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Reviews for My Rival's Brother

By : Neptunesdemon
  • From whitetiger on December 14, 2015
    Thank you so very much for updating! We missed you greatly. I was a bit down with the bad weather in my area, and was looking through the stories I had bookmarked when I saw that you had uploaded this a few days ago. My excitement overshadowed the darkness and I quickly opened your story. I enjoyed every last word! It is good that Koga's family took in Sesshomaru, that is why I love wolves so very much. Such a wonderfully social bunch they are. :)
    It broke my heart a bit that Sesshomaru's father would do that to his own son in light of his own transgressions, but that is the way of those who believe themselves to be above everyone else. I hope he gets his in the end, not death, but definitely put in his place somehow.
    I hope you are feeling better. I'm sure you get tired of hearing how we can sympathize with what you are feeling, but we really do. Depression suck giant ass, and it is harder to get rid of that tar and feathers. I can only say to keep taking each step forward, eventually it does get better. And always remember, you are a beautiful person who brings joy to others, even if you can not see our faces. :)
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  • From ANON - sunshine on December 10, 2015
    Finally an update! Love this story. Thought it was a weird couple match up at first but you really make it work and I am hooked!
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  • From ANON - leah on December 09, 2015
    Yay! You're back! I have missed this story. I know depression is a true B@$!#, because I suffer with it and anxiety, but you can pull through. I wish you the best of luck and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Bo on August 30, 2015
    This is literally the thing that got me to start shipping SessKouga! I really love this, it's well written and incredibly hot, and Kouga and Sesshomaru stay believably in character, which can be hard to do especially when giving them traits one wouldn't necessarily assume they would have off the bat, like Sesshomaru being a needy little bottom~ And on top of it all, it's got elements of a plot mixed in! Fantastic job with this, it really just makes me wish for new chapters for it forever~
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  • From ANON - Swee on September 30, 2014
    Can't wait to see how the mpreg will fit into the budding story line.
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  • From Vyper on September 15, 2014
    Kouga has to marry Sesshoumaru. Kagura can't have him! It isn't right! Make Sesshoumaru fight for what is right and marry Kouga!
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  • From Vyper on September 15, 2014
    That was so hot! I loved it. Please more!
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  • From ANON - Mimi on August 22, 2014
    Absolutely outstanding. The sex in this story is so attractively written. And I have to agree that sesshomaru as a whining begging whore is a very nice thing. Please continue, I can't wait to find out how it ends.
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  • From ANON - Inuhime on August 19, 2014
    Oh boy...... Inupapa is surely going to notice that for sure. But hell I know you're playing him all obedient, and I agree he would be but just to a certain level. I don't think Inupapa would ever be able to control Sesshoumaru to the extent of ordering him who to mate. He loves his father, but Inupapa will have to learn sooner or later, or loose his son one of the two. XD"
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  • From ANON - SesshoPuppy on August 17, 2014
    It says complete is chapter 7 the last one, please say it isn't no offense but that a crappy way to leave off sesshomaru's not going to stand up to his fdahterand tell him he wants to be with kouga there has to be a chapter like that coming.

    UPDATE SOON ;)
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  • From ANON - Tee on August 16, 2014
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET SESSHOMARU BITCH OUT AND CHANGE HIS MIND. HE HAS FINALLY GROWN A PAIR DON'T LET HIM LOSE THEM. HE HAS TO UNDERSTAND THAT HE WILL NEVER TRULY BE A MAN UNTIL ME MAKES HIS OWN DECISIONS AND IF HIS FATHER TELLS HIM THAT IF HE DOESN'T STOP SEEING KOUGA HE WILL TAKE EVERYTHING FROM HIM LET HIM BECAUSE SESSHOMARU IS SMART ENOUGH TO MAKE ALL ON HIS OWN FROM SCRATCH.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER LONG AND UP-DATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - VampireDoll666 on August 16, 2014
    Take that bitch Sesshy is taken by Kouga and no one else....you hear that daddy!
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  • From ANON - yuki on August 08, 2014
    Please update soon!! What a great Story! Love any second reading it!! :)


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  • From ANON - Seira on July 29, 2014
    No no no no no........ Please tell me that last chapter was a plot twist and Sess will turn around and pull the only time he will ever fight his father on a a ruling he has made. It can not end this way! *starts to cry*
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  • From whitetiger on July 11, 2014
    I don't mind having a plot instead of mindlessly, intense ..... (cough, cough)okay maybe I like the steamy scenes.
    I think you are doing a fantastic job with this story. Please keep it up. :)
    I know in your story Sesshomaru is a submissive in his sexual relationships, but in all other things he is 100% alpha. He always wanted to fight his father because his father was powerful, and I hope he dips into that bank of demon testosterone to tell his father he will damn well decide his own future. I know there has to be rocky roads along the way, but Please Please don't destroy their relationship. Then after Sesshomaru has stood up to his father (possibly being disowned in the process), maybe, just maybe there can be an adorable, little bundle of joy brought into the world. ;) I vote for a dark hair, amber eyed little girl. Than his father, feeling a sense of loss for his son, will gladly accept him back where Sesshomaru can run the family and business like he was meant too. Happy Happy!!
    But it's your choice all the way. (Please don't make me cry too much. O.O )
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