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From loveless on December 03, 2016
Please update I love this story and I don't know how this website work so please email me at cupidslove.ray88@gmail.com whenever u update thank u

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From ANON - etern on September 13, 2016
Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. I just found it and have loved every word of it :) The idea of the Great Trial is awesome and may possibly be my new head canon! I adore the idea!
I'm sorry to hear about what happened to you. Don't ever feel sorry about having to leave your writing to handle life's events, I hope you and your family are doing well!

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From ANON - Leiliaeli on October 15, 2015
Wow, such a great story! And it's even something "probable" for an AU!
I especially love the way you portray the characters, they're are not OoC at all!
Very sorry to read about your accident, I hope everything went more or less okay...
You are doubly awesome for thinking about your readers in such circumstances.
I am eagerly awaiting more InuSess goodness and I am very curious about how you plan to resolve the whole "Khan" plot-line.
Are they going to be their usual BAMF selves and obliterate the Mongols or are they going to have to fight tooth and ...claw? to achieve victory while suffering some heavy loses.
Is someone going to die? When are Inuyasha and Sessomaru going to start developing more "Romantic" feelings for each other? (I want to read some Inucest fluffy goodness! :D)
I can't wait for the next chapter and I sincerely hope you won't put this story on Hiatus. It's one of the few "good" Inuyasha fanfics I've been able to find so far!
Leiliaeli
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From ANON - SP777 on August 31, 2015
about #17...

I honestly don't remember this story being in this section. O_o
Tho' it has been a few years since I've been back here, but it does seem
familiar.

Well I'm enjoying it so far, really enjoying the tentative relationship between
Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru. The thing that gave me pause in the beginning was giving
Sesshoumaru a tail, I mean I know he's a dog demon, but he also resides in a humanoid
aristocratic form..no tail to attach there. Other than that, I like the fact you included
certain mannerisms an Inu has, despite being in humanoid form and that's the ''need to howl''.

Anyway, you take care of yourself & looking forward to the end.
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From Vyper on August 13, 2015
I love this story. I keep hoping to read more since it is so well written. I also understand you have had troubles along the way. I pray things will get better for you. With me it has been computer issues and car problems. I have been rereading stories and trying to find out what to write next. We all write these stories for free and all have our own lives to. When you are ready I hope to see more chapters as I truly hope this fandom never dies. By the way, thank you so much for your time in writing this. From a fan and fellow author hope to hear from you again.
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From Vyper on February 28, 2015
I'm sorry to hear about your troubles. I really loved this story and I do hope for more. I am currently taking a small break from writing my Black Butler story to read some of these tales. I really like the detail you put into this story and I love Sesshoumaru's elder brother as he is funny as hell. I also love the banter between Kouga and Inuyasha. More of the bantering please as Inuyasha is perfect with his free speech. I also like how close Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha have gotten. I would like to see more sexy moments between the brothers, but this is nice. I hope Inuyasha maybe will have some erotic dreams about Sesshoumaru, that would be funny as hell.
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From ANON - kit-kit on February 13, 2015
Awesome chapter. Inuyasha is slowly getting use to the palace life. I hope he see that he can have a home with sesshomaru and stay
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From shinineko1 on December 04, 2014
Ah~ The joy of a story that draws me in and won't QUIT. I sat down to read this in the vague hope that it will be complete one day, but I really wasn't expecting to have my interest caught so quickly or so thoroughly. Lately I've been addicted to FFXIV, but I've been reading on the computer I don't use to actually play games... it's been hard to look away from my reading computer to actually play the game that's been my interest for over a year. That praise aside, let's get to the nitty gritty. :D

I'd like to say, you're doing a very amazing job. I don't expect a lot out of fanfics, but the style of your writing completely draws the reader in and puts them IN that setting, and that's a hard thing to do. If anyone is saying that you're being to descriptive, ignore them, because I love seeing it. As much as you say that Inu is a bit OOC, I think you're keeping him VERY in character. ^^ Keep up the great work.

PS. I'd really love to see Sess on the bottom again >.>;; Call it my favorite moment of the fic haha.
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From ANON - Selena Rose on September 11, 2014
I only just finished reading the last chapter of The Great Trial today. I wanted to wish you congratulations on being pregnant. I hope that the baby is healthy and stays healthy. I completely understand if you cannot find the time to update for a while. I just sincerely hope that you will not discontinue this story, it is to good of a story. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Please update when you can, no pressure. I hope that everything goes well for you and your family. Wishing you the best of luck and happiness, Selena Rose.
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From ANON - MEMORIETRAIL1 on September 10, 2014
OH SO GREAT TO READ THIS HOPE THERE IS MORE SOON
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From ANON - Mcdgoddess on August 19, 2014
It's been years since I've read some Inuyasha fan fiction, but suddenly out of no where I started to remember some of the really great stories that I read. There was a wonderful story where I remember Inuyasha was simply finished with living and it was such a powerful scene, but I couldn't remember the name of the story. One day I decided to come back to my old reading grounds and I see a recent update for "The Great Trail." All I could think was that the title seemed really familiar, so of course I decided to read it and of course it all came back to me. It was so wonderful to read it again and I'm so happy to hear that you are still working on it!!! With what you have set-up in this most recent chapter, I'm all too excited to read what comes next! Thank you for the gift of this story! All I can hope is that a certain guest continues to "visit" you and provide you with the motivation and inspiration to keep writing. If that's not enough, then know that there are people out there waiting to read your work!
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From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2012
Aside from the swords' incorrect names (it's Tenseiga and Sou'unga), the chapter is good. My favorite part in this is when Totosai makes his appearance (and his three-eyed cow - shouldn't forget that funny looking youkai beast). XD
Update soon (by saying this, I mean 'Please be sooner than this latest chapter'), ne? :3
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From Mayuhito on July 07, 2012
I just spent all night til morning to read this damn wonderful ass story. I loved every moment of this. From the beginning when Inuyasha bout froze to death, the description of what the kiss actually and all the past flash backs. Everything this was awesome! I'm so glad I came across this story, it makes one missed night of sleep so worth it. Also, the sex scenes were amazing! Loved them to bits. So much emotion in this story. Really looking forward to whatever the next chapters may hold.
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From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2012
I would say that Inuyasha should have some time to get acclimated, but if he had too much time on his hands, he'd be bored and end up messing with other people again. You did say that there were things from his parents to look through, so that could take some time. Also, Sesshoumaru could offer to give him so personal lessons (take that however you will) and academic lessons as well. Maybe having Shippo with him and excited about being in the castle will convince him to stick around giving Sesshoumaru the opportunity to grow on him.
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From RukiRomance on June 17, 2012
I still love this with all my being. The way you write is admirable! So smooth and easy to follow.
Inuyasha is really in character here. I Can totally see him the way you portray him...
Ahhh, this was a wonderful read. Keep up the amazing work!

Much Love and support,
Ruki
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