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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries

From ANON - csb on October 11, 2003
Like most of the story, but the Kikyo stuff is just too repetetive. She shows up, demands, he resists, gives in, Rin shows up made with possible misunderstanding. Better just to get rid of it or waste less space on it because other than that the storyline is great.
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From ANON - SD on October 10, 2003
Ohh! I loveeeeee that newest chapter! s sos sooo sweet...Kikyo ruined it a bit tho..*sigh* Update soon!
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From ANON - Ame on October 10, 2003
I got an idea, make that bitch Kikyo take the restraint off. That way Rin and Sess can live happily ever after, and that miko bitch can die a slow horrible death!!!

Looking forward to more!

Ame
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From ANON - tigers_eye on October 10, 2003
Have enjoyed both your stories, Cred red & Captive Soul. Can't wait to see how this one concludes. Have to admit, would like to see Kikyo get one more crack @ Sesshomaru; all kinds of implications w/ that. She could use him to indirectly attack Inuyasha (if she found out they're related), or Rin, or just cuz she has a burr up her ass. Be interesting for it to take place in Rin's own home, in her own bed. Be a way of saying Rin is no proof against her. Anyway, just a suggestion tossed out. Keep it up. Itching for the rest.
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From ANON - Luna on October 09, 2003
WHat are you doing to me??!!! This is torture!!!!! *rubs her eyes to gain her mental thoughts back* You just HAD to throw a new twist in there didnt you?!!! Well.... I love you for it!! LOL I have said it before and I will say it again.. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please update again soon!!
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From ANON - Aya Rei on October 08, 2003
Gah!!!!! It took you long enough to up-date and now?!!!!!! *sobs in corner* no but seriously you cant keep holding me on the edge like that! Its so not f... ... just please up date a bit sooner Ne?? Good job tho, yup yup (Aya's muse agress*pokes Aya for ignoring her muse* But i want to keep reading and not draw yet!!!!!) uhh sorry about that yea... I have the urge to draw, but i just wanna read!!!! ^_^ Ja Ne (no more caffiene for me today hehehe)
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From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 08, 2003
Can't wait to see how they will free Sess. If I know Rin, she will want to free him anyway, and he won't want her to do it, if she tells him. Until your next update.
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From ANON - New Fan on October 08, 2003
Great has usual. But, you had to make things more difficult for our beloved characters. Knowing how Sess feels about making Rin his mate in demon terms. With that impossible spell they must break he can never make her his mate as well as not allowing her go through the procedure. I think when Rin finds out the consequences on freeing Sess she will not tell him and he will not find out until it is to late. This story has too much twist and turns that can end up for our beloved character with a happy ending or with a whole lot of heartache. Can not wait to you update. Update soon.
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From ANON - stayingput29 on October 08, 2003
Hey Ras, (waves) I just read cpatured Soul and now OH BOY I have a big question??? Will his son be showing up in this fic... OH I must know...You gave us no more information on them did him Liana live what became of them now I am curious about that i want to know the sons name and if he will show up in this one... by the way very good fic I read it from beginning to end It had me hooked couldn't leave my chair... But please do tell me what has become of his Son I sooooo want to know... ts ,.s ,.. love and :)'s... Mules
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From ANON - Nekiochan on October 08, 2003
CLIFFY!!!!!!!
I hate cliffys.....

But..............

What will happen to Rin when she finds out? What will happen to Sess? There has to be a way. Maybe someone will appear and take the collar off?

Maybe....................?

[ o.O ]

sualsually don't say this to authors, but. "Please hurry up on the next chapter, I'm deing to know."

Anways, Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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From ANON - nicole on October 08, 2003
run..............Run................RRRUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNN for i will hunt you down and feed you to my pet dragon. i will never forgive you for doing this to one of my fav. couples. if you right another story like this again..................I WILL PUT THE SAME CALLER THAT SESSY HAS ON YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Fluffy Fan on October 08, 2003

Waaaaiiiii

I've only just found this but I love it, Sessy/rin isn't my fav pairing but they go together so well in this ;_; now all I want is the rest of it. *hopes it'll be released soon*
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From ANON - Ame on October 08, 2003
Arrrggg!!! What a cliffhanger!!!! This story is great, please don't leave us hanging for too long!!! Poor Rin and Sess!! And I want to see Kikyo get knocked on her butt again, shameless hussy. This is just too good!

Ame
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From ANON - Hentai Jane on October 08, 2003
A living death? THAT IS SO COOL!!! I can't wait to see how Rin and Sess figure a way out of this situation. Great fic! TTFN
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From Miyu on October 08, 2003
ch31. so glad sess is accepted by rin's parents. please update soon. i gotta know what happens w/ the curse. still lovin' your story.
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