Reviews for Only HumanBy : Midnight-Prince |
This is definitely a different take on Rin and sesshomaru I really like and I'm curious to see how the relationship between the two develops hopefully you pick the story back up.
I created an an account because holy hell... this story is hot and I do hope more is to come in the future!
Yo. I made an account and everything on this site, knowing I probably won’t be on here that often, simply to let you know you HAVE to finish this story. This is so good. I am addicted to the Inuyasha series and obviously always thought of what I relationship between these two would look like as Ron got older. I think you do a great job of expressing the internal emotions and the desire and just bravo!ππΏππΏ Please keep the story going, I’m already addicted π
I hope to read more. This is a very interesting story. Please keep the good work.
Oh. My. Gosh. PLEASE, for all that is holy, please continue! Love it!
I love this story so much, I would love to see more chapters. Need to know whats going to happen, great writing. Please update.
You're one of the only few writers who actually have spot on interpretations of the characters. Nothing they do or say is out of line in the situation you've developed so the story feels so immersive. Please continue and finish this series!
10/10
This story is really good! The sex scenes are hot and I like your development of Sesshomaru and Rin's relationship. More please!
Great story! Excellent writing style too! Please continue the story :-)
loved the chapter, I hope that Sesshomaru may have feelings for rin. Kisses
Welcome to AFF! I like your story so far; hopefully Sesshomaru will end up giving Rin the business repeatedly before you're done. As far as "unwinding" from the tension built up between himself and Rin at the end of Chapter 2, perhaps he'll go looking for Kagura?
Some other thoughts: you have a more involved writing style than some new authors I've seen, which I think is good. Rather than post short, almost meaningless drabbles, you post big, long paragraphs. You also pay attention to the formatting, putting indentations at the beginning of most paragraphs. Your vocabulary is rather advanced and your spelling is also very good.
Nice work!
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