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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Nym on October 23, 2003
    I really like how your storys going so far. It's great! I really hope that Sess will be able to be freed from his collar so he can mate with Rin.*crosses fingers* Keep up the awsome writing and great storyline!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 22, 2003
    Another great chapter! can't wait for 34! Even though this is a long story, you keep the reader interested. The story does not feel like it is dragging on, as happens with other stories. Everytime I see you have updated, I get a little thrill (Ohhh, a new chapter to read!) hehe. ok, well until the next update, take care.
    dragonflyelj
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on October 22, 2003
    Actually I really want to see Rin & Ses happy and Kag & Yasha happy...and Kikyo get it in the end...
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 22, 2003
    This chapter was very interesting especially between Kikyo and Sess. Now I know she really has lost her mind. It was amazing that Sess did not figure out about Rin's distress soon. Is it because of her miko powers he did not sense it sooner. Looking forward to Chapter 34. Update soon.
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  • From Riomi on October 22, 2003
    Wow...I feel honored that you responded to my rev.. W.. Well lets see i have to that this chapter was sooooooooo good. i cant wait til you update. Now as usaul i have a question...

    Q: Will you have Shippou meet Sesshoumaru...and have Sessy recognize him from when he saved him all those years ago (back in Captured Soul)?

    And i think that Kikyou might Use Sessy to get back at Inuyasha... maybe to make him somewhat jelous...who knows.

    Please fill us in soon. And if you get a chance please check out my Story Torn. I would love to know what you think...XD

    Riomi
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  • From Riomi on October 22, 2003
    Wow...I feel honored that you responded to my review... Well lets see i have to that this chapter was sooooooooo good. i cant wait til you update. Now as usaul i have a question...

    Q: Will you have Shippou meet Sesshoumaru...and have Sessy recognize him from when he saved him all those years ago (back in Captured Soul)?

    And i think that Kikyou might Use Sessy to get back Inuyasha... maybe to make him somewhat jelous...who knows.

    Please fill us in soon. And if you get a chance please check out my Story Torn. I would love to know what you think...XD

    Riomi
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  • From ANON - river on October 22, 2003
    Thanks for updating!!! I was thrilled to find a new chapter this morning!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkWilliow on October 22, 2003
    Eh.. okay it's fine not to like Kikyou but you should at the very least keep her in some semblence of character. I know this is a AU BUT..the point of those types of stories is the same characters with the same personalities in an alternate world. This story is less a AU and more a peice of orginal fiction with the names from the anime ganked. That said your over all writing is not bad. I just can't see the characters I love in your potrayal. Sesshoumaru actually does seem to be slipping into character.. but I wonder why.. since after all he's been abused for 500years.. If I remember correctly he flinched any time he thought he upset Rin. He's made the transition from victum to hero a bit to quickly. The dramatical impact was lost as well as tons potential angst when he was once again the calm, stoic youkai lord when his brother met him. I was dissapointed. It would have made a greater impact as well as been more realistic to find the battered, shamed Sesshoumaru that I pitied in the begining of this story.
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  • From ANON - Tiranth on October 22, 2003
    *kicks Kikyou in the arse as she leaves* That's right you...you...poopyhead, leave Se alone. That scene between Kagome and Inu was just too kawaii. So I wonder whats going to happen...hmm...*sighs* I guess I'll have to wait huh? Great chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - fyyrrose on October 22, 2003
    *sob* ok so you won't kill kikyo, that's ok, I'll just imagine her death. Another great chapter! I want you to get to the chapter that removes the neck brace! Any clue as to how much further you have to go? Anyway, as to your question at the beginning, I like violence, so I'd take rated R, but I won't hold it against you if it'll stay PG-13. You can't lose me as a reader that fast! Keep it up! I love seeing your updates ^_~

    Fyyrrose
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 22, 2003
    Another great Chap Ras.... thank you for the update... But I wander what Kagome is up to... did she find another way... Me wants to know... Will the next chap be the restraint taking off chap... Well either way Killer Job as always... Keep it up... Mules
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  • From Miyu on October 22, 2003
    Ras, you were giving me anxiety throughout the whole kikyou/sess incident. now that sess has found rin, i don't want anyone else tainting him. very glad you ended it the way you did. i'm a huge kikyou symizerizer and don't like how she's always characterized as a super bitch. i'm sure you have justifications for her behavior bcs your characterizations have depth. and a person who can love another deeply can't be all that bad (referring to kikyou's love for inu)
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  • From ANON - lere on October 22, 2003
    OH HELL YES!!!! I think I hate her more now then before because now I know she'll make Kagome's life a living hell!!!! The damn bitch!!!!!!! But that quick kiss fix my mood. Did you remember: Kag&Inu for ever??? And what about Kikyou and Sess's course? Very suspicious I must say.

    Well, about the other story. R is fine because I think your stories follow that pat since the begining. I can't wait to read that too.

    So, hugs from Brazil!
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 22, 2003
    omg you just know Kikyo wants to bind Inuyasha to her like Sess is bound to his master or mistress..please please dont tell me she succeds??? and awwwwwww poor Rin hiding what she feels from Sess for him, and him knowing shes hiding something..sniffles and poor Kagome but I knew she would find a way outta it for her..hehe and oooh yes me likes this alot, lots of Inu and Kag..me likes a whole bunch..I just knew he couldnt resist her..(smiles) but still wondering what happened between Inu and Kikyo to make him leave her?? hmmmmm lots of questions and soooo loving this story soo update soon k?? pretty please??? will give ya a whole bunch of halloween candies???..ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-) btw if you couldnt tell another awsome chap...I LOVED IT!
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  • From Riomi on October 17, 2003
    OMG You have no idea how much i love this story! From the second i laid eyes on your prelude i feel in love... i know i sound creepy..XD
    You have to update and i mean update soon, when i say soon i mean now, when i say now i hurry the hell up! Sorry i'm just really connected to your story now and can hardly wait.

    Q: I was wonderin' if you are going to have Sess go all the way with Kikyo this time... Honestly i don't want that but it would be interesting to see the reaction of the others you know? sorry I'm rambling now... Please update soon, you have a true talent.

    XD Riomi XD
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