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Reviews for Mending a broken heart

By : sesshomaru84
  • From angel23 on April 29, 2020

    I wish you would write more


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  • From ANON - Nikki on May 02, 2014
    Oh god, this was the best fanfic ever! x)
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  • From Blackrose1933 on June 02, 2013
    Your story had a decent plot to it but I feel the name you used don't fit your story at all. With as quick as her and Sesshomaru matted she really wasn't that broken hearted. Also I feel you rushed it to much and it's lacking some finer details that you could have added. In one you said you didn't want to draw out the fighter but that is what most readers are looking for. I'm sure you have read books and other fictions. It's those details that the readers love in a fanfiction. Don't get me wrong your story was good but I honestly feel it could use a different title and more detail.
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  • From DevilHeart435 on May 27, 2013
    Are you kidding, that was a great ending, and very surprising to bring back their father. I have to say I loved it through and through, even if the chapters were somewhat short.
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  • From ANON - Ron on May 14, 2013
    I love this story and can't wait to see what happens between Inuyasha Inuyasha and Kora Kora please update soon and tell me on kingofmonsters1@gmail.com so I will know
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on May 09, 2013
    Amazing story. Please continue writing. ^_^ It's not often I find a Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing I can actually follow plotwise. Not to mention it doesn't have that oneshot turned story feel to it that makes the plot seem forced. I love it. ^_^ -WWMH-
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  • From ANON - Boocat on May 09, 2013
    I found the fish attacking Inu Yasha's privates very funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope Sesshomaru rescues Kagome soon, and that her pups are unharmed.
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  • From ANON - Deedeedml2010 on February 24, 2013
    Amazing story so far!!! When are you gonna post more!!??
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