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Reviews for Falling

By : SnowySilence
  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 25, 2016
    No matter how many times I read some of these stories I still forget some of them. I'd like nit to forget them and your doing great, keep it up, I want to read more, I just got out of highschool 5/7/16 but back in 11th grade,I was called Bookworm because teachers had to take books away from me just so I'd do my work and I still am a Bookworm, I have about 20 TO 30 Books, I have two bookcases one Box with me, two over at my step dads house, not counting the books my sister has in our room, she's 11, my Brother's 15, I 18 on july02 I'll be 19.
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  • From Felineheart on April 13, 2011
    You should continue it . It has a promising storyline. Too bad its not mpreg it would be akward for inuyasha to explain to his children why their daddy can be a mommy. Oh well you can't have it all. Great job so far though
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  • From TeaniaZazzuullii on April 07, 2010
    any chance sweetie you could continue this story?
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  • From kisskiss on March 15, 2009
    Update please! I want to know what happens next. It's a good story so far. What happens between Kouga and Inuyasha, what happened to Kagoma, how'd Inuyasha get hurt so many questions and you give no answers.
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  • From yohanita21 on February 08, 2008
    I know this was published a while back, but please u have to continue...i really like it, what happens next...please, please, please, continue it..i promise i'll review every time....take care..

    Yohana
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  • From solitare1 on November 25, 2007
    I seriously like this story. I hope you haven't abandoned it. It really needs to be finished.
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  • From homoknight59 on November 13, 2007
    Wow, very nice. Kouga seemed a little too kind at first, but then it obvious that he's only acting that way because he feels bad about Inuyasha's wounds and his children. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From solitare1 on October 17, 2007
    Oh....you have got to continue this story. I have got to know the whole stoy!!!!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on August 10, 2007
    ^^ It's pretty good so far. I just want to keep reading...yet....there isn't anymore to read at the moment. T_T hehe, I can wait tho...i think. Hope your muse comes back soon. I'm looking forward to an update. ^.~
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  • From setoswifey on January 31, 2007
    This is good so far. I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Tori Chan on December 09, 2006
    OMHG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! DO it now! Right after you read this :-P
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  • From ANON - Tori Chan on December 09, 2006
    OMHG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! DO it now! Right after you read this :-P
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on September 02, 2006
    I like this chapter more than the other three. I guess kagome died in childbirth, but that doesn't explain the wounds... I hope your muse gives you some inspiration soon so we can have another chapter with some explanation and a little more fluff. The fluff in this chapter was fun!
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  • From ANON - Steel Butterfly430 on September 02, 2006
    Hmmm....

    It's nice to read this pairing without it being a rape fic. This pairing is growing on me, I think.

    I was a little thrown by his, Yasha's, hating one of his children. I mean, this is a part of someone you lost. You'd usually try to hold on to them with teeth and nails. But I read all of the chapter, so it's understood. The little one that's just like him, that was adorable. You can just see the hard time Yasha's gonna have with that one.

    These two, K/I, are usually enemies (why over dumbass Kagome I don't know), but it was nice to see that maturity between them. Especially during a crisis. I'm trying to figure out why she's dead and what/whom Yasha's running from. I won't put my guesses because they'd probably be soooooo off the mark. :P

    As far as the technicalities of the story, I don't pay as much attention to misspellings so much. But this story seems thought out and it reads very well. It flows nicely. I don't have to stop and let things sink in or think it through to make sure I understood how it's written. I've gotten PLENTY of headaches with others' stories that make things difficult that shouldn't be.

    So, nice plot, cuteness abound, nice read, can't wait for the next chapter. Good job.

    SB
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  • From ANON - SnowySilence on August 22, 2006
    Awww... ^.^ You guys are just too kind. You all really make me wanna write more on this story. And actually, I have the next part in the works. Yay! Erm... And sorry about the short chapters. ^^;; I usually write 3 pages and am good to go. But the next part will be longer.

    But, I gotta revamp the next part. >.> It will be out erm... relatively soon, but I won't give a date, because I usually end up passing it up. heh heh... ^.^;;

    But, THANK YOU SO MUCH for th kind words. It really makes me want to write when I get such kind reviews. I love you guys!
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