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Reviews for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

By : FaTaLfURy
  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 07, 2004
    Wow... that was a good lemon. I even liked how you split it... it made me want to finish! So yay... they're together now... how's everyone gonna take it? What's going to happen to them now? Keep writing... and I'll keep reviewing! :-)
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 07, 2004
    A very good story you got here. I just lovod Iod Inuyasha & Kagome stories. Well I hope you post more soon of this!!!
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 06, 2004
    Ohh.... good chapter. Just to let you know, Kagome's eyes are like a bluish gray color... and her moods kinda lean towards one or the other, you know. For a lemon... make them blue... for happiness... :P. Anyways, keep it it, I'm loving this story!
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  • From ANON - kettricken on March 05, 2004
    Oh...that's so sad...*sniff* You know, when I read the part about Kagome finding Inuyasit wit was just like I was watching, third-person--the description was great. Illy lly like your story so far =) I hope you keep going with this as well as you have! I do have one little criticism, though: you keep mixing your tenses, switching from past to present. It'd make your writing tighter if you picked one and stuck with it. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 05, 2004
    Oh my gosh! *points to the wet kleenxes by the keyboard* They're both so miserable without the other. And in my head, I can just hear his howl.... so sad! You make the stories really convincing... great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 05, 2004
    I just love Kagome & Inuyasha Angst stories they are such a great couple to write about. Well I hope you post more of this soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 04, 2004
    aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhccckkk you cant leave it like that! snifffles I want more please write more soon please?? pretty please??? this was a good first chap and had me thinking and wanting to find out what the heck is going on and what will happen and soo forth I really like this so I really hope you update and soon..:-) ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - ReiHino on March 04, 2004
    Aww.... it's so sad! But hey, it's really good. Keep going with it!
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