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Reviews for Heading for Tomorrow

By : bookworm
  • From Inuyashalover on April 23, 2019

    Love it. It would be cool if kagome ended up with her own dog ears. I would love to read more.


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  • From ANON - Lost child on April 06, 2016
    You really either need a beta or to proof read before you post. Clam when you mean calm, fill when you mean feel. Also seems quite rushed and lacking in details and feelings. They just say and do things, but no real reason what's driving them or what they feel when someone says something to them. Not to mention it also seems quite squished together and I've been getting confused as to who is talking since within one sentence it goes from one person to another. Can't read it as it is now. Tried, but nope.
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  • From bertabee1 on April 01, 2016
    Good chap looking forward to seeing more.
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  • From bertabee1 on March 19, 2016
    This is a good and interesting story looking forward to reading more. Also my condolences. And glad to know your feeling better.
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  • From bertabee1 on April 30, 2015
    Prey already? Oh well
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  • From bertabee1 on April 17, 2015
    Aw am so happy for them.
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  • From bertabee1 on April 01, 2015
    Even though the chapter is short the story is quite good. Looking forward to next chapter.


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  • From bertabee1 on March 28, 2015
    OK this is already interesting. Like it
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