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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From Miyu on September 27, 2003
    yes! you finally posted. I love how the story is progressing and how are are incoporating Inuyasha in. I'm glad Inuyasha ire mre mature than in the anime. It feels so refreshing not being frustrated over him. I think I see a twinkle of romance between he and kagome. That would be interesting to see how their relationship progresses, but I do hope that you will still focus mainly on sess and rin. I've always loved that pairing, but their relationship in your story is so cute. Please update soon. I'll be waiting...
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  • From ANON - Stayingput29 on September 27, 2003
    WOW... Killer Chap... I am glad someone asked if she lost her virginity I was wondering... lol... anyway good chap even though it was a long wait it was well worth it... I just hope the next chap isn't as long await... inpatient fan here... I so love that o iso is gone I hope for good or Rin can kick her ass next time... and Inu (gods you got to love him) he is so sweet why won't Sess just talk to him a little male bonding might be what he needs... Brother love... I hope him and Kagome get together soon is he coming to the dinner or will we not see him again until they take off Sessy retraint... OH SO many questions... GREAT JOB!!! until next time.... MULES
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  • From ANON - pratz on September 21, 2003
    man! that's CLOSE! i don't think he can hardly hold his... ahem... DESIRES ^o^
    at this time, itbettbetter to keep her virgin, nee? i'd like to see the free Seshoumaru, with all his PLAYS on the bed even more! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Lord Oberon on September 19, 2003
    :: claps :: Wow, that was an amazing chapter...the way sesshoumaru is protrayed never stops knocking me off my feet...one word

    More.
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  • From ANON - fyyrrose on September 19, 2003
    Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter, and the one where Inu and Sess talk and the spell...will it ever be broken! So much I want to know, but I'll wait for the chapters to come, as patiently as I can anyway. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Luna on September 18, 2003
    I just loved it!!!!! And as far as you worried if it was above an 'R' rating I would say no... it was very well done but not over the top so dont change it... TRUST ME!!! I have seen more detailed in the lines of 'NC-17' but I dont think it warrents that rating. Ok soooo back to the praising part.... IT WAS GREAT!!!! But I cant wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to know his bro is a slave!! LOL Waiting silently for the next chapter but but next time I will need a bib for all the drooling I have done lol!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!! ;)

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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on September 18, 2003
    Grrrrrrr..... some times I get so frustrated with this site... anyway (waves) Hi I just spent 6 hrs reading your story a better part of it getting booted off and fighting to get back on...lol... But I started and couldn't stop... I Love it... So is Inu and Kagome going to get to gether.... and we need more of Sango and Miroku... You tease with just a plash of everyone... we have seen more Kikyo then I prefree... But I guess the wench fit into the story nicly... Anyway wanted to let you know that I love this story and look forward to an update.... If it were me and Sess was my slave I don't know that I would be so willing to set him free...He He... So please update as soon as you can OK......... ty ty ty...........Mules
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  • From Miyu on September 18, 2003
    wow! chapter 29 was great. i'm so thrilled you updated. i had been checking daily. i love it so much i actually re-read some of my favorite chapters. 'm glad you're still taking the relationship pretty slowly yet giving us enough limey content to be satiated. to be honest, i've never read a story w/ this many chapters because the plot would wear down before i get that far. your plot just gets better and better. i hope it goes on forever!
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 17, 2003
    yeah!!! you updated..yay yay yay I sooo love this story..ooh and the battle?? totally awsome and the love scene, totally perfect and her virginty still in tact..that was..wow great..and awwwww Sesshy spoke to Inu, if only to give him an order..lol..he still acknowledged him..hehe I soo cant wait till Inu and Sesshy talk, will Sesshy talk to him or ignore him??? sighs..and does Inu still love Kikyo??? soo many questions and wonderings..ooh please update soon k?? pretty please with Rasberries on top?? (giggles) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2003
    In Chapter 29 did Rin loose her virginity in the very physical sense? I hope not since she needs to be a vergin for that spell to release Sesshoumaru from that evil collar.
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  • From ANON - PsYcHoKeLl on September 17, 2003
    believe me, at this site if someone is offended by your story then they have no reason to be here. there is some nasty shit on this site. but your story is wonderful. keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Leiliiani on September 15, 2003
    EEEP! If you don't update soon, I think I might pop!
    I both hate anve tve this story, being hopelessly obsessed with Sesshoumaru, I can't stand seeing him reduced to a broken slave, but I'm VERY glad he has the chance to be free and be with Rin. ^_^
    And I'd also like to add that Kikyou is a vile and nasty cold-hearted bitch, and I hope she dies a slow painful death *nodnod*. She and Naraku should hook up, they're perfect for one another *nodnod*
    ANyhoos, Update soon.. I'll be waiting!

    ~Leiliiani
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  • From ANON - Oberon on September 15, 2003
    Your story is one of the best on AFF dare I say the net.

    I do have a question though..kikykikyo evil in this fic, I know you have answered it before, but she seems down right sadistic...

    I love the way Sesshoumaru is protrayed in the last few chapters, you can picture his old manners returning. Thats how I see it

    I also love the way you have naraku fearing Kagome, very "and the plot thickens"
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  • From ANON - Soulchan on September 14, 2003
    Waii!! ::glomps Ras in crazy fan-girl way:: You have no idea how much I have enjoyed this story. I usually review after each chapter, but I found myself unable to stop reading! Finally a story that treats Sesshy in the way he deserves! Most either portray him as totally heartless or completely OOC. You on the other hand have crafted a marvelous story that makes me cry with how romantic and poignant it is. This is the sto story I have read in ages and it has renewed my waning interest in fanfiction. Please up date soon: I hate cliffhangers! ::sobs::
    Soul~chan
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  • From Miyu on September 12, 2003
    can't believe that i passed over your story several times because i couldn't stand the thought of sesshy being a slave to anyone. thank goodness for the shortage of good new sess fics or else i wouldn't have given yours a try. REALLY glad i did. PLEASE update soon
    -miyu
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