Reviews for Forevermore and StillBy : Kuronohime |
I hope this is not the end of the story she deserves him
Very unique and interesting concept. A part of me wishes there were one more chapter, but on the other hand it might be best to end it where you did. From your portrayal of Inuyasha it seems he won't have much of a right to be heartbroken, and if he and Kagome still wind up hooking up at some point down the road, no harm no foul. She could hardly be blamed for "cheating" on him when they're not yet officially together. I'm more curious how a now-a-child-again Shippou would react to everything, but as you made clear, his mind wasn't really as childlike as he'd portrayed, so if he and Kagome can both be mature about everything like it was a fun one time thing (or many times in the one day, LOL) and just move on and remain friends afterwards, then it seems Naraku's wish granting wasn't all that evil. Good story! :-)
this is so good and a different take on the story know you are writing many more and they are just as good but really looking forward to more chapters
really enjoying it please continue want to see shipping kick inus ass
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