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Reviews for Stumbling

By : JupiterFrost
  • From evil on June 05, 2016
    Never thought I'll see that day that Inuyasha doesn't start a fight. Update the next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Kris on January 10, 2016
    Looks really promising. I like you story set up.
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  • From Dunkelgelb on January 10, 2016
    Congratulations on posting your first story! With this being your first story, I note that generally, you exhibit very good spelling and punctuation as well as logical sentence structure. Clearly, you paid attention in school and/or studied the writing style of books you've read, to your credit.

    I like that you set your story in wintertime because like Kagome, I rode the bus today and I was grateful for it because it is really, really cold outside right now. As for your first chapter's length, it was long enough to establish some plot, whereas some stories I've seen have just a few lines in most chapters. All in all, good job!
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