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  • From ANON - Luna on September 10, 2003
    YOUR KILLING ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!! TY TY for updating so soon but please dont leave me hanging for too long, my mind tends to think the worst. I have to say that this is one of my FAVORITE stories I have ever read. Please please update again!!! Your DEVOTED reader!!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on September 09, 2003
    Another awesome chapter! You torture me with your cliffhangers! I want more! I believe this is now my favorite fan-fic. And about Kikyo, just kill the b!tch already! LOL. No, I had no problems with where you went with the whole Kikyo thing, it was the perfect set-up for her to have a spiteful jealous fit of rage when...ERR if IY and Kagome hook up. You are gonna make those two hook up right? I will be waiting for the next chapter to find out!
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  • From ANON - apocalypse on September 08, 2003
    omg!!!! this is the most wonderful fic!!!! usually i get bored after reading a few chapters but i couldn't stop reading this one!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

    luv,
    apocalypse
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  • From ANON - BlueSaiyanChick on September 07, 2003
    Oh no-no-no-no-no*puts hand over mouth* Its line one of my novelas! But even better! Ahhh. You should ly hly have some tv series, then I wouldn't be hogging the phone line and missing calls ^___^ I had tears wilding up my eyes; too dramatic. especially when you wrote the sentences almost near the end serperately, basic genius. It was actually great 'cause I was scrolling slowly bit by bit at that point. Too perfect. Jumping around;excited. As wat wat watches her soaps, I have to say, this typed novela is too inspiring. InuYasha sees his brother, in vividly described detailed text, formatted to touch emotion. Very impressed. Kikyo hugged Inuyasha! That bitch! I hate her, it was her bitchy fault they broke up [It will stay like that in my mind] and she was seducing Sesshomaru AND being the victim??!! @_@ That 2 dollar hoe needs to get a life if she thinks she'll even hook up with the silver-haired hanyou. She juspiecpiece of stu stuck on his ELITE foot. A thorn on his side, a fly in his soup, you get the point. Well that's the only flame you'll need to burn out. At least it was put into a strange amusing way. Please continue, I'm glad you're dedicated to your stories unlike SOMEONE *cough* me *cough* Well let's see how this reunion will really turn out between these sexy ass brothers. 29 chapter I do not expect soon, beautiful chapters take up ideal, golden, and memoriable time. Just effort, just don't rush things, take the accumilated pace of your choice.


    Excuse-my-frenchy-ghetto-slang-in-one-of-my-lengthy-reviews,

    BlueSaiyanChick


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  • From ANON - Laydhwk on September 07, 2003
    You are WELL worth the wait!!!! I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I read it just before going to work this morning , and have thought of nothing else since! How will they save Sess....? How will they defeat Narako....? Such suspense and action! Truely edge of my seat kinda stuff!!! And of course how will Inu-Yasha and Sess feel about seeing each other again???? Oh, how the mind does whorl, spin and ponder!!!!! Such a sweet moment when Sess immediatly put down his swords for Rin's life and equally sweet was when she was willing to give 'everything' *yuck by the way* to Narako for Sess's life - * Major big sigh*

    I like that we are made to wait for the *lemon* between Sess and Rin - I look forward to it being a very sweet moment. The build up between the two is good, nice foreplay, longing and learning trust........*sigh, again*

    As ALWAYS I am looking foreward GREATLY to your next chapter!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 07, 2003
    yaaaaaaaayyyyyy you updated!! yay yay yay...and your reader was right very dramatic and sooooooo luved it...awwwwwwww Inu called Sesshy brother...going to cry...but aaacckkk cliffy??? no no no...needs more please update this soon k?? pretty please?? must know what is going on and how they save Sesshy..they do save him right??? huggs Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Lere on September 07, 2003
    Flames? No, I love the story so much.... BUT THE WITCH IS SO FALSE WITH THOSE CROCODILE'S TEARS!!!!! GRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

    Oh, so, I think I feel better now.

    Well, the rest was fine, like allaws. I liked Kagome's good skills. I bet she can kicks Naraku's ass. And I hope Inu can make the right choice for once. Grrrrrr... (deep breath to control my nerves).

    I'll be here next time to suport you and the fantastic story.
    Hugs.
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  • From ANON - meny on September 07, 2003
    hello
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  • From ANON - Sister Raven on September 07, 2003
    Okay, as I read more of this, my wonderment aespeespect continue to grow. Your lt cht chapter had me on the edge of my seat...I mean that quite literally, as I found that I was edging further and further forward as the story progressed. And like the junkie I am, I can't wait for my next fix! Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - gerankel on September 06, 2003
    Another great chapter as usual! Captured Soul is the main reason I even really visit this site anymore. Sorry I haven't gotton back to you be noe now about putting your
    story(ies my my site. Life has been hectic bit I'm sure you know how that is. I should be contacting you tomorrow about getting your work on the site. Again great job!
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  • From ANON - Luna on September 06, 2003
    GAWD!!!!!!! You are killing me with all the cliffhangers!! But I must admit that I am LOVING every minute of it!!! its like sweet torture so like the dog I am.. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!! Im begging you!! lol I hope I have expressed how much I am loving your fic!!!
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  • From ANON - fyyrrose on September 05, 2003
    I'm not a personal of Rin and Sess, but I love your story! If I have ever wanted to kill Kikiyou, I REALLY want that P.O.S. DEAD!!! ^____^ Now you HAVE to keep writing, because I need to know the next segment....I'm dying to know!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write....*evil gleam* otherwise...no I said no death threats.....*sweet smile* please continue, I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Avatar0507 on September 04, 2003
    i just recently read your last 27 chapters of this story and all i can say is i want chapter 28 and i want it soon!!! lol, i thinkis gis great, i really couldn't take my eyes away from my monitor while i was reading it. i think you have done a great job here and i am very anxious to see more of this story soon. the way you have waited for the lemon has gotten me (and i am sure a few other readers as well) just bursting for some seeshoumaru/rin action. well, like i said please post soon, i keep checking back to see if you have posted but nothing new yet :( once again, good job and keep up the good work. peace
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  • From EchoedDreams on August 30, 2003
    *screams wildly* Another great chapter. Utmost respecre. re. Sesshomaru has a very dirty mouth [lol] very cool indeed. Kikyo bitch deserves it for messin with him ^___^. Kagome fought back! Inuyasha notices Kagome! He notices her as a woman! Another great aspect! *sips more wine* Naraku! Evil does good deeds in this fic! Strong descriptive emotions....its there...Oh no......it can't be.....ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER! *sigh* Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Its not often that I read fanfics so well and dramtically written. I just started reading fanfics again around this month! [I had them on hold for a few months] Please continue, I'll try to keepprompromise to continuing reading this kool fic.
    *smoochies*

    A very moody,

    BlueSaiyanChick
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  • From ANON - fizzywig on August 29, 2003
    Ooh, excellent chapter here...nice job, working in the barriers. It makes the situation a lot more believeable. Still not sure I like Kikyou being so Evil, but hey...it's your story. Pe, ue, update soon--I can't stand the cliffhangers!!!! >:(
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