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Reviews for My Rival's Brother

By : Neptunesdemon
  • From ANON - memorietrail1 on July 11, 2013
    more please its so good yes more more more
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  • From KatzeRaoul on July 10, 2013
    Kouga needs a little punishment after that display...no matter how much Sesshy liked it or him saying Kouga needn't apologize he still went too far. (However hot it was) I think a spanking of his own is in order.
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  • From ANON - Guest007 on April 27, 2013
    By poor luck I found this absolutly masterpiece *__* I am not often on aff, but I got this story on my favourite list now so I will check regulary in hope for a new chapter ;))))

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  • From ANON - Tee on April 08, 2013
    WHEN ARE YOU UP DATING AGAIN I NEED MY FIX OF YOUR STORY AND I NEED IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on March 24, 2013
    God damn I actually love this story, lol. You definitly need to continue this, just saying. :]
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 21, 2013
    Daddy knows, there's no way he doesn't. And I think he doesn't like it one bit.
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 21, 2013
    Sex on legs should be Sesshomaru' new nickname. Damn he is one sexy beast!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on March 19, 2013
    yes i feel that plot coming to and it feels like a good one please continue....great story so far it can't end like this.
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  • From whitetiger on March 18, 2013
    OMG!!!!! Awesome update!! Hot Hot Hot!! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Bring on the plot!! But you better keep up the hot, sweaty, kinky, smexy stuff. ;)
    So far we've had the bedroom, a coat closet in a restaurant, and Sesshomaru's office. Oh ya and the bondage video (delicious). Maybe next they could sneak into daddy's office and do the deed on his chair. (wink wink) Just a suggestion, he was the reason they rushed after all.
    On a serious note: Thank you so much for your wonderful work of written art. You are a great writer and I am really enjoying your story. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Yashahime on March 18, 2013
    LOL! I love this story, I hope You keep going with it. Even though I usually don't like Uke Sessh. But this is just too good. XD" And you do Kouga soo well! I wish I could write him that well... )_)" Hope to see another update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dragon77 on March 18, 2013
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From kougaslover on March 18, 2013
    Ugh, those plots, so pesky getting in the way of good porn :P Haha, excellent chapter, I love how much of a kinky one Sesshomaru is revealing himself to be. And I have to say I would love to see a bit more of Sesshomaru's bondage interests, if Kouga's willing to indulge him a bit more. Excellent work, I like the way the storyline is progressing and would love to read more!
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  • From ANON - yohanita21 on March 14, 2013
    Absolutely in love with this story. Who would've thought, seme Kouga and uke Sesshomaru. That's completely unheard off and absolutely delicious. Please update soon, I can't wait to read what's in store for this two naughty demons, and that vibrator!
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  • From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 09, 2013
    Smokin sizzling hot hot hot, I loved it! More please:-)
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  • From ANON - thieflord99 on February 03, 2013
    actually you portray uke sesshoumaru very well i really enjoy it, he still has his sesshoumaru's poker face just uke so in all the sesshoumaru yaoi i've read this is the best sesshoumaru portrayal i've seen in a long while keep it up!
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