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By : Krissael

From ANON - RinSess13 on April 05, 2013
I'm sorry, I got my temper on my last review. I can explain: Sesshomaru/Older Rin are my favorite couple forever. Actually, I'm loving this fanfic. ;D So original! xDDD I can understand your few time. It's difficult, I know. By the way, sorry my English, it's not my first language. In this chapter 9, you explained some things. And I'm seeing Sesshomaru-sama getting concern about Rin. About the feelings, I always thought Sesshomaru is so more mature then Inuyasha. He's so much older then him and had had a polite education I think. So, I always thought Sesshomaru isn't the kind of person who has doubts about himself. If he feels something, he knows, if he wants something, he gets it. And Inuyasha is a shounen from Rumiko-sensei, so of course there are a lot of "runaround". Inuyasha always knew he was in love with Kagome, but his sense of compromise was too strong with Kikyou, but it is another story... Coming back to Sesshy-sama: feel something and do something about it are two different things. Sesshomaru can love Rin, but do something about it, "it's another story". Because he has his pride too, and a whole inu youkai kingdom to rule. We can see it in the end of the anime, when he met his mother, that giant castle. So, it is not easy to go forward with a romantic relationship with a human. There are consequences (as well as in the real life ^^). I don't know if it is your idea, but I can see Sesshomaru doing this deal just to get free of Rin and try to finish his feelings for her. The only way a person fall in love with someone else and doesn't realize it is if this person is too innocent. And, we know, Sesshomaru is not innocent. Well, keep writing. Even you have no time, you are updating fast in my opinion. Some fics take years to be finish and currently there are so many AUs (I don't like AU very much). Bye!
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From Mario on April 05, 2013
Hello! It's just me again. I'll be going for a quick review, since I'm a bit pressed for time. First, a disclaimer: I'm not actually a fan of InuYasha, and I've never read any InuYasha fanfiction before. Therefore, my grasp on the characters is undoubtedly somewhat tenuous. However, I am familiar with the general plot, so I hope that will suffice.

By my limited powers of observation, there's only one significant aspect of the story that you might consider changing. However, it's also very possible that you made a conscious decision to include this facet in the plot, in which case I apologize for second-guessing you.

I think that it may have been better for Sesshoumaru not to be consciously aware of his feelings for Rin this early in the story. A protagonist's obliviousness�or vehement denial�in regards to his own feelings towards another character is a powerful storytelling device that allows for a lot of emotional gut-wrenching and heart-throbbing. The increased plot inertia builds up a lot of tension, with the result often being a far greater impact on the reader than the traditional story of "love at first sight". The InuYasha series itself is a prime example of this: Inuyasha and Kagome spend about 200 episodes in various stages of denial and awkward teenage angst about their feelings for each other. Of course, the InuYasha series is also arguably an example of how you can take this mechanic way too far . . . but, I digress. I just had to get in a jab there (see, I told you I wasn't a fan). The overly-lengthy point that I'm trying to make here is that you might want to consider spending the first couple of chapters having Sesshoumaru slowly awaken to the realization that he has feelings for a "lowly human". But as I said above, if you chose to make him immediately aware of his feelings as part of a deliberate plan, please ignore the suggestion�as the author, you know what you're doing much better than I do.

Anyway, this is a wonderful story so far, as per usual; I expected no less from such a talented author like yourself. I was pretty shocked to see that Sesshoumaru gave Rin away for a "mere" half-share of the Eastern Lands . . . what a parsimonious bastard. I hope you make him suffer at least a little for his poor judgment. I'm looking forward to where the story will go . . . and now this review will end, because I am very, very late.

Take care!
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 04, 2013
OMG! What just happened?!! I can understand Sesshomaru traded Rin for lands and power, but why Komori kidnapped her? If the "bargain" was already assured, why he did that? Why not Sesshomaru just came and bring her himself to the eastern lands? And what was that kiss? O.o This fanfic is unpredictable for sure, but things happened too fast in the chapter 7, I think. The "negociations" weren't showed, but it's ok. But Sesshomaru could come back and explain it before Komori's appearance. Of course, Sesshomaru would demand Rin obey. And I can understand Komori doing those things to Rin, he's a villain, we expect him to do those kind of things, but after he ripped off Rin's kimono what did she do? Cried? Yelled for help? What did she thought while Komori was touching her? Was she disgusted? And what Komori was thinking? Was he thinking she was pretty or something like that? And where did he bring her after that? To western or eastern lands? I think, it would make more sense if she was in the western lands again and Komori just did all those things to have sure she was a virgin before accept the deal with Sesshomaru, but she woke up in some different room and not her bedroom and Sesshomaru said he was glad she came... Was she naked? Komori ripped her kimono... In the chapter 8, Sesshomaru said "Risk losing the one person who means anything to me?" It seemed that he was talking about someone else, but before it he kissed Rin... If Rin get married with someone else, is he already not losing her in some way too? OMG! Giant review! O.o Oh! In my last review something happened and it repeated itself three times! O.o But somehow it cut off a part of this, so I had to post the last part again in another review. Sorry! T_T I don't know what happened. Well... keep writting! ;D
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From ANON - Hattaru on April 04, 2013
OMG, he sold her? what an Asshole, I hope now Rin understands he is not as dashing and beloved lord as she thought he was, I hope Rin, gets out, or at least fights, but who knows, I hope someone rescuse her like Inuyasha, you would think, after spending time with Lady K, and Kagome who is from a different time, you would think she would teach her stregath or somthing, mybe self worth, but who knows.

Updat soon, please I must know what happends.

hugs

Hattaru
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 03, 2013
He could take advantage from her, just use her and throw away, even he already knew what she was planning. So, I'm loving Sesshomaru-sama now, but I'm hating Rin for while. T_T I hate silly girls who thinks sex can fix everything "Oh! He will love me... eventually...". I don't know what will happen, it's not a predictable fanfic, lol I think Rin just arrived... but I hope she will mature. Well, keep writting. ;D Sorry, I don't like Naruto, but if I liked, I would read for sure.
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 03, 2013
I loved this chapter! xD It surprised me so much. O.o I didn't think would be Sesshomaru-sama who would reject the intercourse. You know, in medieval age, powerful men had many spouses, concubines, sex slaves, they raped etc etc, but women had to be pure. I see you are drawing a honorable Sesshomaru. I liked it so much.
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 03, 2013
I loved this chapter! xD It surprised me so much. O.o I didn't think would be Sesshomaru-sama who would reject the intercourse. You know, in medieval age, powerful men had many spouses, concubines, sex slaves, they raped etc etc, but women had to be pure. I see you are drawing a honorable Sesshomaru. I liked it so much.
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 03, 2013
I loved this chapter! xD It surprised me so much. O.o I didn't think would be Sesshomaru-sama who would reject the intercourse. You know, in medieval age, powerful men had many spouses, concubines, sex slaves, they raped etc etc, but women had to be pure. I see you are drawing a honorable Sesshomaru. I liked it so much.
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From ANON - Hattaru on April 03, 2013
well Damn Sesshomaru!!! if you don't think of her in that way then why the hell is she with you? I love this story, its different and you don't know what happends next, I was shocked when he regected her offer, but I kind of figgured he know on what she was planinng LOL, I hope you up date soon, I just love this, I wonder what Rin is going to do now, she should just return to the Village were Inuyasha is!!! that would really piss Sesshomaru off LOL.

hugs Hattaru
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From ANON - RinSess13 on April 02, 2013
Aff! ��" I really detest when Rin doesn't respect herself, no matter what. Even that she loves him with all her soul, even that it is "The Sesshomaru-sama", even if she says "Oh! Rin loves Sesshomaru-sama, but Rin is a lower human, so Rin have to accept". I hate submissive women! What is she thinking? She really wants being his concubine (read: personal whore)? And he had said those disgusting things before she asked that!!! I really want that she will change her mind. She needs to think better. She can't think that there is a future for her being a sex slave. There is a good proverb for people like her: "I love you, but I don't need you".

Good one, of course, Sesshomaru-sama uses "different" words, he is a youkai. A noble one.

See you! ;D
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From ANON - Hattaru on April 01, 2013
OH MY GODSH, really Sesshomaru, I will not act on the feeling but I can just have sex with you and not say that i love you only I lust after you! really Sesshomaru, Rin I don't think you are going down a path you want, sex changes everthing, you my think it is somthing special and think that he might have feelings for you, even though he said he did not have feelings for you or will act apon it, but I don't think this is a good idea.

Wow when he said intercourse I almost died, hahahhaha, he sure speaks a different way then most, he says the correct term hahahah, you said that this is a dark story and also it has rape in it, I don't know if this story will have a dramantic turn real soon, but I have a feeling that Rin will change her mind or mybe come to her sences and then I don't know Sesshomaru gets up set and he forces himself on her I don't know, but I hope you udate soon!!!! I have to admit I do like Dark stories LOL.

Hugs

Megan.
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From ANON - RinSess13 on March 29, 2013
I'm happy you update. ;D OMG! He already have known she loves him! I wonder what he will do now.. O.o
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From ANON - RinSess13 on March 25, 2013
A pretty lovely chapter. xDDD
I think you could post your fic on FFNET and on Moonlight-Flower-Sesshoumaru-Rin-Sanctuary too, if you wanted to. ^^ Just a sugestion of mine. ;D
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From ANON - RinSess13 on March 20, 2013
OMG!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so curious! xDDD
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