1-Sessh's is told he will father 4 heirs. He asks if his 'She' has been born? & is told �Of the world,yes.Of the time,no. The She that will bear your offspring is flourishing.� The old crone stops & says�Interesting!�she tells him�You,Sesshomaru of the West,will mate a human.�He says-�Do not spout nonsense,witch.This Sesshomaru will not take a human mate.It is beneath him.�She says-�Strong words,inu!The rune-bones do not lie,now or ever.Ai,a human you shall have,but a Dog of the Sun you shall breed.Strong pups,oh so strong!If guided properly,they could become even stronger than yourself.� Sesshomaru scoffed.�Impossible.Since this ones' father's mistake,the Moon Court & Sun Court have been at odds.They would never allow this Sesshomaru to take one of their females for a breeding partner.� The crone points at him & says-�The Moon doesn't listen to the Old! A human mate you take,a Dog of the Sun you shall breed.It is in the runes,boy.Their meaning may be lost on you,but the vessel knows.You life is about to become much more interesting,son.� He asks�When will this Sesshomaru take his she.�She replies�You knew her when you first laid eyes upon her form.You know it now in the ice heart you carry within you.When she melts it is when the Sun will shine through;she of the stormy eyes.She lingers in the forest of...a...hanyou..."

In ch.4-Mated. For life

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From sugar0o on June 08, 2011
very interesting! I cant wait to see more! would love to see this on Dokuga.com as well!
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From trish1975 on June 08, 2011
Awesome story, I love it!!!! Can't wait for the update!!
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From ladyai21 on June 07, 2011
OMG its getting good...really really good. I absolutely love the way this fic is going..keep up the goos work
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From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2011
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From lara5170 on June 06, 2011
I really need a Sessh & Kagome story..I don't know what,how,when,why or where this story is going now.I'm fraid it looks or I should say feel from Sessh's attitude that if Sessh is to realize if or whether Kags is his destiny...I could be reading 50 chaps. I've been down lately.
I hope you update soon with a little info & some hope at least
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