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Reviews for Bad Pun

By : cakeiton
  • From lara5170 on July 24, 2011
    This was great & I loved it.I also noticed that in this he marked her with his youkai & not by biting. I like to see the different types of marking in FF.
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  • From lara5170 on July 16, 2011
    Yes!!! Does this mean they are 'Mate'd & does this mean ther is no marking or biting to become mates,some writers do & some don't.I'm only asking if it matters & when he said our 1st time,he didn't mean his 1st & her 1st but,her 1st & their 1st time together,right? She couldn't be HIS 1st, right?? You are the writer,only you know.....oh man...we have to guess?
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  • From Vyper on July 15, 2011
    I liked that end. It was perfect and no word count although I am impressed with your word count chapters.
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 14, 2011
    SEQUAL!

    I don't normally read SesshoumaruXKagome fics... but this one caught my attention and held it... Bravo!
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  • From Vyper on July 13, 2011
    This is good. They are finally getting it on and Sesshoumaru is so sweet making sure to go slowly as not to hurt her too much. I cannot wait to read more.
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  • From Vyper on July 13, 2011
    Things are definately heating up. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 12, 2011
    *Screams and pounds her desk in fustration*

    DAMMIT!!! This is... oh so delightfully yummy. I got hooked.. damn...

    Yeah Kagome needs to shut her mouth and just let the poor demon fuck her senseless
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  • From Vyper on July 11, 2011
    Awsome, she is giving him head. I can see Sesshoumaru now panting and writhing in ecstasy. Now if I were in her position I would put extra pressure on his frenulum and play with his balls.
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  • From BlueDragon on July 11, 2011
    Very nice! I think my favorite part, so far, is when he said he enjoyed tearing off her underwear. That whole section was awesome, lol. Short chappies are driving me crazy, cus I want more, lol, but I understand the purpose. So, I'll forgive you lol. Great job, keep 'em coming!
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  • From Vyper on July 10, 2011
    Poor Sess is being teased to the breaking point. Hopefully soon he will flip her over and have his wicked way with her teasing her back until she can't take it anymore.
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  • From Vyper on July 08, 2011
    Gods he is so sexy. Now that the panties are no longer in the way, things should get interesting.
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  • From Vyper on July 08, 2011
    I am glad he didn't want to make love to her in the shower, but that still would have been hot. So is her underware still on or what? There has been no removal of them that I have read yet.
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  • From Vyper on July 06, 2011
    Why would he stop her! What the hell! He had better not ruin this or I will beat him with a stick!
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  • From Vyper on July 05, 2011
    Gods she is so close to just grabbing that sexy ass of his and playing with that delicious cock. Her teasing is hopefully going to get them both somewhere wonderful soon. I can't wait until he actually mounts her.
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  • From Vyper on July 04, 2011
    I wonder if Sesshoumaru will leave love trails with his claws again.
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