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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - sessylover on December 06, 2003
    " more please i need more of the story... it is soooo coooool, i wish i was a talented write..." ::whines:: " n e way please update soon..."
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on December 05, 2003
    Hey Ras! another great chappie, no it was not boring at all, you never are. I love the whole Inu/Kag thing going on in this chapter, and the part with Rin & Sess in the hammock was SO sweet. Can I rub his belly too? rrrrrrrrrr. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Nym on December 04, 2003
    This story just keeps on getting better and better! I can hardly wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Just wondering, though, but Kikyoms ems evil and stuff, is she the evil miko? She could just be lying about her age and really be just that old. Thanks for this story!!
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on December 04, 2003
    Told ya last night I loved this chapter... But here it is again! The fluff between the two couples was sweet! I enjoyed very much. Now to patiently wait for the next chapter... But I will ask you on the chat...
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  • From ANON - Cassie on December 04, 2003
    Hey, i really love the story i just didn't know the removal spell would be so soon. i'm glad you did. really good and interesting chapter. can't wait to read the next chapter looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Taiki on December 04, 2003
    *dances th happy dance* New Chapter! *sings* You really made my Day Ras. ^^I love this Chapter. Even if there isn't any Action in it, it just shows the the Relationship between Kagome and Inu developes. I hope you will give us the next chapter soon because the suspence is killing me!! >.< I want to know what will happen next... Will the necklace hurt Rin? And will the evil woman who had made Sess a slave know that the necklace has been removed? *gasps* I can't wait to read more ^^ Ok, see ya in the chat again ^^ Lot's of love and hugs Taiki
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  • From ANON - Mija on December 04, 2003
    yes yes yes..you updated..ooh you dont know how much I love this story..and this chap boring??? I loved it!..it was wonderfull and I loved the date and dialouge with Inu and Kag and then with Rin and Sess..and soooooo cant wait to read the next chap..it is the one with the ritual to take the collar off right??? damn Im wondering when that little *itch..ahem..will make her appearance to get the collar and try to shackle my Inu..but ya I know what ya meanut mut making her not too mean..I once felt sorry for the girl in the series but no more I tell ya..hehe anyhow please update soon your story is fantastic and is soooooo well written..your awsome..thank you for that update girl..much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on December 04, 2003
    Ok, first of all, I'm so happy to see Kagome and Inuyasha hitting it off. Second, I can't wait for Sesshomaru to finally be free. Not only will he get his freedom but some well needed 'lovin' from Rin ;)!! This was another great chapter that I so enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work Ras!
    Hugs
    HJ
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  • From ANON - KhellendrostheDragon on December 03, 2003
    Ras...what can I say? I'm hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update.Oh my gosh! The suspense just might kill me,lol. I can't wait, see you next time.

    Huggles;
    Khell
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  • From ANON - snowcat on December 03, 2003
    Nice tension spike with the salt incident for for one,(may it count)(*throws salt over sholder*, ha ha) really enjoyed you taking the time to evolve Kag and Inu's interaction together, I thought it turned out very real. And, am I detecting an enuendo that Inu's kind of detective experinece may give us (really Sessh) something to look forward to? Ah, will Sessh wise up and not tick his brother (Sessh "spits" at the mention of the word) off, or he might have to ask Inu for his help (SAY WHAT?! HAVE TO SWALLOW HIS PRIDE SOME?!?! HIM??!!) very, very OOC! But it would be fun to see!
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  • From ANON - youkai_tsuki on December 03, 2003
    Rasberries - you are such a talented writer!! I truly enjoy reading your stories and I don't even mind waiting for your updates because I know I will not be disappointed. You can always tell when someone just throws a story together. This story has invaded my life and I dread the end of it.
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  • From ANON - Naheta on December 03, 2003
    Ras you are evil you really are now i have to wate another week for more *pout*. any who good job. keep up the good work lol


    Naheta
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on December 03, 2003
    The honey is the only way to get the ants anywhere near her willingly, but
    you're right. It is a waste of good honey. I know I'd never go near her
    unless I got to cause her severe and painful harm. But, hey, I'm vicious
    like that.

    I like this one. Kag & Inu fluff. Doncha just wanna pet those ears? I know I
    do. I wonder if he thumps his foot when someone scratches behind them. I
    also wonder if Sesshoumaru chases his tail when he's in full Inu Yokai form.
    (Blame Nefra for that Sessy image. She did it first. The Inu one was from
    someone else. I don'tembeember her name at the moment tho.)

    Sexy Sessy's gonna get freed! *Does Snoopy Dance* I know I look goofy when
    I do that, but I like it. I wonder if they're gonna find Sessy's little boy. (Yes, I
    read the prequel, *finally*) Well, he ain't so lil' anymore, but you get my point.

    Ja,
    CybrEmly01
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 03, 2003
    Why I am not surprise you was going to pull this one out of your hat. What I am referring to is the statement that Kagome said to Inuyasha about untrained miko could hurt or purify youkai and houyou. Not only can Rin get hurt but Sesshoumaru as well. Does not look good for our dual. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - diamond on November 24, 2003
    It took me a while to read both of your stories (Captured Soul and Captive Soul), but I like the plot and the way the stories flow. I have several questions, but they may have been answered already:

    1. In Captured Soul, you mentioned that Sesshoumaru had a son. Did the son live, and if so, will he reappear in your current story Captive Soul?

    2. Is the evil miko dead? If so, is Kikyo her reincarnation?

    3. If the collar is removed, is there a chance that it can be attached to either Rin, Kagome, or Inuyasha?
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