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By : Kohana
  • From Iyasu on September 11, 2006
    It started off good, but then halfway through, you stopped paying attention to your capitization and things like that. Make sure that you don't want to finish so soon that you forget the small things.
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  • From ANON - Me.. ^_^ on September 20, 2005
    Write more... >_>
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  • From ANON - Smarty-0016 on March 22, 2005
    so the story starts very well... but i don't get the clue: is this a mir/san or inu/kag story? maybe you can make it clear in the second chap. honestly, i'm a mir/san fan but it could be also a "both-pairs-story", nee?
    hey, i don't know if you like critic but the first chap says too much about the relationship between sango and miroku. in my opinion you should introduce them slightly. but maybe it's just me who think so.
    i hope i didn't hit you directly in the face with my review.
    can you make an author-note to say if you're going to update the next chap and when?
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  • From ANON - Smart on February 20, 2005
    i love your story the first chap is so good. but i would be pleased to know if it is a mir/san fanfic. i hope so
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  • From ANON - sheep on July 19, 2004
    how long does it take to update plz do it soon
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  • From ANON - l;kasfdljk on June 10, 2004
    plz finish

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  • From ANON - MaliceMizer on December 30, 2003
    gaaah this is the author...i cant log into my account so it may be a bit before i add some more! I'm sooo sorry >.< but once i figure out the problem i will post imediatly!!

    MaliceMizer
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  • From ANON - Bitch on December 25, 2003
    Quit inserting your own thoughts! It's distracting! Just tell the damn story! And get a beta reader! Your grammar, spelling, and stupid errors suck!
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  • From ANON - malice mizer on December 24, 2003
    sorry...um..only way i know how to check reviews...until i find out ignore me! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Lizliz-sama on December 24, 2003
    Meow. I like it much-much. ... Yeah. ... This is 00shizukanayami00 by the way so go read mnficnfic cuz you love me.

    ... Yeah. Anyway, I really liked your intro. Miroku-kun's a wee bit depressed tho'. Bet you meant to do that. Give him a snuggle for me.

    Love you


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  • From ANON - Mija on December 24, 2003
    hehe I like this first chap and am soo anticipating to find out where its going..soo Kagome thinks she and Inu will make this a game do they??? poor Miroku and Sango they wont know what hits them..lol..but I hthe the game ends well and they dont do more damage to the y cou couples blossoming but hidden feelings for another..again cant wait to see what happens and what Kagome and Inu might wager hehe till then much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Kawool on December 23, 2003
    KAWAI !!!
    Well i like your plot and can't wait to read more !!!
    I hope there will be a lot of chappies coz i'm fond of long fanfics ^.^
    By the way i hope you're going to add a lot of fluff with a lil citrus flavor hehe
    So keep writin', Malice Mizer chan Banzai !!! LOL

    Ja ne

    Kawool ^o^ Merry Xmas *hohoho*
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