Reviews for Somone Worthy of This SesshomaruBy : Lady_Demonia |
Please continue this story lol I came back to reread it Love it
Please tell me you will continue this story!!!! I love it soooo much
God story. Looking forward to more.
My question is, is it done? If not I would love more please! And thank you!
Love this story hopefully it's not ur last. R u gonna update it please let me know. Hers my email Cupidslove.ray88@gmail.com. Please let me know
I like this story a lot. There seems to be an issue with the writing in some places, usually with Daiyoki. You never really spell in the same way in each chapter and for the chapter I am on (3) you have put deYoki.
This seems to be the most noticeable mistake in each chapter.
It's kind of a funny story though you can tell it is a one shot. IT actually pretty instering to write it out this way.
Please update soon!!!
Okay. First, I feel I need to apologize to you! I was browsing through this site and kept overlooking this story. It took me 3 days to read it. It's awesome! InuYasha's brash innocence about "EVERYTHING" Sesshoumaru's attitude, the warmth he is feeling towards his brother just below that icy demeanor of his.
I found myself laughing many times during these 9 chapters. Myoga, late as always, could have been more useful before all this. But, his error in not foreseeing this brought InuYasha to this point. And, just who was the one that did this to InuYasha in the first place? Seeing that his cycle started early, according to Myoga. Was this an accident, or intentional that he went into heat and is now pregnant because it? Will Sesshoumaru's mother be making an appearance? I, especially, got a laugh outta how InuYasha told Sesshoumaru he was pregnant. It was almost like an after thought. Hilarious!
Great job!
B reading U!
Nicely done. The tension is there and you've done a good job describing it. So glad to see more of the story. Do hope you plan on a happy ending. Can you throw in more back story of Rin and her brood as well as Kagome and Inuyasha's time together?
except should be accept
bellow should be below
Can't wait to read more
oh please updAte soon!!!!
Thanks for the update, I think you did a good job of keeping them in character, and I can't wait to read more!
oh I really enjoy your story. Mpregs are always my favorite.
i can't wait for the next update 💚
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