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By : LordYouko
  • From pretireader on April 29, 2013
    I want more~! There are few decent stories on this site and this is one of them! Keep up the good work and update soon, please~!
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  • From ANON - Araiht on April 29, 2013
    Lord Youko, I'm stalking you also on this site. GREAT CHAPTER! Overwhelmed by enthusiasm, I forgot to wish you well on your finals! Hope everything goes well, kick ass!
    I'm preparing finals too right now.
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  • From Angels9191 on April 28, 2013
    0.o master's in psychology?? Holy crap, well my excuse for being so late on an update is lame now XD jk. I will have the chapter up soon, I just finished with my own finals. Undergrad though ;P
    Anywho, this story is so good already. It's really, really satisfying to see Sess so protective and just downright kind to someone. Especially someone as cute as your Inuyasha. I have two favorite parts of this chapter. The first was when Sess was training and trying to get control of his poison weapon, complaining about how he and Taisho had tried 'everything'. My first thought was "HA! Of course he'd be most comfortable with a whip!" It's really interesting and a little bizarre to see Sess inexperienced and still learning to do things. I guess it just never occurred to me that he would have to have learned these things too.
    My other favorite part was when Inuyasha slipped up and told Sess to shut up before realizing his mistake. I really like how you're slowly getting into Inuyasha's character, gradually bringing him out of his shell and bringing in the opportunities for him to evolve into something closer to the stubborn smartass we all know and love. This 'slip up' showed just enough of his true personality behind the fake rules that have been beaten into the poor thing.

    There are a couple things which I felt left a little room for improvement, but are by no means mistakes. I thought the language of the other demon children was a little 21st century, if you know what I mean. It worked because, of course, other children would never and should never be as eloquent as Sess. Just something I noticed though. I also felt like the chapter was a tiny bit rushed. I can't really point out a certain point, but I think maybe a little more inner monologue toward the end might have helped.

    If you would ever like to chat more in depth about writing, Inuyasha, or anything else really, here's my email: scarlett.jay.14@gmail.com
    Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with finals!
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  • From dantae on April 27, 2013
    I really like this. Please update quickly.
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  • From Kit-kit on April 27, 2013
    Awesome chapter. I can't believe those kids called sesshomaru a bully..lol. he only did to them what they were doing to inuyasha
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  • From kittenchild on April 27, 2013
    Another great chapter from you! I like where this story is heading and how you manage to keep Sesshoumaru in character, especially during that scene where he discovered his poison whip. It's totally like him to keep going at it just because it's a new power he discovered. Anyway, great job! I hope you did well on your Finals! As much as I squealed with joy when I saw a new chapter was up, school is kind of important, and you should definitely put that first! Appreciated anyway though, this chapter was wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Lucky_Love on April 27, 2013
    Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are so cute together! The best part is that Sesshoumaru doesn't even realize how much he allows from his puppy. I love this story. I look forward to watching their budding relationship grow, but I also don't want them to be kids to long. I am happily waiting for them to become adults and do adult things.
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  • From ANON - madamdragon on April 26, 2013
    Awww puppy, more more more soon. Good luck on your test.
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  • From maegerakawaii on April 26, 2013
    That was such an adorable ending. I loved it!!!! I must have more. I just hope things don't get too ugly when the Lady of the West finally returns.
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  • From ANON - Smed on April 26, 2013
    Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore I want more. Great job! Caint wait till th next chapter
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  • From Angels9191 on April 24, 2013
    Yay new story!

    I love it already. I'm so happy that awful goat demon got what was coming to him. I love how you write young Sess, I think it's very accurate to how I would imagine him at such an impressionable time in his life. As with "Want to be Your Slave", I'm really impressed by the chemistry you create between Taisho and Tsukiko. It's perfectly believable and so amusing. You get me laughing aloud whenever they're together, lovingly frustrating the other to no end. I like this Inuyasha as well. He's got a little more of the classic spunkiness of the Inuyasha from the series, but he's also at that impressionable age where he could become anything. I think it's great that he's the first one to have the pervy thoughts, it makes him even cuter.

    I think my favorite part was when Sess made Inu his own plate of food before eating his own food. That was so endearing. I'm extremely looking forward to Sess approaching Taisho about the birds and bees, and I'm also very much looking forward (fearfully) to the return of Tsukiko. Should be... interesting, to say the least.

    Cannot wait for the next chapter!

    P.S. Also eagerly looking forward to the sequel of "Want to be Your Slave" :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2013
    Please keep writing! Your characters are always so well thought out and the plot is exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Arya on April 19, 2013
    Oh god, cute uke pervy inuyasha is sooo hot!!!! I loved the two chapters. Oh course sesshomaru is his awesome self as well. Hope you update soon !!
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  • From ANON - Kerbear on April 19, 2013
    This is a good story with a great start.I cant wait to see what else happens.So many ways to go with this.
    How will Sessh' mom take this?
    how will the rest of the castle take a halfling in it?
    oh!what trouble Inu can get into that Sessh would have to answer for(inu being his)
    I look forward to seeing the update and whst you have in store for Sessh and Inu
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  • From ANON - mi17 on April 19, 2013
    I really enjoy Sess's and Inu Yasha's characterizations. The core of who they are are IC which really allows for such wonderfully different and nuanced characterization choices you've made. Wonderful stuff.
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