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Reviews for A Rage Between Brothers

By : Rukhsana
  • From ANON - LKhushrenada on July 16, 2003
    i love this fanfic, therefore i love u.... keep going please? *puppy-dog eyes*
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  • From Sei on July 16, 2003
    There's nothing wrong with chapter six...but I know exactly what you are feeling. I hate when I put out a chapter that I don't feel is all it could be (which is most of the time hehe). I think it's good that you've addressed Miroku's feel for for Sango, and her reaction was quite believable. I only wonder what will happen after the baby is born, should she decide to resume their relationship...not that I doubt Miroku's intentions...but that Sesshoumaru might try to kill him if Miroku acts as a father (even if Sesshoumaru wants to kill his half breed son). I'll just have to wait and see what your muse decides ^^
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  • From Sei on July 14, 2003
    Poor Shippou! The events of this chapter were unexpected, but that's one of the reasons I like it. I just *giggles* never pictured Sesshoumaru giving Shippou "the talk." Nice work (^_^)
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  • From songkiya on July 14, 2003
    This fic is good, you have an interesting writing style, and thats a good thing, keep it up
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  • From ANON - Kurai on July 13, 2003
    ...interesting title to chapter...
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  • From ANON - BSASAMI on July 13, 2003
    What is Sesshy up to...Does he want Kagome too? Damn, what's up with these demons especially Sesshy!
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  • From Sei on July 12, 2003
    Your muse must be related to my muse (^_^) I never know where things are going until my fingers hit the keys!

    At any rate, I like the meeting with Sesshoumaru, and I am curious about his feelings for the child-to-be. Will he be a father, or will he eat the baby for dinner? lol I'll just have to wait and see (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Kenji on July 12, 2003
    hahaha, sesshy never left the forest. i assume he was masteurbating to the whole scene with kagome and inu
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  • From on July 11, 2003
    nice fic. i wonder how you are gonna portray sesshy in the next chap
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  • From Sei on July 11, 2003
    Ah, I wonder what Lord Sesshoumaru will think about fathering a hanyou. Nice chapter, I'm enjoying the seriousness of this fic.
    -Sei
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  • From ANON - Lady Sethia on July 10, 2003
    OOOh I loved it. Not very many peeps write dark fics, good to have a change. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Lachesis on July 10, 2003
    you write about the rape like you've actually experienced it. talk about bringing up emotions i didn't think i still felt. good story.
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  • From Sei on July 09, 2003
    Great chapter, I like the emotions you have going on with Inuyasha, and Kagome.
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  • From ANON - Roxotaku on July 03, 2003
    I've gotten some interesting reviews and responses to this story. I thought I might address some of them here. The only reason Sesshomaru wants a shard in my story is because he needs it to keep his human arm from rotting so he can take Tetsusaiga from Inu-Yasha. I have not seen all the anime, only what was shown on CN, so I drew from the episode where Naraku gave him an arm that could use Tetsusiga, since I don't know if he ever gets to use Tetsusaiga in the future. I am still collecting the manga as well. Also, I don't know where in the story this takes place, chronologically. But I do know it comes after my other stories (see "The Unexpected.") (The only fic I have written that is not related is the "To Love and Protect" story.) So since it comes after "The Unexpected" Kagome and Inu-Yasha have become lovers. I hate unrequited love, so I had to put Kagome with Inu-Yasha because she loves him. I find it funny that many people seem to like Kagome and Sesshomaru as lovers vs. Inu-Yasha and Kagome. Personally, I never thought they had any reason to be together unless you like AU fics more. Anyway, I am thinking of updating this story (by that I mean doing some re-writes) and am working on another chapter. Thanks to all who gave me constructive critiques.
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  • From ANON - Soudesuka_Shurikens on July 03, 2003
    I SPY SOMETHING SMALL GREEN AND PERVERTED....I DON'T KNOW COULD IT BE JAKEN?
    THIS STORY WAS SO COOL. AFTER FINISH READING I HAD THE GREATEST URGE TO BE BONDAGED..RIGHT NOW
    DO YOU THINK COLD SHOWERS WORK FOR GIRL? KEEP UPDATING AND KEEP ON TRUCKING.

    QUESTION_____IF SESSHOUMARU WERE TO GET A PROSTHETIC LEFT ARM COULD HE WEILD THE TETSUIGA. OR DOES IT SPECIFICALLY HAVE TO BE A HUMAN ARM OR WHATEVER?????????????????
    SESSHOUMARU IS SO HOT.
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