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By : WinterDovane
  • From MaytiaTheSorceress on May 09, 2012
    I just started reading your fic and I am now completely in love with it......i mean I can't wait for your next update......and my vote is totally for mpreg especially if it's Inu-change......that would be so cute

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  • From ANON - TenshiYoukai on May 01, 2012
    I am utterly enjoying this story and was so happy that you have updated! It has been a while since I got to read a well thought out story!

    So, a little bit of criticism and then I will give you my two cents on uke/seme rolls. The first three or so paragraphs of this update felt like you wanted us to know things and couldn't frame them from the characters point of view, so you just told us everything. Sometimes, we dont' need to know the entire explanation. Sometimes, you knowing it is good enough. You eventually settled into their voices, but it was odd. Not that I minded that much. It was just odd. I will explain better, or how you could change it after I reread it.

    Now, for the uke/seme rolls, if Sesshoumaru is Inuyasha's strength and Inuyasha is Sesshoumaru is his only weakness,it would follow that Sesshoumaru would not be well suited to being the pregnant partner. when you are pregnant you are weak and reliant on your other partner. It is the nature of pregnancy. Your body takes care of the child, and your partner takes care of you. Sesshoumaru would have to become weak, in a sense, to be pregnant. That weakness would be unnatural for him. For Inuyasha, it would be a manifestation of his humanity. Besides, if Seshoumaru were pregnant and Inuyasha had passed any of his spiritual powers on to the child, the child would end up killing Sesshoumaru.

    please don't get me wrong. I am not saying that pregnancy makes you a weakling. It doesn't. But it does make you vulnerable in ways that are hard to explain and are best understood from experience.

    I can't wait to read the next update and see where we end up! Happy writing!
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  • From RukiRomance on April 30, 2012
    OMG YAY!!! Steamy inucest!!! I LOVE IT!
    I am so into this like you wouldn't believe!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!

    Much Love and Support,
    Ruki-chan
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  • From ANON - my_perversities on April 29, 2012
    OMG!! I freaken LOVE Inuyasha as an uke. I totally agreee that you have to make this a MPreg with little Inuyasha as the mommy to be. SO HOT!! Keep up the awesome work!!
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  • From ANON - c-loke on April 27, 2012
    I totally loved it! Sesshoumaru is so sweet and considerate. well...except when he goes all feral. lol As for the seme versus uke...I prefer Sesshoumaru as a dominate partner, but I did read Ripe_wickeD_plUm series starting with Inglorious and it was a great blend of equals in the relationship. So you never know...it depends on the how the writer portrays them I guess. But for the mpreg, if there is one in a story, Inuyasha seems more likely to carry young, he seems more open to bonding naturally with young. And Sesshoumaru really doesn't look like the maternal type. lol Love your work and I was jumping up for joy to see that you posted this update. :) Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From itstartedwithapaopu on April 26, 2012
    I will beta the HELL out of this story. :) You know how dearly I love it. I squealed a bit when I saw you'd updated--it was a bit embarrassing, really, and I scared my girlfriend. She thought one of our cats was dying, lol.

    MPreg is always fun in this fandom, because the Inu no Taishou bloodline does need an heir! But whatever you decide will be more than spectacular, I'm sure, as all your other decisions thus far have been. I'm glad to see Kouga and Shippou got to stay. They're characters that are often underestimated in their ability to contribute to stories. As for the seme/uke dynamic (I think you asked about that, but it's entirely possible I'm wrong--it's quite late and I've been awake far too long today), I personally always always see InuYasha as a submissive, largely because he's had such a shitty life taking care of everyone else, he just needs one someone to care for him. That Sesshoumaru exudes seme, dominant, smug, I-will-make-you-experience-pleasure-you-couldn't-ever-dream-of helps, too. :) But, again, that's only my opinion, and who am I to argue if the public says otherwise?

    That being said, while your first lemon was amazing, I squealed again when I saw that Sess was topping this time (don't worry, my girlfriend has since gone to bed). Once again, this was an amazingly detailed and well-written chapter. I could SEE what you were painting with your words, and I certainly enjoyed it. ;D I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Darkhellia on April 17, 2012
    Please you must finish this story, I want to read more. I wanna know what happens. This shit is awesome and funny and amazing. It truely is a piece of work. Please update as soon as possible.
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  • From shaiidin on April 16, 2012
    Your story has intrigued me quite a bit. Love how Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are now slowly getting to work things out. Hope to see them get more closer to each other. Bringing in a bit of Xin's past life adds to the interest. Happy to see a visit from the old pack now and again. Can't wait for you to continue....
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  • From EvilAnge1 on April 02, 2012
    OMG this chapter was really good I hope you update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon!! :D
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  • From botticelliangel on March 09, 2012
    I like the story and I am really irritated because of two things: 1. In the first chapter where you inserted (Spoiler Alert). If you feel the need to warn other readers about this please put it in a seperate section in a header at the beginning of the story. It iturrupts the flow of the story, and draws me away from what in all is a pretty good plot line. 2. You halted the flow again in... I don't really remember what chapter, when you inserted another thing about having thoughts about being cruel and ending the chapter at a cliff hanger. I'm feeling kind of old because I cant concentrate on the writing after you do that, and I really want to because I like the work you are doing.
    This is meant to be constructive. I am completely intrigued and definately giving you a nod to being one creativly smart cookie for using a comming of age trial to explain Sesshomaru's apparent hate for Inuyasha. It is pretty ingenious because you take advantage of the creative license for filling in what life is really like for an inuyoukai. And it solves the gigantic issue that anyone who writes a Sesshomaru/Inuyasha pairing has to overcome. That problem is consistancy with their personalities. You've given a nice neat and plausable reason for calling out Sesshomaru's actions as false. Definately giving you props there because this is one of the hardest pairings to write in the series. I am looking forward to reading new chapters, and I really hope you take my advice.
    Happy writing.
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  • From ANON - reader on March 08, 2012
    this is really great I hope to read more soon...love the back story of why S was so mean to I.
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  • From Vyper on March 08, 2012
    I can't wait for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru to finally mate. I so look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ranni on March 07, 2012
    Love the fic,just a quick question. Im more of inuyasha being the uke. Is he the uke in this fic? Hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - SessMpregluv on March 06, 2012
    Hoping for Sess uke!!!
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  • From ANON - c-loke on March 06, 2012
    YAY for the update! :) and Sesshoumaru is totally Inuyasha's Alpha...the little hanyou is just in denial. lol but seriously, their relationship needs a lot of work and Inuyasha still needs to forgive Sesshoumaru, which seems to be progressing at their own pace. I like that they are not rushing, makes it more believable and sweet when they do finally get there in the end. And that final scene was incredibly hot and you are so cruel for leaving it as a cliff hanger. lol :) can't wait for next post.
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