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Reviews for In the Woods

By : ouchthathurt
  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    excellent writing!
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  • From OriginalSinner on October 15, 2005
    What can I say? You write fabulous lemons and I would personally like to see you write another one, but in the back of my mind, I couldn't stop thinking about how I just couldn't even want to be thinking about getting hot and dirty with our glorious fluffy-sama after being abused to the point that Kagura was... I mean OUCH! The whole concept was fabulous, but at the back of my head I just kept thinking... OUCH! Apart from that dear Arty... please write some more. Your lemon writing ability is hot, so please don't take this as a negative review... cos I did really enjoy this story ^_~ despite the OUCH factor ^_^

    Peace
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  • From ANON - mhika on September 26, 2005
    hey! sweet fic. i just love Sesshomaru/Kagura pairings.
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  • From ANON - Inu-midoriko on August 25, 2005
    heyhey
    luved the story man!

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  • From ANON - neoaddctee(im not logged in) on August 04, 2005
    Hi! I LOVE IT. But one question: how in the world can I know if you've updated? Is there something like a "story alert" or whatever like there is on regular fanfiction? I can't even find out when I'm logged in. Email me if you know, thanks. :D
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  • From ANON - Carl on March 01, 2005
    ...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2005
    P.S. the love scene should really be more descriptive. Explain what's happening a little more poetically and detailed. That would make it moch more enjoyable to read. Also, I have seen far too many stories that distort main characters into whiny, problematic, and emotionally confused pansies who suddenly have heart and mercy. PLease do not join that crowd.
    I'm not trying to make this a full-out flame, but I'm also not going to explain myself or apologize if these words seem harsh. Some contstructive critisism, if told tactfully, should be taken to heart. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Celine on February 28, 2005
    There is a difference between stories of love, sex, and intrigue, and stories created solely for smut. That difference being, one is written well. This one be in the latter category. You lack grammer, structure, and desired suspense. Not to mention the storyline is lacking and the character out of sync. If you want reviews, good reviews, and positive feedback, make an attempt to attract readers. There are a lot of finely written stories on this web sites. My advice is, read a few, and take some notes. ^^
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  • From ANON - Happy Bunny on February 24, 2005
    wow...WOW ^_^
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  • From ANON - Bloody Queen of hearts on September 14, 2004
    awesome tell me when you update!!!!
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  • From ANON - stuff on June 11, 2004
    I hate it when ppl have writers block
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  • From ANON - SavingRain on May 03, 2004
    This fic is simply awesome! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Arty on April 27, 2004
    Sigh. Sorry everyone but I have been unable to update... A bit of a writers bloc kand I have been ill and I have paid work to do.. I will update eventually.. I just don't know how soon

    arty
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  • From ANON - -.- on April 04, 2004
    Excellent Fic
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  • From ANON - Arty on March 26, 2004
    Yellow everyone, don't worry about a thing, I am writing the next chappy as we speak. Be warned, don't count Naraku out yet... I am a very cruel person sometimes
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