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Reviews for Through the Well to Get My Bride

By : OddPairingFan
  • From Miku24 on February 23, 2022

    I don't even know what to say! but I like the story and I love seeing a female Inuyasha, Sess is very determined to get his fiancée. It's a bit ugly that they don't let Inuyasha choose who to love, if Sess manages to take Inuyasha to the past and meets Koga and falls in love with him, what would happen? she even she so she is forced to mate with Sesshoumaru. I imagine that to take her away he would ask the people who care for her for permission and take her back to his time with lies, he would say things like "her father wants to see her, so he will take her away for a while", obviously being her brother and having a resemblance to her, they will believe Sesshoumaru. Of course she won't tell them the part where they want to take her back in time to marry her half-brother and have her locked up in a castle forever. Maybe she doesn't do any of that, and she just takes her forced and threatened to kill her family. It made me sad to know that Kagome doesn't exist here as such but ok, I understand that it is so for Inuyasha to function at that time by itself.
    It's a shame you don't continue the story, as it's been a long time and it doesn't seem like it will ever continue. Anyway, I respect your decision not to continue the story. If you ever decide to continue, I recommend that you change the site since this one is half dead: look for another one like "fanfiction", "watpad" even Ao3, I assure you they are better than this one. We need more female Inuyasha


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  • From ANON - on June 29, 2016

    Hi good try, enjoyed the read. I have to say though I was a bit confused in the first chapter. Your summary didn't specify which pairing but it was intriguing and I thought Sess' bride-to-be was sent to the future and raised as Kagome...but ended up being a female Inuyasha? So this is a Sess x Yash pairing right? Would be good if you could note/tag that in the summary as I wouldn't have read it if so.

    I like that the Higurashis renamed babe as Tenshi which is cute :) Though thought it strange of them to name the girl InuTenshi in an era where they need to hide inu/youkai features as they're doing with the bandana already?

    Second and third chapter picked up. Interesting using Senri-mimi as an info source. I would've thought Bokuseno but Senri-mimi's a better choice for hearing across time. Never come across this before, was unique!

    It'll be interesting seeing Sess come for his bride...though to be honest I'm not keen on the Sess x Yash pairing as I'm not into yaoi which this isn't strictly as Yash is a girl but still feels like it somewhat and not at all keen on seeing a brash Yasha like girl...and they're siblings...so not sure I'll continue this story but otherwise the plot did show promise and I'm kinda curious to see Sess in the modern era...


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  • From ANON - mira on June 17, 2016
    Well this is a promising start!I'm intrigued, and can't wait to read more! Please post the next chapter soon! ^_^
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