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Reviews for The Snow Angel

By : SunsetMiko
  • From ANON - Ahri on August 12, 2016

    I absolutely love your fanfiction!!  It's always amazing!  I hope you write a sequel to this,  as I would be more than happy to see and read another 232 chapters. Your stories are always wonderful,  and worth multiple rereadings! I've read at least 3 of your longer stories and almost all of your one shots!  Thank you for gifting us with your lovely literary skills!   


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  • From ANON - Pamela on December 03, 2015
    What an epic story. This was fantastic. I couldn't stop reading it from start to finish:)
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  • From ANON - faye on June 17, 2015
    i love this story you write the best inuyasha stories ever but please i know you made 80 chapters of she who the prophercy fortold please i am hanging here please finish it
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  • From ANON - Faye on May 25, 2015
    I love this story but I was wondering when will you finish she who the prophercey foretold I had read chapter 1 thru 80 and that's as far as it got please finish it so I can read it some more I have read it over and over again but I can't wait for more new chapters thank you
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  • From ANON - Brittany Hobbs on January 06, 2015
    OMG. I freaking loved it. AMAZING.
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  • From kaotixkry on December 30, 2014
    This was so great and im so sad its over!!!!! What happened to lucky? Kagura? Where are all the kids names? Lol I just started reading this a few months back and the chapters stopped before lucky took a shit down the guest room lol and now about 3 days ago I started the whole story over and now I cant believe its over!!!! What am I to do with no more to read? This was by far one of the best fics ive ever read and I loved your seiko and aiko and aika peeps as well go inuyasha!!! Wheres ur cute lil furry eared children??? Anyways great job cant wait to read more of your work and please please please make a damned sequel!!!!!
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  • From bertabee1 on November 02, 2014
    I loved this story. I read it all the way through and thought it was great. Such an easy read and very intertaning. Thanks.12812
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  • From Inujunkie5788 on July 18, 2014
    chappie 148 had laughing so hard i was crying, i havent laughed that hard in a while
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  • From ANON - Cheryl on July 11, 2014
    hiya, i really love this story, seriously love it. It has depth, length, character build up was proper and not out of character and the love scenes were ehehe :) thank you for this lovely story, i practically spend the whole day just reading everything in one go :P
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  • From ANON - lil_sis4556 on July 06, 2014
    I like your story. It was easily able to keep my attention throughout. Even to the point of little sleep. :) I'm not sure about a sequel. It doesn't seem to need one. But I'm sure it would be interesting. Especially if you had Sesshomaru's mother redeemed. Or made her the villain.
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  • From ANON - DevilHeart435 on June 30, 2014
    First of all, I would like to say, that I loved your story, I have been reading it since it was still in the 100+ chapters. I'm sorry for not writing a review in so long, but I thought that I should wait until the story was complete to give my honest opinion. Anyway, I liked both how the story began and how it ended, though I would have like to see the wedding, but I understand that the story had been drawn out long enough. But I will get to that later, first let's start with the beginning. The idea of how Sesshomaru got turned into a regular (albeit very beautiful) dog, ABSOLUTE GENIUS! As far as I know you are the first one to do this, a very original concept, and I loved how it allowed Sesshomaru and Kagome to bond so deeply early on, and it also showed a more vulnerable side to Sesshomaru. But I'm also glad that you allowed them to build their own relationship as a man and woman, it gave them a chance to really get to know each other better and on a deeper scale.

    There is just to much for me to give a full review about so I will stick to the highlights, I also liked how that traitor Inu and the former Lady of the West got their comeuppance, "Revenge is a dish best served cold" and whoooo boy did Sesshomaru serve that shit up Sub-Zero style! LOL! Oh man that was awesome. The barrier bags were also a great idea in my opinion, it was a brilliant way to deepen their bond and give Sesshomaru the chance to earn her love, and what better gift to give your loved one then the spoils of your enemies right? The Immortality potion, while a rather cliche idea for stories in general, was also a clever way to keep them together and make sure that they didn't lose anyone important to them, most stories of this category usually have her become some form of half demon via the mating mark or some other B.S. but you pulled this off rather nicely. Also, not to be a total perv on you, but the lemon scenes were HOT! *ahem* Moving on!

    Well now comes the part I'm not sure you're going to like, the things I felt were wrong with the story. The first thing I should mention, is the length of the story, namely the chapters and the over-all length of the in general. Don't get me wrong, story is great by all means, but I for one felt that the chapters themselves where a little too short, and that there were too many filler chaps in between the plot. Basically while the chapters were "sweet and to the point" having that many chapters to progress the plot was in my opinion ridiculous, and draws the story out much longer than it needs to be which is something you do a LOT in your stories I noticed. While isn't necessarily a bad thing, not really a good thing either. I know I have no right to complain about your writing style, but just a suggestion, if you have longer chapters and less fillers, it allows you to get to the point of the story faster and for the readers to enjoy the story better. Grammar and error corrections were ok, but they could be better. I know nobody's perfect, but you should probably have your husband or someone at home help you look for the mistakes you missed.

    Now for the plot, I really only have one gripe about the plot, namely what happened with Koharu. While I can understand why Sango chose to let Koharu die, I still think he deserved the chance to repent his actions willing or not. Kagura, despite her essentially being in the same boat as Koharu, was given a chance to repent her actions while he was not. To me that seemed little unfair, especially to Sango, since all throughout the Canon, she keeps saying "I'll save you, Koharu, I'll save you!" and now that she gets the chance she lets him go? Da FUCK?! I mean you could have had Sesshomaru use Tenseiga to restore his body and bring him back to life, or was it too long since he died? Well other than that little business I really enjoyed the story, and I personally can't wait for the sequel, you're a great author and I'd love to see more of your work. Later!
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  • From ChristinaMcMillan on June 29, 2014
    Love it it took me about 3 days to read it though
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  • From ANON - Mandy on June 29, 2014
    This fic has been a 'page-turner' for sure! I'm sure I speak for all your inpatient fans when I say that the main reason we ask when a certain fic will be updated is because you're one of the best there is. For me, that's especially true when it comes to Sesshomaru/Kagome fics. I've tried reading fics of this pairing by others, but they just can't compare to your skill at writing this pairing while keeping everyone in-character. I'm looking forward to more updates to your other fics! Keep up the great work, Sunset!
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  • From ANON - Morraha on June 26, 2014
    That author's note just made me grin hugely! I've been waiting to finish SWTPF for years!! Wooohoooo!!!
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on June 25, 2014
    That was an awesome story, and once you write the sequel, you can consider me a reader of that as well. ^_^ Very nicely done. -Kaia Selene of Rose Paw Designs-
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