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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 22, 2016
    Are you going to continue or not. Will Kouga full for Asami? Will Sesshomaru RUT WITH inuyasha. Will Asami/Inuyasha go into heat? Will Asami end up with her own body? What's next. I want to know. Tell me at ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com Type to you soon. :):P
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 22, 2016
    In my FIRST REVIEW, I told you when my EMOTIONS go Crazy,that I wright them down; but it comes out as a Quote, it sometimes comes out as a song; but I know NO ONE WILL SING THEM ON A STAGE OR ON THE RADIO, so there nothing SPECIAL ABOUT THEM. Here are some of the names I have made and can remember. Remember the past and live the present. We only see the love we want; BUT DON'T NEED. Once you meet someone you just meet Your to be with them, for life. Change does not always take as long as on might think. Take your guilt, your pain, your sorrow and forge them into a blade. There are no wrong or right choices only simple choices. We Dream Of What We'll Become. When you fight, It's a fight that's worth fighting for. WE CAN'T CHANGE THE PAST BUT WE SURE AS HELL CAN CHANGE OUR FUTURE. We fight to defend are self, fight to protect the one's we love. What I am. Every one has a weakness. If I walk down the path God has made for me. Art is all around us, there's 3 or 4 more names I can't remember. You want to talk, go to>> ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 22, 2016
    It's confusing to me that I'm a GIRL, Age 18, soon to be 19 onand I like to Adult Fanficion M/M OR M/M/M Stories. Why is that? Was I a Man IN A PAST LIFE? (Tell me at > ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com)
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 22, 2016
    I've read books with small quotes. My feelings get out of hand so I wright down my feelings; But it sometimes comes out as a Quote. Here is one I Wrogt. Your heart has many rooms, more rooms are added to our hearts with everone we let in and love.
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  • From Naoto on April 17, 2015
    I like this story a lot this is probably the third time I've read it lol I was wondering when this will be updated?

    I really wanna see what happens especially with Kouga. I think it would be interesting if Asami and Inuyasha switched more often to have equal "Sesshy time" I also would be interested in seeing Miroku and even Kouga start going after Asami and maybe Inuyasha as well.(Miroku putting aside his fear because getting with the gorgeous princess is totally worth it) and (Kouga going after Asami because he just doesn't know that it's Inuyasha's twin (and doesn't know their in the same body) and because someone as strong and beautiful as her will give him incredibly strong pups so he also begins "courting or wooing" her as well.Once he finds out that their in the same body he realizes that he'll be able to get the one he's secretly pined over for awhile while Pretending to be going after Kagome only to get a rise out of him because his angry face is adorable. So once he also starts courting Inuyasha with a vengeance kicking Kagome to the curb because he knows that he would make a great mate because how he's raised Shippo,he's beautiful and any pups birthed by him will be strong and beautiful.things start to get serious when he decides Sesshoumaru isn't good enough to have someone as pure as Inu and Asa and is determined to get him out of the picture even if that means bring up inu and sesshou tortured past and getting more touchy Feely with the twins since he's a wolf demon he sees nothing wrong with touching and being perverted) it wouldn't hurt to even have a scene where Kouga already knows that Inu and Sessh are to be mated but sees him with Asami and believes him to be two-timing Inu and thinks up a plan to split them up to keep him to himself.


    I think with the two of them they'll keep Sesshy on his toes lol. Now for Kagome, I would say that she realizes that she isn't able to just be friends with Inuyasha and wants more so she begins flirting with him more boldly (but inuyasha just doesn't realize what she's doing) maybe Kagome could even start looking into ways to split Asami and Inuyasha so she'll be able to have him all to herself not understanding that it's Asami's choice to not have her own body because her fear of the demons humans really are and because of the ghost of the past but Kagome isn't capable of doing such a powerful technic and only manages to turn herself into a dark Miko because of her selfish and cruel thoughts towards Asami plus Sesshoumaru and eventually Inuyasha after trying to convince him that loving another man and his brother no less is completely wrong and his mother would be disappointed in him for making such a choice in a lover to try to cast doubt in his heart but when he proves he'll love no other than Sesshoumaru she becomes darker but is able to keep it a secret. Maybe even have her start over using the subjugation necklace. Even trying to use it on him when they find out he's pregnant but Asami is able to use spiritual power to cancel out the subjugation necklaces power to protect the pups.

    On a side note: I think Sesshoumaru should do the same thing with Shippo that Inuyasha did and request being his parent as well and he starts calling papa (and Kagome getting even more jealous since there is no place for her in this "little family") OR because Inuyasha is a Uke demon he starts becoming a bit more submissive, docile and motherly/nurturing so he (shippo and eventually Rin) starts calling Inuyasha (and intern Asami) "Mommy".

    * I've also always loved when people use the nickname "little one" when Sesshoumaru refers to Inuyasha I just think it's sexy and adorable lol

    * Another having Kouga seeing inu in his demon for or human for and liking him even more. Demon for because of how much raw power he has and human form because of his beauty and an inner need in Kouga of wanting to protect and take care of a fragile beauty.

    Hey, sorry about all that reading I started typing and couldn't stop. I use to be a BETA editor well I technically still am so every time I read a story I always think up other ways it could go or in which way it can continue. I'm Nao! If you would like my assistance just message me at
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  • From Ebonyheart on September 01, 2014
    XD Write a new chapter, please with sprinkles on top?! I'm dying to see how Kouga-kun comes into play here!
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  • From ANON - Courtney on June 19, 2014
    I'm probably late but come on!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was sooooo good...ugh...I hope you can finish
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  • From Animefreeket on March 20, 2014
    I would love to find out what happens plz write more!
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruFreak on February 23, 2014
    Really liking this! Inuyasha having a female twin inside him is....interesting. Definitely original, I've never heard something like that in other fanfics. I love the fact that Shippo is now Inuyasha's son. Plus, the high and mighty Ice Lord Sesshomaru has feelings! Aaannd..he totally asked (demanded) help from Sango! (Hmmmm..in a different storyline, that might make an interesting pairing. Sesshomaru/Sango) Anyways, I can't find the "last update" so I don't know if you updated recently or if this is like so many others, and hasn't been updated in years. I really hope there's more to come for this story!
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  • From ANON - piper on February 20, 2014
    Kouga
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  • From PrincessAurora on December 26, 2012
    Sweet story so far! I generally hate stories where the writer makes Inuyasha a female...but you did it in such a way to make it believable. I wasn't sure at first, when it first happened, but by the end of that chapter, I was smiling. Well done!
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  • From Vyper on November 14, 2012
    It was a good story. I just wish that there was more.
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  • From AidaLily on November 13, 2012
    Lol. I knew someone was going to cover Shippo's eyes. Very cute and happy birthday. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where you go with this.
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  • From Vyper on November 04, 2012
    I love this story. I just want so much to bitch slap Kagome. The girl is a total bitch.
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  • From ANON - Afrieal on October 31, 2012
    I just found this story and i devoured it. Love it and can't wait to see what you do next with it. Try a bit of Strong Sweet tea (iced or hot) the caffine and sugar should help the headache, it's a trick i use for my migraines (i also try coka-cola on occasion or milky sweet chai tea).
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