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Reviews for Youkai lust

By : Dariana
  • From RekkaShinen on June 17, 2003
    LOVED IT!!! I hope you continue to update!!! Please update! ONEGAI!!!! You just had to leave us begging for more huh? *sigh* I hope you do update soon. I'd love to see what happens. So, good luck! Good writing! You can't really tell that English is your second language. I love your flare for capturing the reader to keep them reading!
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  • From ANON - darby on June 17, 2003
    wow. those two chapters are insanely good. i must say, though english is not your first language, and though you have a little trouble going between "he" "his" and "him" *and the same with the feminine* every so often, your grammar and word usis vis vastly above that of nearly every other author on this site (including those who speak english as their first language.)
    i must say, you are really, very talented. please write more! i was so excited when i saw you had added! now alll you have to do is write more! (:
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  • From ANON - Sorrow on June 17, 2003
    She forgot hmm oh man you have to write more.
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  • From ANON - Blood Budan on June 17, 2003
    oOOoooooooo.....MORE CHAPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will sango be there? what will she say??? TELL ME... *sits on knees and begs* TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Blood Budan~
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  • From ANON - Chibikitsune on June 16, 2003
    It has the makings of a really great story you should add more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Nunichan on June 16, 2003
    OMG!!!! It can't be, Inuyasha better apologize tr for for what he did.Poor Kagome I fell sorry for her. UPDATE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ssjprincess on June 16, 2003
    That was an excellent beginning! It leaves a multitude of possible scenarios that could be played out. So yes, I think you should most definitely continue this. I want to find out how Kagome and Inuyasha deal with the repercussions of that moment when Inuyasha's youkai blood dominatred his ability to reason. It should be entertaining!
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  • From songkiya on June 15, 2003
    you should add more, anyway, it's was good
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  • From ANON - koharia on June 15, 2003
    i would like to know what happens next...please write the next chapter soon...oh yeah by the i liked it
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2003
    Your mastery of the English language is pretty good, only a couple word confusions. Poor Kagome, I hope everything gets cleared up and for that to happen you must continue. Please update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2003
    this is a story that has possibilities this is a kind of havehavehave been looking for! i hope you continue it but don't totally turn this around. i have seen stories that start out like this and then we have a sweet and entirely cowed hanyou/ but that is not his personality and what gives inuyasha his appeal as well as sesshomaru is the wildness, the instincts, their inane cruelety and the occasional bout of sweetness gives us the attarction to their character.

    good luck
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  • From ANON - vegetasangel on June 14, 2003
    you think people are going to let you go after that? Nope I want more please update
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  • From ANON - Laura-chan on June 14, 2003
    That was good, even if... Poor Kagome!! ç_ç Being raped is not something that you like... But, after all, she loves Inuyasha...


    oticoticed a few grammar mistakes... for example: _She was being raped by his love._ .... ehm, shouldn't it be: She was being raped by HER love ?

    However is a good chapter... I hope to read soon the next!
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  • From ANON - writegirl on June 14, 2003
    Hmmmm, you've got me interested. Cant wait to read the rest of it!!!!
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  • From on June 14, 2003
    This is good! I so want to see an update! Kudos on the English by the way(I speak French originally)!
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