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By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on November 22, 2003
    Hello,
    OK, I have several questions: will Sesshoumaru's son make an appearance in this story? He did survive at the end of Captive soul if I am remembering right. Will Pandora make an appearance in this story, she has to live until all demons are killed ne? Ya, she did get pretty sick and twisted didn't she? must have lost a good part of herblesbles opening that box! Or, did some of the evil seep into her somehow? Was it actually demons that were released, or was it evil? because when Shippo was in the cage, he was too innocent to be taken or killed. It's too bad Pandora didn't show up to go after that bitch Naraku! That would have been entertaining! LOL. OK, sorry you really got my wheels turning with chapter 35, can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on November 22, 2003
    LUV TO HEAR that your plans for this story's continuation is strong, with the hoildays coming and all. What ever your plans are for Kikyo , I'm really hoping that she'll at least (the very least) get stripped of her miko powers. And as for that Pandora sesspool slut, being immortal doesn't necessarily mean you are intitled to escape the consequences of evil actions. It's an AU right? So give her, her due! Sessh needed to get knocked down a few rungs, but HELLS BELLS she's beyond the limits!
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on November 21, 2003
    Finally got a chance to read your new chaps. Have to admit, was a little disappointed Kik didn't go thru w/ raping (yes, I'm calling it what it is) Sess. I figured it would give Rin a triple reason to just beat the hell out of her if she (Rin) walked in on the situation--Kik violating her home, her bed, her slave. That was my logic behind my last review. You did a great job building up in chap 32. At first, Kik's abrupt change in 33 made me say "what!", bhen hen I had a chance to read word-for-word versus just a quick skim (time contraints are tight now; budget time at the office), I could see her change of mind was not so much like slamming into a brick wall. Anyway, keep up the good work. You got me wondering how things are going to pan out w/ this collar removal. I'm going to pitch out one more idea to see if great minds do think alike: I have to wonder if for Rin's soul to really be protected maybe Sess has to be willing to give up something of equal or greater value. I guess what I'm getting at is, since he never seemed to show compassion or charity before his captivity, maybe he needs to care for someone so much that he doesn't even consider himself at that point in time. Sort of like Scrooge is Xmas Carol; since his spirit never "walked forth" before his enslavement, perhaps it needs to do so in order to break that curse. Am I making any sense? Anway, keep up the good work. Sorry for length review.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on November 21, 2003
    Ras.... Hey grily... The muse is kicking again.... welll yipeeeee!!!! I of couLoveLove the chap.... and Inu/Kag getting together finally.... WooHoo... Killer Job.... Keep up good work.... Mules
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  • From ANON - Tatoosh on November 20, 2003
    Nice chapter, well worth the wait.

    I love your take on the Kagome/Inu yasha relationship I hope the K/I fic is still in the works.

    I have my fingers crossed that the releasing spell goes well and Sess and Rin get to be happy and have lots of pups
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  • From ANON - nicole on November 20, 2003
    Yes, Ras you can pet my dragon. And I like what you've done with the story.
    I like the part when Kagome was staring at Inu's ears and he said " Yes, there ears."
    Well i'll talk to latelater bye.

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  • From ANON - Naheta on November 20, 2003
    Good job Res i enjoied reading hope you up date soon lol


    Naheta
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  • From ANON - Mija on November 20, 2003
    dragon??? where Dragon?? me likes Dragons gots a whole bunch of em all over my house..lol..anyhow..sooooooo happy you finally updated this story it is truelly one of my faves and have been waiting for it for sooooooooo long, when ya did that chap for Summer Break It reminded me of this story..could ya tell by the review I left?? lol..anyhow sooo glad your muse is back and ooh the scene with Inu and Kagome was soooo sweet I like it alot and awwwww Rin is happy now...She can be with Sess and still save him...her pain was just about killing me in the last chap, it was soo sad..and I hope the evil with is still alive and I hope Inu kills her..kinda hoping its Kikyo so he can kill her..but alas I know it aint..but ooh I hope she dont get that collar on Inu and if she tries I hope Kagome or Rin smacks the living chit outta her..can ya tell Im not a kikyo fan?? hehe anyhow Im rambling I know just soo happy with the update soo do more of them k?? ty ty ty much huggles and smiles a fan Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - VampireMiyu on November 20, 2003
    this time it's tears of joy bcs you updated! wonderful chapter! your muse is back w/ full force, i see. i can feel the emotions and see the expressions as if i'm watching them from 1 yard away. great writing skills as always
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on November 20, 2003
    I can growl too, it just hurts my throat when I do. XP

    Just a suggestion, but could you literally have Inu skin that
    evil miko bit#h alive? It is possible. There are records of a
    certain Native American tribeuallually practicing this type of
    execution. Then he could smother her in honey and put her
    on an ant hill.

    *blinks* Sorry, I have a nasty mean streak. 'Specially when
    people mess with someone/something I like. *shrug* Let's
    call it my "Irish temper".

    Ja Ne,
    CybrEmly01
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on November 19, 2003
    Love the chapters they are great. Hope to see Rin and Ses happy...kids would be nice...it would make them both soooo happy. :)
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  • From ANON - snowcat on November 19, 2003
    >>>HAUNTED
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  • From ANON - faerie on November 19, 2003
    Great chapter. The buildup to the collar removal is soooo good. I love Rin/Sess stories and I am really enjoying this one.
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  • From Riomi on November 19, 2003
    Magnificent! Wow! Bravo! Encore! ...I could give you praise all day just ask...lol.

    Well I absoloutely loved this chapter, I am so happy that there will be a way for everyone to be happy even though I'm sure there will be some kind of turmoil...lol...wouldn't be a story if there wasn't...

    I love the fact that you made this update nice and long... it has satified my hunger for lets say a week but hey by next week we should next update right...lol.

    I hope we are seeing eye to eye in this mini Sesshou-kun business... you have the power to make it happen...sorry...

    *Ahem* I have a little block on Torn so I'm deciding to fufil a reveiwers request to write a Inu/Kag fic only a two parter nothing drastic, make sure you check it out when I put it up, I love getting your feedback...

    Ja~ne

    Riomi
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on November 19, 2003
    Ooohhh... This is getting so GOOD!!! Well hmph... she's still alive huh? Well... I guess it would be too much to ask for an immortal to just drop dead. But she better not interfere.... Kagome and Inuyasha are getting closer... loved the "I growl" line.
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