Reviews for Back To YouBy : TheWinterCyan |
I've literally never reviewed any fic on this website so idk what prompted me to write this but holy hell. Is there an important reason why Sango and Kagome are so violent?! Like ffs, they were bad enough in the anime n manga, using the beads 24/7 and attacking with hiraikotsu, but harsh kicks and slaps?! And everyone's just swell with it?? Ik this is just a fic and this was most likely written when you were still a kid, but shit, man, that's fucked up, and I never understood how violence and abuse was funny. No matter how the creator painted the tone of it. Anyways, this fic had some promise to me but the abuse just turned me off from the whole plot.
Guess I'm gonna stick to re-reading for now smh.
Wow, so what's going happen next. And who was that had attacked Inuyasha and his Older Brother? And what about Kagome?
Please update soon!!!!! I need to know what is gonna happen next lol love it
More please. And thank you
Great chapter. Kagome is about make things a little messy with kouga. I can't wait to find out more about the creature who has appeared upfront of of inuyasha and sesshomaru
GOOD CHAP!!!
suspense was there!
Gore — not like so much.
Story—like LOTS
Love the plot. Some typo and grammar issues, but easily overlooked.
I love the chemistry of the brothers. Was never a fan until I started reading some well made yaoi fanfics. Then it made sense.
Hope you’ll finish the fic. Can’t wait for your update.
First: Drooling Fangirl here! Wow! :) :). :)
Second: I really hope you finish this. I have made a habit of only reading finished works because I get interested in a story and the writer drops it. And It’s Really Good!
Third: things I like. I like your description of Inuyasha’s response to Sesshomaru when he walks in and sit down next to him. I like your use of spacing like “what the fuck” and “shit etc..” and “What in the world”. Nice way to bring attention to those thoughts.
Happy to see another chapter!
what is sasunarusasu?
Happy to see another chapter!
what is sasunarusasu?
I'm realy liking this so far, I can't wait to read more!
OMG this story just started and its got me hooked already. I knew he was going to go back, hopefully he can let go of his pride and end up with sesshomaru. But theres no fun without a lil fighting right lol. I can't wait until you update. !
Another awesome chapter! I wonder what the “gift” is that they possess? Can’t wait to read more!!!
Oh my the plot thickens. I can't wait to read the next chapter
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