Reviews for Defensive InterferenceBy : monophobian |
I just read both stories. They are amazing! So much goes into these and you can tell. Very well written and plotted out. And what imagination you have. You are one of the best writers I've seen on here.
My mind is running with everything that may have happened. Personally, I'm usually an InuYasha fan, but since these are AU, I'm more flexible. In AU, I lean more toward Sesshomaru. These are the first stories I've found that have really hooked me on Koga. He really stands out, I adore him!
What did Sesshomaru do to her?! Everything from just a nasty conversation to near rape has crossed my mind.
I had an ex once and, and when he found out I was moving on - a year later, I might add- he did everything he thought he had the right to do, to "remind me" that I would always be "his" and that he's always right "there". He was arrogant and believed that I should always love him, regardless of what he said or did or if he was even around. He was angry that someone would take that away from him. It culminated in rape, in a sense. I didn't want it, emotionally or mentally, but at the time, I did still have some feelings for him. So even though I said no, he knew what buttons to push, and I did it anyway. It was a similar relationship to what I feel Sesshomaru and Kags had. I was disgusted with myself, broke it off with the new guy7, and didn't talk to my ex again for nearly 10 years. But it's a small world, made smaller by social media...
If anything along those lines happened, shits gonna hit the fan, quick. Even if he didn't touch her, just telling her those things and making her feel them again would fuck her up.
Keep up the great work, hope to see more soon. Please don't wait 2 more years ðŸ˜.
This is really good! Well done
just read both stories and can't wait for more
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