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Reviews for The Hurdle

By : Dariana
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Jessica Wolf on October 17, 2006
    I think this would make a great angst story. Having everyone else live happily ever after, while Kagome, the one most people sympathize with, dies alone-never gets to live her life loved in the way she longs to most. Why don't you read "Unworthy One" by Vincent. It might help you out of your rut. The story is great and leads you through all emotions. I really enjoyed this story and hope to read more soon.
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  • From Iyasu on August 24, 2006
    Wow... poor Kagome... I can understand her doing it, but I could see Inuyasha being the one who said the one word, since he's always telling her that she's useless.
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  • From ANON - se7endeadlysins_lust on October 17, 2005
    ohhhh, i love it!!! please write some more chapters. this story just screams continuation!!
    ja ne
    _lust
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  • From ANON - roxy on March 13, 2005
    I noticed the date where you started this story. Yet you never made any chapters expect the first. I read this story off a friend of mine's favorites. It seems A LOT of people already like this story. Maybe cause of your great writing skills. It just seems so alive to me i guess you could say. I wish you'd make new chapter but it seems like you decided not to a long time ago. Yet, i won't give up on this story. I'll wait forever lmao seems retarded I know. Wish you'd get someone else to write the rest if you can't cause I LOVE IT!!! I'm usally not like this if the person didn't write A long chapter. Yet, something is differnet I guess its cause I kinda feel the way she does about things. I don't know but n e wayz i'll quiet typing but try and complete this story. Maybe you can turn it like she kills herself at the end or something. I'm not really sure I just wish u'd make up more to it. WEll, at lest try. Hope to be seeing a new chapter SOON!
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  • From ANON - animechick on February 21, 2005
    please this is really interesting keep going
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  • From ANON - animegurl 101 on February 10, 2005
    continue please it's good

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  • From ANON - Mage on November 15, 2004
    I know this is only filler, but could you continue it, you've given it too much plot.
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on June 03, 2004
    Wow talk about OOC Kagome cutting herself this is a really good story so far I hope that you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 25, 2004
    Wow. Great story so far. I really think you should continue it. Sounds like she is being abused by a step-father. Or used to be. Something sent her off on the edge. And why did Inu-Yasha come there. Did he suspect something going on with her before and is now checking it out? abo about her feelings about Naraku having most of the Shikon no Tama? Go with it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - liTtLeKiTtY on March 25, 2004
    Oh thats so sad hope your not doing that. I hope you write more to this story its really good so far.
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  • From ANON - PirateLunaSpike on October 05, 2003
    Wow, amazing... That was an excellent one-shot,.. or you could be kind and continue to add on to this lovely masterpiece. I would love you even if you added only only last chapter on to it. Like a chapterm Inm Inu Yasha's POV about how he really feels about Kagome, love or not. Then he could smell the blood.. etc etc. This fanfic was amazing. Please do not let your talent go to waste and continue to write for all the poor patethic souls like me, that forever feel the need to find, read and review the very best of fanfics.
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  • From ANON - Mija on July 27, 2003
    hey its better to write down stuff than actually do it..(knows from experience here) and i love this story i know its a bit sad, but i understand how you can love someone soo much but not have it reed ted that it hurts soo much more inside that you have to hurt outside to block it out, ok ok im being morbid but i was a very sad child lol no had tons of friends and junk but inside i hurt still..anyhow i like this fic but as i can see you havent updated in a looooooooooonooong time....sooooooo will ya please update??? or is it just that one shot????
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  • From ANON - Aphrodite on July 23, 2003
    wow , girl u need to update like right about now and make this into a fic!!!!!
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  • From ANON - QueenC on July 21, 2003
    oh god this is so good. please continue it!! and please not let it be true that inuyasha doesn't care about her. update update continue continue!!
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