Click Here!

Reviews for Intuition

By : darkstoryteller
  • From nightshade41230 on May 22, 2008
    I hope you write a sequel or more to the story I loved it
    Report Review

  • From ANON - natts on January 09, 2007
    It realy hard to understand cause you dont close qoute so please try to do in future
    Report Review

  • From ANON - JadedInu on December 27, 2006
    While I think that the story idea is good there are major grammatical and spelling errors that take away from your story.

    You need to find a beta to proof read your chapters, believe me this will go a long way to helping readers get through the chapters without having to read them over again.

    Keep up the good work!

    Jaded
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 08, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - TAJE on December 29, 2004
    Very good! Getting past the typo's I finally got into the story. I'm sure you have more stories in your imagination to beam our way. I like the way you put your love scene in details. You keep on writing, I'll keep on reading. Peace!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Matsuko on January 20, 2004
    You really should continue the story. Like telling the part were inu-yasha finds out that she is mated to sesshoumaru. Plus you did leave an opening where you said that inu-yasha was going to come back and kill sesshoumaru.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - YASMIN on November 10, 2003
    I LIKE THIS STORY ! BUT WHAT HAPPNED TO INUYASHA ????? TELL ME !!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DarkFire on September 06, 2003
    Great story. You have to make a sequel. ;P
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dem on August 14, 2003
    Thats awesome... but didnt InuYasha vow revenge?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ViVi on August 08, 2003
    wow that story was so awesome! you have to write more stories like that one and e-mail me when you do! well anyways great story but sesshomaru is spelled like that! i gii give you no flames cause that story was awsome!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kagome in disgise on July 27, 2003
    YEA NICE STORY WOW LOTS OF SEX PARTS DONT YOU THINK .NOT THAT IM SAYING ITS BAD ...LOL WELL
    GREAT STORY AND YOU DID WELL WITH DETIALS ILL TELL YA THAT ..WELL CANT WAIT TILL YOU MAKE ANOTHER STORY IT SHOULD BE ABOUT INUYASHA AND KAGOMES SEX LIFE JUST A SUGGESTION WELL EMIAL ME K AND TELL ME WHEN YOU HAVE ANOTHER STORY UP PLZ B-CUZ I DONT READ MORE THEN 2/4THS OF STORYS HERE SO EMIAL ME AND TELL ME ABOUT IT
    AND IN THE THE E-MAIL I ADVISE YOU TO PLZ STATE THAT YOU ARE THE PERSON WHO WROTE THE SESS AND KAG STORY OK
    THANXS LOTS .......AND NICE WORK:0
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sesshoumaru\'s Mistress on July 25, 2003
    It was a good story line. But it had a lot of typos & grammar mistakes. It also changed person (going from he/she to i/me). i also felt you kinda rushed it a bit.... if you extended the chapters a little and elaborated a bit more it would be good. However, i will not leave this as a total burn... it was a good story & i liked the plot to it. You left it open to ad more chapters or a sequel, which i really thinnk you should do. i enjoyed it, and i think if you clean up teh grammar & typos a bit it'll be just fine. BTW for a couple of chapters you called him Sesshoumaro not Sesshoumaru.
    Report Review

  • From on July 25, 2003
    that was terrific!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more please write more story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i beg you!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2003
    i really enjoyed this story. in fact, i recammend this to anyone who likes Sesshoumaru, and can see past his emotionalless walls.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on July 25, 2003
    ok i like the story actually i love it but.....but....I GOT SO CONFUSED!!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!