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Reviews for The Twelfth Concubine

By : AubreySimone
  • From ANON - Adelaide on June 16, 2012
    I just discovered this story and I love it! I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading it (I am not a big Kagome/Sesshomaru fan) but it pulled me in. I had to finish reading all the chapters that were up. I just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. I can't wait for updates. I keep wondering how the story will turn out, based on all of the seeming hints. Keep up the great work! By the way, I like the Ink Smudge forum and motto best, though all of them were good.
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  • From ANON - QtNico on June 14, 2012
    One word WOW. This is an amazing story so far. A refreshingly new story line with original characters like Kotono who become almost the guiding hand in the story and add to the narrative. I really appreciate the speed at which you are adding new chapter. It almost seems as if as soon as I finish a chapter the new ones are already up. I am thoroughly enjoying your story so far.
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  • From ANON - Serrinaus on June 14, 2012
    Yay I can review! It was amazing, I can't wait till I see the next chapter. I'm gonna have to actively check it out cause this place doesn't give you the option of getting up dates but that's ok cause I love this story. You are amazing and I can't wait till I can read more.
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  • From TeaniaZazzuullii on June 13, 2012
    Oh my gosh, I am loving this story! I read that you were uploading alot today and I keep refreshng to check. It was kind of funny about 3 or 4 hours ago I had come upon this story and it was only on chapter 12 and I just kept reading through and saw it kept updating. It was kind of funny, When I saw the note about uploading like 21 chapters. I entertained the thought of it just updating everything i finished the chapter. lol It would have been kinda funny. :)

    Well i really do like this story and I like Kotono sooomuch! She's really cool and i like Sesshomaru and kagome's relationship so far :) I can't wait for the rest of the chapters to be uploaded!
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  • From ANON - Rae on June 13, 2012
    I love the story so far, and can't wait for an update! ;)
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2012
    this is proving to be an awesome story. just what i need after struggling along in a mire of ordinarily or darker edged fics which were bringing me down... or ones that had an interesting idea and promptly killed it with typos right left and central.
    I needed this, a well written, engaging, typo free fic.
    Kags is a lot of fun and the characters around her are equally engaging. when she and sess finally do get their lemon scene it's going to be amazing, i can just feel it.
    anyway, looking forward to the next chappie.

    as for you forum name, which sort of image do you want to portray?
    the first choice is softer, more romantic in feel. It has the slant that all writing inside is going to be of romantic edge. It's kind of fluffy.
    The second is harder edged and doesn't really give you a hint as to what sort of writing is inside. To me it calls up a sort of press writing to mind. More professional some how. The name is very catchy though.
    The third does call up a joy of writing but without any real bias, as long they enjoy what they're writing. Or do they write joy into all of their stories? (Joy = love?)
    anyway, go with which even one says what you want to achieve best.
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  • From ANON - CaitlinIntolerant on June 09, 2012
    Followed you here from FanFiction, I can't wait for you to post the new update, love.
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  • From brandypandyxxx on June 07, 2012
    Glad to see your adding it here, I followed this story on the other sites.
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  • From RubyJeweler on June 07, 2012
    I'm finally here! Muahahahahhahahha! I love this story so much that I made a AFF.net account just for this. Although, now when I think about it...you also update on Dokuga, too. -___- Oh well, my efforts will not in vain, because I'm pretty sure that other authors(from ff.net) will move their MA fics here, too. Thank you for transferring the story over.
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