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Reviews for In The Dark

By : eternalshiva
  • From ANON - Brook on May 27, 2009
    TT-TT You're never going to update this again are you? I hope you wrap it up some how....one day....when you're bored....

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  • From Darknessdawns on May 25, 2008
    This story is wonderful, I am so looking forward to finishing it. I read all 15 chapters curently posted in ONE sitting it was sooo good. You have developed the characters lovely along with a spectacular plot and even worked in some citrus. I have to admit I was impressed when you even worked in the original story line for the most part. The only mistakes I could see were a few typos and that the tense seamed to shift back and forth in the last chapter during the Mir/San citrus. I only have one reguest for this angsty story. "Please dont make me cry any more, please let there be a happy ending to all of this." I dont think I could read any fics for a whole week if it ends badly for the lovers. I honestly did cry, twice. your good. So far all I can do is praise this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

    ~ DarknessDawns
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  • From WTW on October 04, 2007
    Thank you for writing this story and keeping it going. I do hope to see it finished. ^^ You've done a excellent job. Please continue to do so when you have the time to.
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  • From Vyncent on June 17, 2007
    Please make it soon. I had given up hope that you would ever update this work. Good to see that you are still with us and continuing this great story.
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  • From kookookitty on November 09, 2006
    this is well written and interesting... then there wasn't anymore... it happens every time... i get emotionally involved with a story and then... it was left unfinished =/

    it's been so long since you've last updated this extremely captivating story... you are a very talented artist, painting worlds, people and emotions with your words, and with those words, you carry us to places only in your imagination... but when you withhold your words, we are plummeted onto the sharp rocks of reality... slowly we crawl upright; clutching at the cruel cliff we were hanging by, our minds battered and bloody, we plead, we shout, "PLEASE FINISH THIS! please...PLEASE!"

    i hope this finds you happy, healthy, and successful. i know it's been a long time but, if you would consider taking the time to complete this fic, your readers will be joyous, but anyone else who stumbles upon this in the future will also rejoice.
    if not we will all cry!

    i would love to see you start writing again... if there is anything i can do (twist your ar...) to persuade you to continue writing; anything i could do to assist you within my capabilities to help you toward that goal.

    thank you for the delightful journeys through your imagination.

    ginny
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  • From ANON - paula jean on September 26, 2006
    hey let me know when you will up date i realy want to know how this ends and if you need help on polt or story i'll help you this is one of the good one's
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 20, 2006
    Although the story is running along a bit slow for my tastes (I'm am the worst action whore you will ever meet), it is a great mystery and contains quite a bit of suspense, as well as some action, and wonderful literary special effects. It is also much better than many of the fics that are found on the site. I'm not saying that there aren't quite a few great authors here, but you are above average; and that is not only my opinion, but by the percentage rates that I keep up with. You should be proud. Don't give up on this fic. You are doing a great job and, if you are concerned, just know that you should not be disappointed at all by the number of reviews that you are receiving (I read your note).

    Why do I go to all of this trouble? Because seizures often interfere with my vocabulary and phrasing. I don't want to put out crap, so I have to have something with which to gauge my ability to keep readers happy with what I am producing.

    In other words, your success with this fic is nothing to scoff at. Don't give up. I have a bad memory and often lose track of the fics that I am reading. So, if you would, please email me when you update.

    Thanks,

    Snow
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  • From eternalshiva on September 01, 2006
    Thanks for the heads up and the great review, I plan on finishing the story, I just get unmotivated when no one reviews sometimes XD. I noticed a few months ago when AFF was having all the server troubles, alot of the wording in my story went weird like "power" would turn into porwepowe. I must a miss a few when I reviewed the chapters. I'll just upload the chapters from my beta >.> she went through all of them recently. Thanks for pointing out the problems still, I appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Maria on August 31, 2006
    Besides a few spelling mistakes, this fic is perfect! The right size in chapters and always with the opening and ending that makes you need to read more and see what's going on. I stayed up until 4 in the morning reading this fic and then again when I woke up, I just couldn't stop reading. I'm dying to know what happens with Inuyasha, though and how Kagome can deal with what's happend. I don't know what else to say except that you need to comtinue this fic and I'm sure that there's others that feel the same way... until your next chapter... ja ne ^^
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  • From ANON - InuKagome4 on August 27, 2006
    I have been following your story for I want to say over a year now. With the server switch, I lost this story for awhile but always remembered it. This is outstanding. Incredibly well written work. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2006
    wow... i must say this is quite an AU story.

    finish okay?
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  • From eternalshiva on January 05, 2006
    I'm not quite sure what you mean by exhausting >.> I try to give an exciting story that has depth in it, lots of characterisations, originally I only wanted 5-6 chapters in it but then found parts of the story interesting and decided to let it follow it's own course. The next chapter is going to start closing alot of lose ends in the story and wind it towards it's end.

    Thanks for the insight, I'll try to keep in mind what you said but if you could make it a bit cleare that wouls help also. I spend a lot of time and effort to give a great chapter and research alot of the details I put into it, so does my beta when she reads the chapters. I've often scrapped whole chapters because they weren't at the same standard as my other ones. I find also that alot of my chapters reflect what mood I'm in when I write them so maybe that's why they seem exhausting since my life is kinda exhausting lately ;p Thanks for the review!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    ok, i was quite fascinated by your story, and have been reading it straight for and hour or two, if not longer, and have wuite enjoyed it. it certainley is a new twist. i liked what you have done with sesh and rin, and i like the concealing spell, and i like that souta is older, and.....well, bassically everything. i really liked the line you had for the irn/sesh lemon "milking him for everything he was worth" THAT is a great line! i really dislike stories that go on and on, with some excitment, but bcause the author is trying to conceal what i is going to happen, it just keeps twisting itself around and around again. now i have no idea if you are rying to conceal what is ging to happen next, or not, and im not even saying htat your story is like that too much, but i think that it is like that enough, that i have been reading it, and am now tired of it. i cant wait to read more and cant wait to find out what happens, but im jst utterly exhausted of yur stry. now im not even sure if there is anything you can do about it, nor do i know if you would do anytihng about it, and im not saying you have to, or even that you should, im just voicing my opinion, because i can, and becaue i want to, but htat doesnt mean anything. i still really like your story. maybe i jsut need a break. yikes, i hope this review isn't all over the place. i mean well.
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  • From ANON - Lori on November 23, 2005
    Please update!!! This is turning out to be such a great story. I hope your muse is with you. Happy Turkey Day and I'll keep checking for updates =)
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 21, 2005
    Please Update this story has been second to none. Ciao~
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