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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Taty_chan on October 15, 2003
    Could someone, please, KILL kikio??????

    PLEASE!!!!!

    I really hete this b****
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on October 14, 2003
    Girl, chapter 32 rocked! i am absolutely lovin' your story! you an aan amazing writer.
    you have got to update soon, i just cannot wait to see what happens next! Please,
    Please update soon!! I am telling you though, that that bitch kikiyo has got to die!!!
    I hate her so much! it serves her right that inuyasha dumped her! HA!! anyways sorry for blabbing,
    great story can can't wait for further updatese yae ya^ Ev^
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  • From ANON - ami on October 14, 2003
    I love it!! omg, you have got to update soon!! the suspense is killing me! what will happen to rin ansshosshoumaru? and what is that kikiyo planning?! i am really enjoying your fic, please update soon i cannot wait to read what happens next. WOW you are a wonderful writer, keep up the good work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - EVELYN on October 13, 2003
    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! IT'S THE MOST WONDERFUL RIN AND SESSHOUMARU STORY I HAVE EVER READ!! WOW!!! eEVN THOUGH IM NOT EXACTLY DONE YET, I CAN SO NOT WAIT TO FINISH IT! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 12, 2003
    I knew that was come about once Rin finds out about that collar. The thing that really gets me going is that Kikyo chick. She has some serious issues and Rin needs to take care of that once and for all. Its is to bad that the curse of the neck band can not be transferred to someone else. I mean that some one can not take Rin's place. An even trade off in which Kikyo is the trade off. I know that really bad to think that way, but she really asking for it. Great work as usual and looking forward to chapter 33.

    New Fan
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  • From ANON - pratz on October 12, 2003
    i'm fed up with that b***h going around! why don't ya just kick her off out there?! anyway, what ya ya gonna do with this storm of emotions hanging around? i think i'd like not to see my soon-to-be mate die neither to see my loved one in another's woman arms... why don't ya send inuyasha to help him ^_^, show me he's a good bro!
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  • From ANON - fyyrrose on October 11, 2003
    Please give me some hope that you're gonna kill off Kikyou...nice and painful? I actually have no qualms about Kikyou tormenting Kagome, I think it's funny, but I see Rin as not being able to defend herself. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep plotting and writing! ^_~ till next time
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  • From ANON - Shinokun on October 11, 2003
    I love this.
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  • From ANON - nicole on October 11, 2003
    DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO BLACK DRAGON GO!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR MASTER WISHES TO SEE RAS DEAD!!!!!!!!! NOW GO AND KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU RAS!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sister Raven Dreamer on October 11, 2003
    Rasberries,
    If we, your reviewers, are able to guess some things about your story, it is not because you are being predictable. Rather, it is because you have made theractracters so lifelike, and your characterization was so thorough, that I feel I know them. And, in knowing them, I can guess what their reactions will be to certian situations. So, rather than think you are predicable, you should instead see it as a testament to your skill as a writer. Well, that's my opinion, anyway. I am thoroughly enjoying this fiction, and I get all excited when there's a new update. So, understanding that good writing takes time, I will wait (with what little patience I can muster) for your next chapter.
    Sister Raven Dreamer
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on October 11, 2003
    Chapter 32 rocked!!!! I love the way you made Sesshomaru so sexy and playful, but still serious and dignified.

    Ok, Kikyo must die! That bitch needs a whoopin' more than anything and I hope it's Rin that will dish it out.

    TTFN
    HJ
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  • From Miyu on October 11, 2003
    ch 32. another great chap. oh how you make my heart flutter when they are together. don't let kikyou get her way w/ him.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 11, 2003
    Hey Ras, (waves) Great Chap as always... I knew she would keep that secret from him.. But that damn kikyo is back... OH NO!! I can't wait to see what happens next... and no he can't bring her back so that means she does die... Yes... No... I need more... I am glad you are writing a story about Liana and his pup.. I can't wait to read it... I think your doing a wanderful job. You always leave me wanting more and more and more... I hope to see an update on this soon... and your other story too... Great Job... OH yeah looking forward to a little Inu/kag action myself... Yipeee!!!.... Mules
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 11, 2003
    really?? Inu/Kag action coming?? omg omg...too cool I was sure it would of course be rin sess but Inu and Kik sort of thing...I know I hate her..sigh..and after reading that chap I really really hate her...but I thought couse of Inu u would end up making it a kik inu thingy but sooooooo glad you decided a kag and Inu thingy althoug it is based on a Rin Sess thingy..damn that Kikyo wants to hurt her really realy bad..will you please please let someone come before Sess has to succomb to that evil *itches wishes??? if not Rin then let it be Inu, let him be coming to talk to Sess alone and find Kikyo being a *itch and get her away from sess.,..and ooh ya I do want to read about his pup and his first mate Liana..is that right?? ooh anyway You know how much I luv this fic and I look soo foward to everyone of your updates...cant wait..(rubs hands in anticipation) till laters you be well safe and happy,,(offers more cookies) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 11, 2003
    Another great chappie, OMG, I don't wanna wait for the next one! OK, curbing my enthusiasm. I can be patient, don't wantrushrush your creative process.
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