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Reviews for The Blue Bikini

By : DreamCatcher121
  • From WannaBeReiner on April 03, 2014
    aye ;) Im so happy this was updated :) It was well worth the wait!!! I liked the little POV of Kikyo as well, it was unexpected but cool :D Im a sucker for fluff so the ending right there made me go 'awwww' :) Yayy! Ok my email is Misspewdiepie16@gmail.com :D And I dooooo have an idea :) I think either in the middle of or RIGHT after they have sex Inuyasha should walk in(He calmed down and realized what his brother had done for him) without knocking(he didn't know any better... lol) and he would freak out or just stand there stunned at the awkward position he found them in. Thatd be GREATTTT xD That's just part of my idea :)What about Rin and Shippo though!! I know they took Kilala and ran off, did they stay in there for the fight? Oh well, anyway:D I shall be awaiting the email that says something along the lines of 'ALmost done!' or 'About to update!' or something like that :) Take your tiem though! Stories are better when the author has time to concentrate on what theyre writing, and they have to be able to deal witht he pressure of 'Update now!" from fans:) I FREAKING LOVE YOU.
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  • From ANON - WannaBeReiner on April 02, 2014
    You should have an email list :D and people who wanna be on it can get emails or texts or something when you're either about to update, if you have a writers block again, etc:3
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 02, 2014
    i love the markings that kogame has as the lady of the west. and now a fight to the death with the dead bitch hell ya! i cant wait to see kogame crush kikyo to dust that slut.
    PLESE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOOON !!!! I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - nikkei on April 01, 2014
    Is it bad that I have been checking back every hour to see if you've posted another chapter all day? Now that I'm typing it I feel like some weird stalker person lol. I just can't help but love this story.
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  • From ANON - nikkei on April 01, 2014
    Ooooohhhhh, I can't wait until you post the next chapter! This one has me soooo excited for the battle scene. The suspense is killing me!
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  • From ANON - WannaBeReiner on April 01, 2014
    Yay!!! I have literally been refreshing this page all day waiting for a new chapter and when I got off work I did it again and this was there and I literally screamed in excitement :3 so happyyyy. I'm gonna be greedy as well, I wanna see the next chapter haha :) WHY THANK YOU I AM PRETTY FABULOUS IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF:D GAH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH WHEN IT FINISHES(never ever ever lol) I wish it could get published I'd buy it in a heartbeat haha :)
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  • From IndigoBeauty on April 01, 2014
    -squeals- Love chapter five-builds up the suspense and anticipation :D -on a side note, im sorry to hear about your writers block, hopefully it passes soon. I hate it when i get it myself.-
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  • From IndigoBeauty on April 01, 2014
    omg!!! now im excited!!!! Kagome and Kikyo fighting until a yield or death?? Freaking epic!!!!!! Cant want for the next chapter :DDDDD
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  • From WannaBeReiner on March 31, 2014
    And I just realized how much ive checked this story lol, in the past hour every time I got bored I came back to this site to see if another chapter was added xD that goes to show how much I love it :3
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  • From ANON - nikkei on March 31, 2014
    I'm sorry I'm being greedy, but I wanna read more! Please!?
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  • From WannaBeReiner on March 31, 2014
    EEEEE THIS CHAPTER!!! Im loving those little moments of Sesshomaru being adorable:) Rare moments of fluff with him are always fun :3 (that flower part was still my favorite though lol) OH SNAP GO KAGOME! BEAT HER ASS! I cant WAIT TO SEE THIS BATTLE!!! And thanks :D haha I am a unicorn though... shhh don't tell anyone ;) That's what reiner stands for in my name;) im a reining unicorn ;)
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  • From WhiteWolfMoonHowl on March 31, 2014
    You HAVE to continue this one, I wanna see Kagome take Kikyo out *wicked smirk* Love the story so far, wonderfully written, and no, the scene was not too drawn out, nor was it horrible, it was actually rather entrancing (especially the fact that Sesshoumaru has a knot, well done) -WWMH-
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on March 31, 2014
    i think that this was a wonderful mating scene and was tastefully done. now the plot thickens with a newly mated kogame how will inuyasha react? and what is happening under the moonlight in the hidden garden ?
    please update again soon i cant wait to read more
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  • From WannaBeReiner on March 31, 2014
    I will make it my goal to review every single chapter >:D but I loved it! For your first ever lemon you sure seemed like a pro hahaha:) It was great! And I totally understand hiding when writing scenes like this (/^) lol, I loved it and I cannot wait for the next chapter(as always!) I can't wait to see what is in store for these two:)
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  • From ANON - k on March 31, 2014
    update soon
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