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Reviews for The Twelfth Concubine

By : AubreySimone
  • From ANON - Miss.Undo on September 01, 2012
    Oh yeah! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Tee on August 25, 2012
    Okay I know that this chapter is an interlude but I have to questions. Kagome is in heat does she still have that tea in her system to stop her getting preggers?, because it would seem that Sesshoumaru is really trying to knock her up. And the other question is, is Kagome going to be preggers in this fic? I also am dying to know how Kotono is after her night with Sesshoumaru? YOU HAVE TO UP-DATE ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BECAUSE YOU KNOW THAT,THAT CHAPTER WAS JUST A TEASE ARE YOU TRYING TO DRIVE ME CRAZY!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Madam_Fluffy on August 24, 2012
    That was one of the best lemons I have read in a long time. It was great. Thanks for wrighting
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  • From ANON - Tee on August 05, 2012
    I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! THIS STORY IS ONE OF THE BEST THAT I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME. YOU MUST MUST MUST UP-DATE ASAP. PLEASE! PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!
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  • From Serrinaus on August 04, 2012
    This is amazing! I've been checking this Tory everyday since the last update so that I could read what's next. You def have me on edge and I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 24, 2012
    I absolutely love this story and I can't wait until your next update; you are very talented and this story showcases that talent very well.

    Looking forward to chapter 36.

    :)
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  • From ANON - Toby on July 17, 2012
    I absolutely love your work. It is well written and the character development flows nicely. If you had sold this as a book I would have been happy I bought it. I also think that if instead of writing fanfiction you wrote your own stuff, that would go over well too. I look forward to reading more of this particular story and hopefully maybe some original works as thats the part of the site I usually look at. Please keep going. A fan.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on July 06, 2012
    This is amazing!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!!
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  • From ANON - OrihimeInoueKurosaki on July 03, 2012
    Aww A KaqsInu Moment >.< Soo Cutee
    Updatee Soon !
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  • From bloodshound on July 01, 2012
    well, we knew something bad was coming. hopefully she survives this.
    your story is epic and i look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Angel on July 01, 2012
    Omgosh I love it I love it... I wait on this story
    Week after week cant wait for the next...
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  • From ANON - gmama on June 30, 2012
    I love this story from day 1. i hope kotono wakes up soon. thanks for wrighting.
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  • From ANON - gmamma on June 27, 2012
    I Love this story its one of my faves. Can't wait to see what is in store for Kagome and the demoness's baby. thank you for a grate story.
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  • From ANON - Kasutaishi on June 26, 2012
    I truly have enjoyed this piece. I have read it all in one sitting, as I am sure many others will be compelled to do. The characters are beautifully drawn in this fanfiction, and I felt it very easy to get attached to them. The rivers of emotion run very deep, and are very believable of our favourite characters in an alternate reality. And to those who may like to point out Kagome's general likeability amongst the demons as a mary sue issue, I personally disagree in this case. She canonically had encounters with demons that just decided not to kill her because she was interesting or useful. Sesshomaru himself in canon would downplay it, but he has saved her life twice at the least, counting the movies. Koga of the wolf demon tribe!? Need I say more! It is not a stretch, given the proposed upbringing of Kagome, that she could be exactly this resilient and good natured amongst otherwise lethal creatures. She is still our incredibly ballsy Kagome, and she is appreciated for her mind, but it is not like she doesn't make mistakes or ever act like a bitch, cause she did! But her actions are dealt with rather responsibly, and I really enjoyed that about the evolution of her character so far. I daresay that I have official standpoints on all OCs, and that is that they must be awesome if they are going to be main characters. This piece is a great example of excellent OCs. I especially enjoy Sesshomaru's mother Chiyoko and his first concubine Kotono, for obvious reasons I do not need to go into as this review is already mammoth.
    long story short, this rocks my sox
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  • From ANON - OrihimeInoueKurosaki on June 23, 2012
    Awww , I Hadd Too Follow Youu Too This Websitee Causee I Lovee Youur Storyy Im Gladd Kotono's Bakk &' Shee Brouqht Her Nephew :D
    Updatee Soon !
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