LOL!  RUN  SHIPPO, RUN!!!!  Goodness, that was great!  Sesshoumaru has proven he has a bit of a prankster within him!  So awesome!  I guess being around InuYasha and crew has really rubbed off on the formerly stoic Lord.  Awesome job!

those dogs are certainly naughty, aren't they?  Wow, they just can't keep their paws (hee hee) off each other.  Oh but, InuYasha is showing a few IMPORTANT telltale signs.  Enlarged and tender or sensitive nipples.  Tiredness, some nausea, extremely overactive sex drive!  Yup!  Signs are abundant.  I'm sure Jeninji has dealt with pregnant 'females' in his profession.  Sesshoumaru should just ask him.  Act like he's curious about how pregnancies effect the body.  What are the signs, etc.  Jeninji being himself wouldn't think nothing of it.  He'd be happy just talking about anything of a medical nature.

AWESOME CHAPTER!  The fact that there are 2 made my day!  On to the next chapter!

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Whoa!  InuYasha in command!  The festival is in very good hands!  It sounds like it will be a smashing success!  

I feel for Usagi!  Poor little guy.  However, he's blessed to have Kenichi now.  Taking him to the temple was a great idea.  Lay your troubles at the altar, and let the Lord do his work.  

​​​​Shippo's little girl is growing up!  How sweet!  Yeah I is a good boy, but I do think a little talk is in order.  LOL!

​​​​​​Nicely done!

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​​​​​​My goodness!  It was an honor to read this!  It was awesome to see InuYasha and Sesshoumaru have that moment together.  Talks at bedtime when the house has quieted down for the night, are the best!  That's when my hubby and I have our best conversations.  We talk about us as a family, and our plans, what we think about certain situations.  About how the kids and grandbabies are doing.  What plans we should make for them.  We talk about what we're going to be doing there next day.  What needs to be done.  We talk, period.  No interruptions from outside or no mommy I can I, or daddy I need.  LOL! !

Crazy thing about this chapter.  Sesshoumaru has been reading this book for the LONGEST, trying to figure out IF InuYasha can or IS pregnant.  He's been sort of agonizing over it, only to have InuYasha come to him wondering sort of the same thing.  And seeming to be okay with it!  LOL!  That stuck me as hilarious!  InuYasha having dreams of their first child, while Sesshoumaru has been stressing over and doing research on the very idea!  CLASSIC!

I'm over the moon about the love scene!  The red pen worked! LOL!  It started out well, then I saw where you started to rush it a bit.  Then happiness resumed, because I saw that you caught it and slowed it down.  YAY and Kudos to you for a job well done!  You put the fire and passion back were it needed to be!  I'm off to the next chapter soon!

AWESOMENESS WELL ACHIEVED!

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​​​​​​My goodness!  It was an honor to read this!  It was awesome to see InuYasha and Sesshoumaru have that moment together.  Talks at bedtime when the house has quieted down for the night, are the best!  That's when my hubby and I have our best conversations.  We talk about us as a family, and our plans, what we think about certain situations.  About how the kids and grandbabies are doing.  What plans we should make for them.  We talk about what we're going to be doing there next day.  What needs to be done.  We talk, period.  No interruptions from outside or no mommy I can I, or daddy I need.  LOL! !

Crazy thing about this chapter.  Sesshoumaru has been reading this book for the LONGEST, trying to figure out IF InuYasha can or IS pregnant.  He's been sort of agonizing over it, only to have InuYasha come to him wondering sort of the same thing.  And seeming to be okay with it!  LOL!  That stuck me as hilarious!  InuYasha having dreams of their first child, while Sesshoumaru has been stressing over and doing research on the very idea!  CLASSIC!

I'm over the moon about the love scene!  The red pen worked! LOL!  It started out well, then I saw where you started to rush it a bit.  Then happiness resumed, because I saw that you caught it and slowed it down.  YAY and Kudos to you for a job well done!  You put the fire and passion back were it needed to be!  I'm off to the next chapter soon!

AWESOMENESS WELL ACHIEVED!

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Oh, I was hoping to see the gent or healer!  He was such a sweet soul!  Maybe he could shed some light for Sesshoumaru, and help him figure out IF InuYasha is pregnant.  Although, I feel that Sesshoumaru already knows the answer, confirmation is what's needed at this point!  Jininji (sp?) DOES help Sesshoumaru chronicle InuYasha pregnancy and the birth of Keiko!

Cream Ice!  LOL!  Sesshoumaru's first taste of ice cream reminded me of my kids.  Especially, my little Javier!  He's the baby of the family.  I have him a tiny taste on the tip of my spoon when he was 7 months old.  Next thing I knew, he stuck his whole head in my bowl!  He had ice cream ALL OVER HIM!  LOL!

AWESOMENESS ACHIEVED!

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Great chapter!  I see InuYasha's starting to show outward signs of his condition.  Irritability!  Any slight, no matter how insignificant it is, could see him off!  LOL!  To be totally honest, I DON'T miss those days.  My hubby is a saint!  When I think about all the crap I put him through, it's a wonder we made it!  LOL!

I'm happy Kenichi adopted Usagi.  Now either will be alone ever again!

Well done!

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I must have been asleep to have missed this!  Usagi.  That's Sailor Moon's real name, isn't it?  I'm the original Japanese version, right?  Bunny is the bunny's name!  LOL!  I love it!  

But, in all seriousness though, Usagi's story is a sad one.  The boy was so eaten up by guilt for living, while his family died.  It's called Survivors Remorse.  I learned about that in my Psych classes in college.  A person falls into the 'why me?' state of mind.  Why did I live, while others died?  Why was MY life spared?  That is an extremely crushing thought, especially for one so young.  However, I think Usagi doesn't realize that it was his father's wish and hope that his son lives on.  That was his father's last and greatest gift.  Find a life for yourself, ours is done here.  But, you must live on!  Isn't that truly what a parent does?  Look out for and protect our children from any conceivable harm?  Usagi's family went to their deaths knowing that he would be safe.  I think Kenichi is the best person to show him that.  InuYasha is a good source to asset as well!  He's been in the same boat himself, so I think Usagi will be fine.  He just has to get over seeing Sesshoumaru's terrifying display.  Sesshoumaru in defense mode not a look you want to be on the end of!  LOL!

AWESOMENESS ACHIEVED!

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Hey there!  Another great chapter!  It is amazing to get a look as to how their mating has changed not only their lives, but the lives of the castle and town as a whole!  InuYasha introducing indoor plumbing to the kitchen, connecting it to the main building, adding storage space and break rooms.  Signs of movement into the modern world!

​You showcased more of InuYasha's transformation as a Lord and leader, while never losing his nurturing side.  His advice to Shippo in handling his wife's fears, should be a great help to the fox.  Maybe he'll get her and the kids to the festival.  So grandpa Inu can spoil themthem!  LOL!  It's awesome to have grandkids!  LOL!  I love it!  I have 6, and my hubby and I go crazy when they come!  LOL!  Best part, we get to send their hyper asses  back home at the end of the day, so our kids can have fun trying to calm them down!!!!!  HAHAHAHAHA!!!  

I'm off to the next chapter!  So excited that you posted 2 @ 1 time!  I'm a happy camper!

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It's just amazes me how intricate you've made InuYasha.  How smoothly he is in his role as Co-Lord of the West.  Although, I'm not surprised about his abilities.  InuYasha could NEVER be called dumb!  His mother was a princess, and royal blood flows through his veins from all sides.  So it would stand to reason that he would know how to act in court.  His ideas on the refugee situation are on point!  Sesshoumaru will be proud of all his ideas.  

The point about InuYasha and Jaken becoming good friends was a nice twist.  But then again, Jaken really didn't have a reason for animosity towards InuYasha.  He was only following Sesshoumaru's lead.  If Sesshoumaru hated hanyous and humans, he would too.  Out of solidarity and loyalty for his Lord.  

BokusenO didn't know!  Wow, that was a shock!  The 3-4000 year old magnolia tree didn't know anything about inu knotting!?  I guess Lord Inu No Taisho didn't think it was necessary to tell him about it.  It wasn't like he knew he would not live to see both his boys grow up, so he could advise them his self.  

Great chapter!  Sesshoumaru is coming closer to the answer he's looking for.  I'm so curious how InuYasha's gonna feel WHEN HE finds out he's pregnant!  Now, the reaction must be EPIC!  LOL!

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This was one of the best chapters of this story!  We get to see InuYasha take on a more assertive role as second Lord of the West!  He showed the counsel that he is able to hold his own in a meeting, and has knowledge that is EXTREMELY important for the fastly approaching future.  

I can't wait to see how they put InuYasha's plans to work!  His thought to make the town into somewhat of a maze was awesome.  It's a wonder Sesshoumaru hadn't thought of it first.  But, he relied upon his strength and wits more than InuYasha had.  So, I guess he could overlook somethings.  

Can't wait to see the situation with the bugs handled.  There's an unseen enemy out  there that needs to be crushed!  LOL!

AMAZING JOB!

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😂 Hahaha!!!   I see Shippo has made an appearance!  Love that runt!  Oh, how sweet!  Shippo has a made and kits!  The circle of life NEVER pauses or STOPS!  I'm glad to see Shippo has grown up, and is thriving.

Ahh, yes!  The great temper tantrum of InuYasha's!  Get another manifestation of what's to come!  One moment you're all set to fuck your lover's brains out, then the next you want to bash his brains in!  Jorge always said he knew I was pregnant, when I turned into Sybil!  He swore I had multiple personalities!  LOL!  Maybe he was right!  

​​​​​​However, it was a great achievement on Shippo's part to get InuYasha to see the benefits of having a healer in the palace!  

AMAZING JOB!

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Blessing is right!  After 200 years, it took a big bite to get InuYasha's  womb into action!  LOL!  It WOULD have to be something that 'simple', wouldn't it?  Too funny for words!  I bet when he's told, both will think it to be a lie!  Knowing Sesshoumaru, he'd be the one to accept it first.  Man!  This is too good!  A big bite blessing!  Will they commemorated the moment by having a shine built in honor of the but that helped make mpreg possible for InuYasha?  LOL!!!

But, on a serious note.  Where did all those bugs come from?!  Someone had to lure them all together to reek havoc everywhere.  I hope they find the one responsible quicklyquickly, and get to the bottom of things!  No pun intended for that one, LOL!

AMAZING JOB!  I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!  The news of the pending pup should be awesome!  And, will FORCE the much needed healers into the castle... Sesshoumaru's word!

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