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By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Blue Saiyan Angel on January 02, 2004
    Hi! Wow, gotta hand it to ya, I'm not a Sess/Rin fan, but I like the way you have portrayed them in your fic. It doesn't give the 'she's his kid and the whole incest feel to it'. I am a little concerned a the the status of AFF.net. Do you post your stories on another site? I am going to email you with my return address. If you would, please let me know if there is another site. I would like to see the continuation of the Kag/Inu storyline. It seems so cute and fluffy. Oh, and one last note. I really hope you have something good in store for Kikyo. She doesn't deserve a happy ending after what she has put Sess through. TTFN!
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  • From Mija on December 31, 2003
    awwwwwwww Ras your killing meeeeeeeeee..ive waited soo long for this moment and ya leave me hanging..*grabs hair and pulls at it*..ok ok im calm sigh...as usual this was a terrific chap..loved the playfull nervous scene between Inu and Kag and ya the traditional clothes made a great pic in my head to..I could just see it...and I just knew it...I knew the little itch was slinking around somewhere..awwwwww hope she dont ruin the ritual to take Sesshy's collar off..and hmmm the weather??? may that be Pandora being pissed off??? ok Im reaching but ya never know..and if this is how you write when your muse is on vacation then gf your alot better than I ever thought..this was awsome loved it all...sooo cant wait to read more..*hint-* he* hehe..anyhow you be well safe and good gf..and have a very good but safe New Years Eve! huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Rhiannonencourages on December 29, 2003
    You're doing really well, even if you believe your muse is missing. I do hope you update again soon! BTW, don't demons regenerate their fangs when they remove them to be used for weapon making? Perhaps with the collar removed, Sess can use some of this repressed demon power to regenerate his... you know.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on December 29, 2003
    I thought it was a good build up,now now what you mean about the muse, I have only been able to push a few paragraphs here and there, must be the time of year. So, I think you are going for an alltime record! you have almost snagged 10,000 hits to your story alone!!! happy dances for Ras. we gotta bust out with some champagne when you do ^_- well, have a safe n happy new years.
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on December 29, 2003
    Lovely Chapter Ras!
    I like the idea of Kagome, Inuyasha and Sesshomaru being dressed in old fashion clothes. For Sesshomaru it is the clothing, minus the fluffy, he was wearing when he was captured by the thing.... Yea I know she has a name... but I ain't saying it, so there. Inu always looks cute in his fire rat and Kagome in miko robes.... WELLL ok. Your muse and mine must have gone on vacation together... cause mine just got back last night....
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  • From ANON - KhellendrostheDragon on December 29, 2003
    Hiya Ras; OMG!! A cliffhanger! I don't know if I'll be able to handle the suspense...I can't wait to read the rest.
    Plz, update soon
    Huggles;

    Khell
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 29, 2003
    Sooo, the old miko is alive. Mmmmm, makes the story so much interesting and the plot thicken. Sess wanted to kill her for what she done as well as Rin. Will he have his revenge is she still at the site where captured the youkai or is she is traveling capturing youkai? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on December 29, 2003
    Another good chapter. Loved the 1st part: try to explain what love is. That's one I thought on myself, in case I ever have kids. Anyway, getting anxious to see what happens w/ this removal ritual. Looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on December 29, 2003
    WOW Ras, that chapter was awesome. I sat on the edge of my seat this whole time! When you say 'next installment' do you mean that you're going to write a another fic about Inuyasha and Kagome's blooming romance? If you do, I hope Kikyo gets her ass whooped!
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  • From Lease242 on December 29, 2003
    This story keeps getting better and better. Your story is by far one of the most well-written stories I have read and I think I have read them all. lol Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - VampireMiyu on December 29, 2003
    i'm so thrilled you updated!
    great chapter as always
    can't wait for what happens next
    i like how you're making sess's
    character evolve as he nears being released.
    but it's still sweet that he's warm w/ rin even
    if he's not warm w/ others.
    -miyu
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  • From ANON - aya_rei on December 29, 2003
    TORTURE!!!! you know thats what your doing to me?!!!! enough with the build up, i know you know how this is going to end, and i want to know too!!!! up date soon please ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nutmeg on December 12, 2003
    This is a extreamly good story! It's original, and it has a lot of detail! This chapter was well done along with the rest of the story! I can't wait for the other chapters to come out! Job well done!
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  • From ANON - Kimeko on December 09, 2003
    I have been with this story since FF.com. and I just have to read more, so keep writing and I'll keep reading.
    I give this story a 10 and 1/2.

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  • From ANON - Evelyn on December 07, 2003
    I hadn't checked to see if you had updated in a while but now i am so glad i did.
    The last two chapters were great! Ooooh please update soon i am dying to see
    what exactly is going to happen when they try to remove Seshy's collar. Will the
    evil miko person make an appearance? Is she alive??!! Will they find a way to fix
    Sess so he can have children? Please, YES!! Ahh so many questions!! update, update,
    update!!! Anyway, i'm done now. I'll be checking again soon. Bye Bye. ~_~
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