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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Mmoirai on June 07, 2005
    Yikes! Was that it!!!! I....I....I must have sequel...*gasp*....dying....aghhh!!!! I am looking forward to your sequel and will be checking for it often. In the meantime, thank-you for the emotional rollercoaster ride!
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  • From ANON - 1WishAway on May 31, 2005
    Great story. Very captivating. I can't wait for the sequel! There is a sequel right?
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  • From ANON - 1WishAway on May 30, 2005
    I don't read to many dark stories but once I started reading this one I couldn't stop. You are such an exquisite and talented writer. This story is very addicting and intruiging. So far, I think it is excellent, and I trust that the rest of it will be excellent as well. Thanks for the great read.
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  • From ANON - The crazy one on April 22, 2005
    You'd better put a sequel cause the story kicks-ass. It was very dark and sometime made me sick but it worked out better at the end. I was in tears. I repeat myself, you'd better put a sequel or I'll be upset.
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  • From ANON - sphinx on April 11, 2005
    when will the sequel be comin?
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  • From ANON - Heart of Fire on April 01, 2005
    This is a very good story. I only review ones that are very special due to my shy nature so your story is already held in high esteem. I think you drew out the whole torture thing a bit too much. Or maybe you could have portrayed more of Rin's internal distress. I don't know, it seemed a bit monotonous and since torture is such a painful subject you need to make sure it is presented in a very interesting manner so that your readers do not shy away from it. I hope that this constructive criticism helps. I really like how you portrayed Seeshomaru and Rin's relationship, as more of a story of trauma and acceptance than happiness and open affection. I think that that's closer to the mood of their relationship in the story, though it is no where near exactly the same. You did a really good job and I love this fic. It's original without all of those common plot lines and jealousy circles. What else can I say? You rock.
    PS if the sequel isn't already out it should be out soon or I'll send my army of flying monkeys with fez hats after you! (like in the Wizard of Oz)
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  • From ANON - Tao-Ri-Sarra on March 30, 2005
    When Is the sequel coming? Will It Be SOON! PLEASE LET IT BE SOON!
    You Left A MAJOR Cliffy, and, as my dearest friend, Meinu put it, it was great
    BUT IT LEFT ME HANGING!
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  • From ANON - Meinu on March 29, 2005
    HOLY CR@P! IS THAT THE END!? Beatifully written though. I LOVED IT Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - fluffylovr1223 on March 14, 2005
    OMG that was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The last chapter was great and sweet. i'll be looking for more fanfics by you!
    fluffylovr1223
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  • From ANON - kendra on March 08, 2005
    this really reads like a bad hentai
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  • From ANON - Danny-Girl on March 06, 2005
    Hey! I love this fic, it's as fabulous as it was the last time i read it about a year ago... I really hope you update, i've been going nuts! Anyway you're so talented and i would forever be in your doubt if you just continued on! Thanx c ya!
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  • From ANON - flowers on March 06, 2005
    Now it's time for the sequel right? You know, everytime I read chapter 16 I always feel the same way I felt reading it the first time. A masterpiece I tell you. You really should be proud of yourself, you couldn't drag me into reading most fanfiction much less following it religiously. I was trying to read from one of my good friends the other day (and a celebrated author) but I'm spoiled on your work and couldn't get past the first chapter. Sequel Sequel Sequel!
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  • From ANON - Miyori on March 06, 2005
    this is such a great story its been such a long time since i have read something so good as this fic. even made me want to cry at a certain point lol. I loved everybodys personality in this fic it wasent too ooc even thogh everybody had to change somewhat in a situation similar to this, it was still good. Im reeeally looking forward to your sequel really i am ill be cheking regularly to see if youv started. i hope the sequel starts where you leaft off :P well thats all i wanted to say you did a really good job belive me i onley review really good fics. keep it up!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tori on March 05, 2005
    It's great to see you back on the site again! I'm hoping that now that the last chapter is up again I can release my breath and enjoy the sequel?
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  • From ANON - sourgirl on March 05, 2005
    Great story! I'm really happy with the ending .. a happy ending :) I can't wait to read the sequel!
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