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Reviews for the love never could be

By : DarkBreed
  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on August 31, 2003
    i love it please update soon and by the way i thought sesshoumaru was spelled with a lower case "m" and not an upper case "oh woh well ignore me nice story anyway
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  • From ANON - Me on August 31, 2003
    i hope you liked that i had alot of school work to do. but i stayed up until 2:00 last night and stared to type on my frozen heart and then typed on this. hope your happy. a hint for chapter 5. Inu-Yasha finds out the truth about his brother.
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  • From ANON - watergoddesskasey on August 30, 2003
    good
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  • From ANON - dc2048 on July 31, 2003
    Just so that you know, I really enjoy this story and looking forward for the next chapter. I would also like to say that any good reader can look past bad grammer and spelling. This is not for a grade in any class, but a way to express yourself and tell a story.
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  • From ANON - Disturbed Demon Gurl on July 24, 2003
    Well that was an interesting fic so far. I like the idea that you got going on in your story and I love it very much
    It's just that I think that maybe you should look into the gang a little more after that chapter because now that
    Inuyasha know's Sesshoumaru has Kagome I don't think that he will just sit around, after all you did make him love her
    in this story. But That is up to you and well it would seem a little weird if Inu is looking for kagome and know's that Sesshoumaru
    has her, and He never shows up to try and get her back. But hey that is up to you I like the story so far and how it's going and
    I hope that you continue to read my story 'Unseen Love' ok well gots to go. - Disturbed Demon Gurl AKA - Devil
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  • From ANON - K Ses Sesshou on July 23, 2003
    Kai: Pretty new idea, actually... Sesshoumaru being in love with her from the beginning...
    Sesshou: Aren't you glad you finally read it, Kai?
    Kai: O.o That *I* finally read it, Mr. I'm-Too-Busy-To-Have-A-Life?!
    Sesshou: I read it... I just never got around to reviewing it...
    Kai: Stupid ass...
    Sesshou: Watch it, cuz.. I know where you sleep.
    Kai: yeah I know where I sleep, too. Big Deal.
    Sesshou: You'll be saying "big deal" when I steal your InuYasha plushie.
    Kai: O.O You wouldn't dare....
    Sesshou: Try me.
    Kai: Fine!! I'll just steal your Kagome plush!!
    Sesshou: What are you talking about? I don't have a plush Kagome...
    Kai: *grins* then what's that you have sitting on your desk at home?
    Sesshou: Aw, dammit! When'd you see that?!
    Kai: When I went to visit your mom. Fess up. You have a Kagome doll.
    Sesshou: Doesn't mean a thing.
    Kai: Right, lil cousin. Keep telling yourself that.
    Sesshou: Anyway, we were finally able to read and rw thw this story. We like it, very much so. I'd read it again, if Kai didn't have to get work done, and it wasn't time to eat dinner. I hope you get to update soon-
    Kai: Me too!!
    Sesshou: *Ahem* As I was saying.. I hope you get to update soon, but there's no pressure. And if you need any help, Kai and I are more than willing to help out. Even if it's as Beta readers. We've done it before.
    Kai: lol.. you ARE my Beta Reader, Sesshou...
    Sesshou: Yes, poor unfortunate me.
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  • From ANON - Roxotaku on July 21, 2003
    Okay, I struggled through the first chapter of your story. I have also read the reviews and the "Aruther's notes" and such to try and get a grip on what is going on here. If you use Microsoft word like I do, then you can do spellcheck and grammar check before you post your stories can't you? Are you so eager to put up what you write in the hopes everyone will gush over you that you can't correct your work? Would you ratheok fok foolish? Many good stories are wreaked by poor English skills. Also, you write like you are very young, a lemon is rated NC-17, not R. Are you old enough to be here? This is supposed to be a "safe haven" for us adults who write porn - like I do! That is what a lemon is, porn, if you are not old enough to buy porno in a bookstore you are not old enough to be here. I suggest you post on other sites like MediaMiner.org and FanFiction.net.

    This is not a flame! If it makes you upset, it just proves my point that you are too young to be here.
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  • From ANON - its me inuyasha lover on July 21, 2003
    HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.......how sad you put inuyasha and kagome agianst eachother *crys:'( ya know i thought that once he said i diddnt no how to tell you...and she new that he loved her that she might kiss him or something like that i diddnt think that kagome was going to be such a witch to him i could never do that to him cuz i love him!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so much (and yes im kagome in disgise) i would never do that to him how sad (but aaaaaaanyways i liked the way that you gave detials on how they moved and how thay said it cuz thats really important in a story so people can visualize it in t min minds (imagion it) cuz evry time i read a story i imagion it in my mind and i see it as if im watching it right in front of me ...well anywho it was good all tho i wish that kagome and inuyasha wernt the ones that were going to fight but it was good and well send me chaper 2 asap along with 3 and so on as you go ...well i want to o what happens next and stuff so e-mail me or talk to me on msn messenger about it well see ya bye
    love me inuyasha lover aka:(kagome 15)
    byebye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JMax on July 20, 2003
    I love this story!! Hope u write more!
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  • From ANON - tora-yasha on July 20, 2003
    i love it!!!!!! it's great but sometimes i can't uderstand until i go back and read it again. i know u said u have grammar problems so i have a idea for u. maybe you could send it to a close friend or author who could check your work for you and people won't bug u about it. i'm saying this so that u won't be bugged about it. i send my work for ff.net and mm.org to friends so they can check it. it works great since my grammar sucks!!!!!! please consider my idea and post the next chappie soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jess on July 20, 2003
    I really like the way your going with this
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  • From on July 20, 2003
    will inu-yasha ever learn, to stop thinking of himself? ::sigh:: well any way please continue the story i am really enjoying it!!!!!
    p.s if you need a beta read at any time i am happy to help.

    toodles, sessylover
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  • From ANON - thunder sister on July 19, 2003
    I like you very much!!!! You actually made a sesshomaru/ kagome fanfic without me flaming you by the minute! I actually liked your fic! Isn't that a miracle? Well, not really. I like any Sess/ Kag fic as long as it makes Inu and Kikyo looks like a pair of *beep* *beep*. Uhm, yeah, I meant to do that... And you made Sess not shy about his feelings. That's so great! Write more. Write more! Write more! Write more god dammit! Write more! And I mean it! I don't want to wait a few months just to update like that other Inu fic... I want you to write more. Write more or I'll sue you! Just kidding, I really don't know how to sue you even if I wanted to. So your free temporarly. Just until I learn how to sue which is in a few years. Prepare to meet your maker! (and no I don't mean your mom and dad) BWAHAHA!!!!
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  • From ANON - anoymous on July 19, 2003
    terrific
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  • From ANON - darkbreed on July 18, 2003
    hey, i said i cant spell and i meant it. come on we all have some thing we're not good at. and fuck you i can write the a/n in my story if i want to. some people like them and think their funny. im not talking to u LadySesshou i love your stories. k thanks for reading.
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