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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - SwtRose on February 18, 2004
    there should be an unspoken rule ....authors can't get sick, computers can't die, and the house will stay standing in the middle of a fight (in the story) !!!! take care and be well


    Rose
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  • From ANON - DaughterofDarkness on February 18, 2004
    Over all this story was wonderful and well done the chapters were a bit short and you put massive spaces in between paragraph's to make it seem like they were longer. That is very annoying and I almost got to the point I didn't want to continue to read because of the over baring massive spaces. Interesting with the Demon lord being a humble slave and Rin being the one that wish's to set him free.

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  • From ANON - SwtRose on February 13, 2004
    Take care of yourself.... we need your words to end this wonderful tale you have created
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  • From ANON - snowcat on February 12, 2004
    Sad to hear your so sick! Thanks for the A/N, just take it easy and concentrate on getting better. You know where you'll find us - hanging on the cliffy you left us, LOL.
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  • From ANON - rin-chan sesshys angel on February 11, 2004
    Hey ras...the ficcy can WAIT!!..... i hope you get better soon *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Rion on February 11, 2004
    Ne! ^-^;; I like it so far. And I am glad I'm 300th person to reveiw!

    Ja ne!
    Rion
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  • From ANON - Naheta on February 11, 2004
    i hope you get to feeling better soon Ras, just rest so you can finsh the story lol if you dont i am going to cry lol


    Naheta
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  • From ANON - Kimeko on February 11, 2004
    sorry to hear you were not filling well. get better soon.
    and by the why your story is a 10 with 5 stars *****.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 11, 2004
    Aww Ras, you get better soon! Don't push yourself. lots of fluids to help flush your system, preferably clear ones like sprite n chicken broth, but I am sure you know that! the update can wait, what is important is that you get better soon. huggles n all that jazz,
    dragonflyelj
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  • From ANON - Ayama Nyoko on February 08, 2004
    Must not hurt you. I am mad at you. I am tring not to find here you live and hurt you. Youw yow you are mean. UPDATE now please. I need to know what is going to happen.
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  • From ANON - Tanya on February 08, 2004
    NANI?! You left it there?! *cries* Not... fair!!! Now I have to wait!!! *sobs* Please... update... soon! I really hope that you will be able to update soon, as that was one nasty place to leave it off... especially if you want reviewers chasing after you... *looks behind self* Speaking of which... HERE THEY COME!!! *sprints ahead and hides* Ja ne!!! ^o^ Tanya
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  • From ANON - never2muchinuyasha on February 07, 2004
    I have two words for this story 1. AWF***INGSOME!!!! and 2. MAGNIFICENT!!!(much kissing noises)
    Just so you know I have spent the last 5 hours reading both the prelude and this story up to now.
    It was a day well spent...I have been transported to another world,
    I have laughed, cried, sighed (as well as been tempted to go look for a partner for a little roleplay ^_~ heh heh heh)
    ok so now I will get to the point you are a truly talented author and should seriously considered being published.
    I would not only pay for your book, I would take a flight to your booksigning and stand in line for your autograph.
    (I live in the Bahamas so you know that is real love!!)
    In fact if I wasn't a mostly hetero female I would date you, hell ask you to marry me just to be close to such a great talent!! sigh
    (bad, bad, bad girl) forgive me, I digress. Ras, your writing is my new drug of choice so ...Please, Please, Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Tiranth on February 04, 2004
    Grr...you satisfied that desire but..Rin!!!! Oh boy...that was a great chapter...very powerful, emotional. You are a great writer Ras!
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  • From ANON - Naheta on February 04, 2004
    wonderful chap and thank goodness it wasnt to bad of a clify lol


    Naheta
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  • From ANON - snowcat on February 03, 2004
    )))) BRAVO ! BRAVO (((( LUV your descriptives lots! One of your strengths. Will the Tensaiga let Sessh die? In the manga and series, Sessh could wield the Tetsusaiga with that human arm, wonder if it's the same possibility for Inuyasha to wield the Tensaiga (just my curiosity)? Anyway, it wouldn't hurt for Kagome to lay the sword on him. ^o^
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