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Reviews for Captive Soul

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on January 31, 2004
    Hiya Ras! that was AWESOME for action, you were right, you can write fight scenes. I can't wait to see what happens to Inu and Sess, will Kagome get there in time, Sess is badly injured, will he die? you just can't kill my Sess, you just can't!!!! As I was reading the snake thing, I thought all those sharp teeth, OMG, that sounds like the creature from dreamcatcher, and then at the bottom, I saw in my last review I already told you that! LOL I am such a bird brain. I had fun chatting with you last night, hope to be able to again soon!
    Your devoted fan,
    dragonflyelj
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  • From ANON - mystic one on January 31, 2004
    Oooh this is one of the best fanfics of any kind I have ever read. It is soooo cute! Okay, so I'm a sap, and like it when my favorite characters suffer... Oh well. it is still really cute, very good writing.
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  • From ANON - youkai tsuki on January 31, 2004
    Creepy. The collar had a life. Another exceptional chapter.


    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - New Fan on January 31, 2004
    It took a battle his his importance for Sesshoumaru to
    finally appreciate his little brother. "Typical". As always
    great chapter; it kept me intrigue from beginning to end.
    I can not wait to see if Rin's true powers be reveal in upcoming
    chapters. Update soon. ^__^
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on January 31, 2004
    AHHH... another great chapter... Now kill that damn snake, heal Sesshy and give us a happy ending...
    but don't hurry about the ending.... the the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on January 31, 2004
    yah, Rin lives!! I'm looking forward to when Inu and Kag leaves so Rin and Sess can have some 'private' time!!;)
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  • From ANON - KW on January 28, 2004
    RAS,

    i FINALLY FINISED READING WHAT A AWESOME STORY....
    I LOVED IT.....KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

    KW
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  • From ANON - Faith on January 27, 2004
    you have got to finish and HURRY.lol.this is so geting good but please dont make rin die.that will just be to sad.

    ja ne Faith
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  • From ANON - RinRu on January 26, 2004
    This is one of the most dramatic stories I have ever read. From the beginning I was mezmerized. I actually cried in some parts. You have amazing talent. I hope you update soon.




    RinRu
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  • From ANON - Silver Dracowolf on January 26, 2004
    It's 2:30am in the morning and i'm sitting here in my chair I just got done reading chapter 40 and i'm practially shaking from
    head to toe. I'm a nervous wreak. My hands are shaking so badly. I LOVE this story! It's so extremly well writ. I swear my heart
    gave out to many time to count. If you don't update this soon i'm pretty sure i'm gonna have an early death. I've NEVER read
    a story like this. It's almost to muo beo bear. You have GOT to e-mail me when you update. *shudders* I've....I've got to go
    to bed now and try and get some sleep. I'm trying very hard not to lose control and breakdown crying. I swear, i'm not making
    this up. I really do feel this way. Shit, I gotta go get calmed down. PLEASE! Update soon. *stumbles off with a dazzed look on
    face towards bed to hopeful get some sleep* *still shaking* Ni...night.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 25, 2004
    whatever gave you the idea that you were evil? maybe it was b/c you KEEP ON DOING CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmph (or maybe i should say 'feh') update soon b/c really so much tension can lead to stress and alot of stres jus just not good for you.....::cough:: its for my health.....yeah, thats it! my health......... lol, good lord i sound pyscho! great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 25, 2004
    ooh yes Ras you are soooooooo evil......bitten??? how the hell did she get bitten??? grrrrrrrrrrr...hate cliffy's..sniffles sobs..please Ras..Please dont leave it like this...the men with the funny white coats are going to come take me away if ya dont update sooner..and yes...way intense..your good at that..lol..and your driving me insane...sigh but ya know I love this fic and I luvs ya too...soo update soon k?? ty ty ty poor Rin..sniffles...its Kikyo aint it?? I just know its that witch..or that pandora chick...grrrrrrrrrrr...till next chap or chat room..huggles and smiles and luvs your fan and friend Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on January 25, 2004
    Where has the collar gone to? I keep picturing it being a creature similar to the things from Dreamcatcher, I don't know why, or something from a Stephen King story. Blah! I got the heebeegeebee's sitting here in a dark room thinking about it! I wonder how the boys r gonna sniff it out? Does it have a face? ewww! and my poor Sess, he was stuck with that on for centuries. Does he have any teeth marks or holes in his neck, where it was leeching from him? I was so happy that you posted already after such an evil cliffy! This one is evil too, but not like the last one, you aptly deserved your given title after that one, that is one for the cliffy hall of fame! Yes, yes, when we look the definition of evil up in the dictionary, it will have Ras, for her cliffy on chapter 39 Captive Soul as the definition. (Have I ribbed you enough? I think so, wink, wink!) As always, I love your story, oh, and I saw that someond sad said this fic likelike a soap opera in your responce to Chicky at woohoo, Bah! is all I can say. This is not melodramatic, it is good drama. There is plot, there is suspence, there is love, there is lust, there is the build up to the climax, which I am thinking the climax of your story is chappie 39, there is angst, you have the full range of emotions in this fic, so if that makes it soap opera-ish well, so be it, but I don't think so, personally. Ok, sorry, I just want to keep writing more to you, because I so love this fic. As always, I can't wait for the next installment!
    Hugs,
    Dragonflyelj
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  • From ANON - VampireMiyu on January 25, 2004
    well, after 40 chapters of experience reading your work, i was correct in expecting a twist. you just had to do it, i know...=oP
    kudos to your originality. i couldn't guess what you would do...ul tul thief...that's great...really novel in the realm of fanfics.
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  • From ANON - VampireMiyu on January 25, 2004
    well, after 40 chapters of experience reading your work, i was correct in expecting a twist. you just had to do it, i know...=oP
    kudos to your originality. i couldn't guess what you would do...a soul thief...that's great...really novel in tealmealm of fanfics.
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