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By : Maddiesan
  • From ANON - Kula on September 08, 2014
    This has to be one of my all time favorite stories, thank you for the great update.
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  • From ANON - Jas on August 25, 2014
    Was this the final chapter?
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  • From ANON - Reader00 on July 14, 2014
    Please update soon! I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Jas on July 02, 2014
    please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shyneamor on June 22, 2014
    Just had to read the 2nd part of chapter 14 again. I'm soooo loving this story.
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  • From ANON - Jas on June 19, 2014
    OMG This is soooooo cool. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - shyneamor on June 18, 2014
    OMG. .. he got the girl. Yay! I'm so happy those two are finally going to take this to the next level. Please update soon. I love every word of it.
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  • From ANON - NS on June 18, 2014
    Thank you for the wonderful update! So terribly excited to see what happens next!
    Although I'm curious as to what dark drama might be waiting to unfold... You're writing style is usually much more bittersweet than what we've seen so far in this story. Regardless, I love it and look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Jas on June 11, 2014
    Can't wait till the next one. standing on pins and needles!!!
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  • From ANON - NS on June 05, 2014
    This is my latest, most favorite story! I snuggled up and read all 13 chapters posted so far in a single sitting. You've done a wonderful job using the passage of time to smooth Kouga's rough (and sometimes obnoxious) edges. I feel he is still very much in character, but has matured in a believable way in your story. Same for your portrayal of Kogome. Her reaction to the difficult situation she was thrust into is exactly what you would expect of her. They make a wonderful pair so far :)
    Your writing style really builds a reader's connection to the characters, you can't help but feel a twinge in your own heart for their suffering or happiness. You did not rush them, and the relationship has definite character in itself. Conversations are very natural to read and while they may have adorable moments, they aren't "cheesy/corny" which is refreshing. Your use of additional characters is great as well- it adds a balance and offers some comic relief when needed. Plus it really helps develop a comfortable environment for the story, the main characters don't seem isolated in the plot (I'm super excited to see how things work out with the cliffhanger you just left us at here at the end of ch 13!).

    There are a few things that could be improved upon though. For one, there are quite a few cases of typos, misuse of certain words in context, etc. But the fact that these do not affect the quality of writing or flow of the story at all shows what a great story teller you naturally are :) I very much look forward to reading more from you, and will continue following this story avidly!

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  • From ANON - shyneamor on May 31, 2014
    OMG, chapter 13 woke me right up out of my sleep. I hope Kagome can help fix the situation so the Kouga clan can finally breathe easy. This story is sooo exciting. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - A Friend on May 21, 2014
    Oooo love, love, love it! So Damn cute.... can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jas on May 21, 2014
    OMG!!!! it's about time
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  • From ANON - shyneamor on May 21, 2014
    I swear, this story makes me so happy. Please continual. One of my favorite fan fics.
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  • From ANON - Jas on May 15, 2014
    can't wait for next update so excited!!!!!
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