Reviews for Demon NatureBy : Shardetector |
This is a wonderful story. I hope you can continue with it.
Wow! You are so incredibly talented. You managed to write a segment of the InuYasha story that captured the characters 100% but ADDED more mature and frankly, amazing, parts. I read a few stories on here and this one by far is better than anything else I have come across. 5*****!! I want to read more of your work!!!!
I was so very excited whenever I saw that this particular story had an update that was recent. I've read this like two or three times leisurely over the last few years. I had it saved in one phone, then that phone died and I didn't have it saved in another one but I finally found it again. And I was always so sad when it stopped at chapter 10 and I was just left wondering what was going to happen and now I am super excited because your story genuinely grabs me and transports me into your version of that universe and if it isn't the most amazingly primal story I have read on this site yet then I don't know what else there is to compare it to. I think this would be the way it would have actually happened in real life between them in my own personal mind because it's perfect.
I hope to see another update soon, I know that seeing reviews always tends to boost my little writing muse into gear so I'm hoping that this reaches you and that you're able to see how much I am enjoying this story one writer to another. Amazing.
Thank you for another amazing chapter. You leave no detail unturned!! I re-read this story twice and I keep coming back for more! Thanks for taking time to write, I hope you'll continue to be inspired. I always come back to check up on your updates :)
I love this story! Well done, great imagination and just all around good writing. I hope to see more soon, as this is the second time I've read this story over the last couple years. I came back to it hoping for more
Love your story! It is such a good read and very well written! Truly more satisfying than how the series went hehe
Can’t wait to read more!
Cant wait for the next chapter, I love it
this has been a blast to read. :D
I am looking forward to more.
Write more soon please.
I need MORE ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Love love this story. Cant wait to read more. :+D ja ne
This is amazing! I actually feel that I like this version better than the manga in some ways. I can't wait to read more.
This story is fabulous! I’m so glad you updated it!!! I love the different point of view you’ve taken. I’m sorry to hear about everything happening in your life. But please do continue this story as your writing is incredible and I truly can’t stop reading it!!!
So excited to see you back online! I’m happy to see such an amazing update! Can’t wait for more!
Yay! *happy dance* I'm sorry to hear about how hetic real life has been, but I'm so happy you've finally updated this story! And WHAT an update! I wonder if the kotodama affected Inuyasha more strongly because he had the jewel on him at the time? If it creates equal power needed to subdue the youkai it's subduing, then if he's more powerful it would be more powerful too, yeah? Of course, that's not necessarily true since in the canon Kagome 'sat' Inuyasha to undo a transformation, but fuck it, this isn't canon so you can do whatever the hell you want! Plus it could still be because he had the jewel, because the jewel itself, rather than Inuyasha being full youkai, could be what gave the rosary a power boost. Either way, I'm not worried that this Kagome will abuse her power over him. She's not going back and forth through the well, she's already his mate, and with as badly as it affected him and the way she already feels about it now, I wouldn't be surprised if she demand Kaede remove the damn thing. Plus if it wasn't for Kagome jumping on Inuyasha at literally the last second Sango would have killed Inuyasha while he was down! Way to go, Kaede. You almost got your 'big brother' murdered, ya old hag. LOL! Ohhhhhh I can't wait to see their faces when the mate bit comes out, and just in general where you take this story from here. Sounds like you're definitely hinting at bringing Naraku in as the main bad guy, which makes perfect sense. Update as soon as you can! :-)
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