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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Sister Raven Dreamer on October 08, 2003
    Oooo, Rasberries! You just love torturing your characters, don't you? And we love reading it, of course.
    Hmmm, living death. So that's what Sessy's dream was about. Now, if I guess correctly, Rin will still want to risk everything to get that collar off, and Sess will be completely against it. That's my guess, anyway. Well, Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 08, 2003
    awwwwwww sniffles thats not fair...they cant free Sesshy??? going to cry now...sobs...and Kagome is thinking of Inu huh?? is Inu thinking of her?? does he still Love Kikyo??? ooh has to know must find out more please give me more...pretty please update soon??? please?? will share my cookies???? till laters oh btw totally awsome chap as usual..love it!!! huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 08, 2003
    YIPEEEEE!!!! Got to just love updates... Killer Chap... but OH NO!! what will Rin do will she insist on doing it but not tell Sess what will happen and can't he just bring her back??? I must know... lol... when Kagome answered the door I thought it was going to be Inu.... fooled me... and then to end in yet another hot spot... I want more I must know what happens.... I was so happy to see this update so soon .... thank you.... Mules
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 06, 2003
    Love the chapter. Especially the "brotherly love" conversation between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. You would think after not seeing each other for over 500 years the hatered between them will diminished. Well, I guess not. Looking forward to read the next chapter. Update sooooon.
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  • From TokiMirage on October 06, 2003
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, IT ENDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    okay, now let me get this all figured out. rin has to be a VIRGIN for this to work... didn't she lose her virginity????

    ?.?
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  • From ANON - Tameiki on October 05, 2003
    Wonderful storyline, great character development, hurry with more chapters, PLEASE!!! Oh, just a small correction: Sesshoumaru's sword is Tenseiga and the Tokijin (no need to add the u behind the first o) and InuYasha's sword is the Tetsusaiga. The Japanese, when pronouncing this slide over the u so you never really hear it, just a longer s sound, if that makes any sense. Even though Shippo and InuYasha are very close friends, it would still be considered an insult of the greatest proportions to be called a dog even by friends (Inu) in the Japanese culture. =) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Luna on October 02, 2003
    YHEA!!!!!!! I have been waiting for this chapterfor weeks!!! lol!! TY!! AND PLEASE!.. keep updating is one of my faves and I have been telling ppl about it!!!
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  • From ANON - Takisho on October 02, 2003
    Hi I'm pretty new to Adultff.net so this will be my name for now (its Takisho if the name doesn't appear 0_0). I hope no one has already chosen that name so please inform me if so.
    Anyway, back to the review. Hi rasberries. I've read your review on ffn and adultff.net. theres only one differnce that i noticed ( it was kinda a mixup between adult ff.net and ffn). and that was chapter 29. I enjoy reading this story very much and how you have used the theme of love to be able to express it so well. I dunno but i think I will have to copy and paste the whole story, chapter to chapter into my hard disk!!! ^_^ So please continue on with your story and I will from now ond yod your adultff.net version as not to miss anything..exciting!!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 01, 2003
    great chapter, eagerly awaiting the next!
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  • From ANON - Nekiochan on October 01, 2003
    GOD!
    Why does your story have to be so good?
    I've seen it on this site, but I thought it was going to something totally different.
    Once I started to read it, I couldn't stop.
    Jeez!! Hardly any story can so that.
    Man....It's sad that Sesshoumaru was a slave for so long.
    And it was sweet how Inuyasha acted. Well of course, there brotheres. Hee Hee. Earth to Nekiochan.

    Well keep up the good work
    I can't wait to read the part when the coller/spell gets to be takin off. And when Sess and Rin get together?

    Ohh..I can't wait...Again keep up the good work.

    Your doing great!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - catriana on September 30, 2003
    Wonderful, wonderful story! I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From ANON - fyyrrose on September 29, 2003
    another great chapter! Please update! Keep up the great work, and I'm glad Rin's still a virgin....can't wait for the 'ceremony' to happen!
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  • From ANON - BlueSaiyanChick on September 28, 2003
    Nice Kagome and InuYasha interaction. The Reunion with the demons had humor with the insults and the small romantic moments with Rin and Sesshomaru still make the fic worth while. Their father...I don't know what to expect from that. Please continue!

    BlueSaiyanChick
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 27, 2003
    omg that wwas a totaly awsome chap Ive wwaited for what seemed forever to read the part where Inu and Sessh finally talk, alas it was a short chat but I soooooooooooooooooooooo luved it..it was wonderfull and the thing between Kagome and Inu?? will there be sparks?? hehe I hope soo, sorry I know you might want to have Kikyo get a good break here bunestnestly she dont deserve it even if she is heart broken over Inu, Inu needs to be with Kagome..(ok ok Im an Inu/Kag fan so sue me..hehe) any how again it was a wonderfull chap I only have one request..please update more often...I kow you you were having probs with your comp but before that the posts were still far and in between and I soooooooo luv this story I just cant wait to read more soo if ya please..update update update soon k?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Tatoosh on September 27, 2003
    I liked this chapter. I like the promisinasheashes of Inu Yasha and Kagome. At least the brothers didn't fight but it should be awkward. Sess is embarrassed and Inu Yasha feels guilty. I have my fingers crossed that Sess is finally freed. But I suppose if that can't be accomplished Rin could sell Sess to Inu Yasha and Inu Yasha could allow Sess to live with and mate with Rin. I liked seeing Kaede.
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